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Another villainess story with the premise of avoiding a death flag. However it seems the author forgets about this halfway through the series.

The story is inconsistent and irrational with her characters. It may seem like a fluffy slice-of-life at the start. But it becomes blindingly obvious that the author has no clear "plan" and just starts introducing all kinds of Deus Ex Machina characters to just tactlessly create conflicts.

I especially despise the later chapters where the author starts heavily favouring Ricardo, Britney's ex-fiance but gives him no character development. We are given a long and boring, plain arc of exposition and information dumps ... on us because the author failed at their job of world-building and went for the "Show, don't tell" approach.

The author decided we needed chapters of exposition where information is told plainly to the MC and then later she is surprised that everything that was told to her was true (no sh*t Sherlock). Long gone is the cute, fluffy, and humorous slice-of-life... welcome exposition dumps and a cast of shallow characters.

Mod Note: This review was initially posted for the one-shot, Nisekoi, and was subsequently merged into Koi no Kamisama.

This was the most well-written one-shot I had read at the time. It definitely got me interested in the main story and I still read it again time and time again. Anyways... xD I clearly don't know how to write a review :p

Kinda did this on a whim... but this a must read love-comedy :P

The main character, Ichijo, usually has a rude or direct way of speaking in front others and looks really unreliable. However, he can be very considerate of those around him and is always ... sticking into other people's business. Burdened with the pressure of being the next-in-line for the Yakuza, he is suddenly forced to act as a couple his the girl that kneed him in the face that very morning. Unfortunately for him, he has no choice, not unless he wants the city to be destroyed that is.

The sudden events that pop up time and time again are completely unexpected and original. Yet they do not feel rushed. It is well-paced and very interesting. There will be many laughs and 'Wow' moments.