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Jan 1, 2025
"The world of Patissier-san to Ojousan is kind, with no serious negative scenes. It's a story about characters who look onwards" - Author's afterword in Volume 2
Patissier-san to Ojousan starts as a fun gag romance manga, with simple 4-page chapters that show a handsome patissier who has developed an intense crush on one of his store's frequent customers, and yet his own shyness constantly renders him unable to ask for her name. Just when you start to fear the gag can't be stretched for much longer and the story will become repetitive, the formula changes into a much more standard romance story, with our
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two characters establishing conversation and growing closer by the visit.
Let's be clear from the start: This is by no means a profound, passionate romance story with characters who grow and develop alongside each other; instead, it's a fluffy will-they-wont-they whose appeal lies entirely in the main characters and their interactions. The titular "Patissier-san" and his adored "Headband-chan", as they get nicknamed through the series, are nothing but tooth-achingly adorable, and there wasn't a single chapter that didn't have me giddily hiding my face in my pillows.
The art is also very enjoyable. All the characters have simple designs, combining more classic manga body proportions with silly round faces (especially chibi-looking in the case of the FL) but making these elements harmonize with each other instead of clash. This sillier, standard 'manga' look for the characters contrasts with the realistic style in which the pastries are drawn, making them stand out and seem super appetizing!
That being said, the main flaw is that aside from Ryou (the ML's older brother and owner of the shop he works at), nothing is really ever done with the side characters. I understand that it's a limitation of the shorter format but I'd rather have little to no additional characters than have a decent sized cast and do nothing with most characters. This issue is particularly prominent in the last couple of chapters, with the introduction of a certain character in an attempt to add a bit of a classic 'we're ending soon so we gotta raise the stakes!' type finale, only for it to feel jammed in and not really go anywhere.
Still, I absolutely loved this manga and can't recommend it enough to anyone who's looking for a light, feel-good read!
Reviewer’s Rating: 8
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Feb 8, 2021
First of all, I will focus on all the good things The Promised Neverland has going for it, before focusing on the negative, and why it's impossible for me to lower the score under a 7/10 despite it probably being undeserved.
First of all, the themes touched in The Promised Neverland throughout the whole series are incredibly deep and interesting. We get subtly introduced to the eternal moral dilemma of whether humans are truly more deserving of life than the animals we eat through a gruesome psychological thriller that presents us a world in which humans are no longer the dominant species but instead part
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of the cattle. That main central theme is never abandoned in the development of the story, and sometimes even discussed among the characters themselves, with things like Emma questioning if it's truly fair to hate the demons when they only need to eat humans to survive. There's also the theme of what happiness is and how we can achieve it among pressuring circumstances which is extensively explored in TPN. I could talk for hours about the opposing philosophies of certain characters regarding this topic, but let's just keep it simple.
Speaking of characters, I think every single main character in TPN is extremely well done. None of them fall flat and they're very interesting to follow as you see how their view on the world evolves, and how much they change along the story. The one exception I can think of is the Goldy Pond crew (minus Yuugo), which, despite being enjoyable characters that you can very much grow to care for, none of them get truly fleshed out, which is indeed a bit disappointing.
Now, regarding the biggest point of controversy when it comes to TPN: its story. I absolutely loved the Escape Arc, and on itself it could be a solid 9/10. However, sadly the manga does nothing but slowly fall apart from that point onwards. A lot of people call the Goldy Pond Arc the best arc in the series, but I honestly could already see a few pacing issues starting. Nevertheless, despite these pacing issues weren't bad enough to heavily impact the story... until the final arc. Not only is the pacing in this arc unbelievably fast, but also there's a lot of suspiciously convenient moments that make the plot lose impact. The resolution of the entire series (spoiler: Lewis abolishing the farms) came out of nowhere and went against his previously established character in a way so sudden and brutal that it was nothing but disappointing. However, I will say the ending of the series (spoiler: the whole thing with the cattle children travelling to the human world) was very sweet and managed to make the mess of the final arc feel less bitter to me.
All in all, I am unable to punish TPN with a low score because I have a lot of appreciation for the earlier arcs of this manga, as I believe they present interesting ideas and do a proper level of analysis on heavy topics, as much as they can manage as a fictional story. It is true, however, that the ending of the series feels like a low blow and although it wasn't enough to hinder the love I had for everything already seen in the story, I can perfectly understand how it can heavily affect the enjoyment of others.
