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This starts out promising for a fluff addict. It's a trope we have seen a million times. A man or women can read minds and someone is in love with them. For about 13 or 14 chapters there is really not a lot to say, if you love fluff, you will love those chapters. Things progress, which can be rare in romance, even short ones. Yuna the FMC is, well, there's not much to her. She basically only exists to be in love. However, I am not positioning that as a negative since it's fluff. Then the fluff dies. The most annoying love triangle takes ... it's place. See, there's a girl who can also read minds just like our trusty MC and she's Yuna's best friend. So of course she falls in love with the MC because he's the bare minimum of a nice guy around her. All sounds fine so far. Annoying if you don't like love triangles, cliche, but fine.

The story dies here. It dies over and over and over. The first issue, and the big one. Not sure what the author is trying to get across with this love triangle. Yuna's best friend flat out says she doesn't want her feelings to go away, but she also won't confess. There's another guy who likes the best friend and he finds out and is all you have to tell him which is really weird. At this point in the story somehow people aren't really seeing her as negative but rather giving the lesson of you can't help who you fall in love with. So of course she tells Yuna. Yuna rightfully leaves angry, and then comes back remorseful.

I recapped that love triangle to detail just how poorly told the story is. Not one person has a reasonable reaction. Bad people and bad decisions exist fiction but they have to fit the story and the characters. Sadly this destroys basically every character as it's now just focused on sympathizing with her wanting her best friends boyfriend and everyone kind of enabling it.

I would recommend like 12-14 chapters, if you like fluff, they are basic but deliver. Sadly the story is pushed off a cliff. It doesn't fall, the author willingly and purposefully just pushed it to it's death.

Characters: no substance, but for fluff they are fine until they are utterly destroyed in like two chapters
Story: Fun and fluffy until it is utterly destroyed in like four chapters
Art: It's fine

this would be a solid 6 to 7 if the author shift awkwardly into everyone trying to make a potential homewrecker feel good. There's multiple chapters of the main couple not interacting much just so the best friend and her dumb feelings everyone is enabling can be front and center. pick a lane, if you want wild awkward love triangle with loose morals awesome, but establish those characters, don't just shift existing characters into it.