Reviewer’s Rating: 7
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Sep 21, 2019
I haven't seen any very in-depth review of this manga, so I might as well try. Also, I feel this needs to be said because I don't see it anywhere, but trigger warning for rape mentions, an implied rape scene and implied incest in this manga. There's a few minor spoilers, but they're very very minor. There's an spoiler-free final veredict which sums up everything I said though.
Story: 4
The story is Dolls Code's absolutely weakest point. Let's go over it for a bit: the story is about a group of highschool students who have committed crimes and are now captured inside an evil school
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where they have to solve a variety of "Saw"-like challenges; the one who collects the most points during these challenges will be the only one allowed to leave and the rest will be left to die, basically. They also need to identify the fake "puppet" student to make sure he isn't the one win.
It has a very interesting premise that's enough to lure anyone into at the very least checking it out, and the writing does a very good job in immersing the reader into the story and keeping you curious, but the serious flaws cannot be ignored. Firstly, the premise itself has no justification at all in the world of this manga, the intent behind the main villain shaping the school in this "Saw" dynamic is never explained, and in fact, the more the story progresses the more you begin to realize it doesn't make sense for him to proceed this way to achieve his objective! At the same time, it is not explained why the villain had any knowledge about these kids and their crimes without having connections to the police, and the list goes of inconsistencies on. Secondly, although I completely get that this is just a two-shot, I must say the pacing feels incredibly rushed. The manga goes from plot-event to plot-event, without leaving any time for the reader to breathe. At first, this is enjoyable as it allows to read the manga faster, but after a while it gets a bit annoying. Due to this fast pacing and the already plot-centric rather than character-centric focus this story has, every friendship bond formed between the characters feel forced.
Characters: 5
The characters are, for the most part, likeable. They all have their own set of traits distinguish them from the rest of the cast, which is a very positive point. However, they remain at this: just a handful of certain traits, mashed together in a mediocre attempt of giving them personalities. Everyone in this manga is just an archetype. We have the typical good-guy anime protagonist, the mischievous twins, the smart hacker, the shy shota and the happy-go-lucky bishie who flirts with everyone giving some homoerotic subtext. The only character that I found unique was the no-organs dude with trust issues. Each character is given a backstory that explains why they did what they did, and these actually do work and make the viewer feel sympathetic for them. But character development doesn't exist in this manga, even if it wants to make you believe it does. Allow me to explain: during the course of this 10 chapter manga, the attitudes and behaviors of the characters do indeed change... but its sudden and mainly "off-camera" (meaning that they act a certain way in a chapter, and the next one they're suddenly a different person). Despite being static, none of the characters are annoying and they're enough to carry the plot. I WILL say that I find it incredibly disturbing to add a rapist character to the mix, and try to make the viewer sympathetic of him as well, like, geez... I get everyone is a criminal but in the end they had a, if not justifiable, at the very least understandable reason for their crime, (even the guy who committed a murder did it in self defense after being threatened), except for the rapist guy (which is good, as rape is so far the only crime I know which I find t be never justifiable). The fact that he is shown as "redeemed" in the end without ever explictly regretting what he did is pretty messed up.
Art: 6
I will admit that the art is good in this manga. The character designs are indeed generic, but given that the other aspects of this manga is pretty mediocre, they do stand out. Since that this was serialized with the shoujo demographic in mind, all the characters have a pretty face. And in fact, they don't suffer from same-face syndrome, something very common in anime aimed towards a female audience, which is a point to its favor. The art can also appropiately create a darker and creepier mood when it is required. The background design is nothing special, but since this manga occurs with the interior of an school as the only setting it is understandable.
Enjoyment: 6
Given that this manga has a very simple story that you don't really need to wrap your head around, and that the characters are indeed likeable like I mentioned, the negative aspects of this manga didn't really bother me as I was reading it, and I only noticed them when I thought about afterwards from a more analytical point of view. It is enjoyable as long as one has the mentality of this being just a "reading it to kill time" type of manga.
Final veredict (spoiler free):
For a two-shot, it really feels like this manga was severely biting more than it could chew. The premise itself might be interesting, but the character development is non-existent, the story lacks depth, and the pacing feels completely rushed. However, it features decent art and you will find the character backstories sentimental enough to walk out having developed a bond with at the very least one of them. I am confident that this manga would have worked way better if its focus was not in the plot, which is weak from the very beginning as it is never explained to the audience, but in the characters, who had way more potential to be fully fleshed. Although not 'good' per se, this is a pretty harmless read as long as you approach it without above average expectations.
Reviewer’s Rating: 5
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