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The first chapter is one of the best first chapters I've ever read. It intrigued me so much that it kept me reading this... thing... all the way through.

Although the first chapter was a banger, Elijah Ballard was not. Elijah is so damn annoying and uninteresting that it ruins the experience. He has so much screen time—like 10 volumes of protagonism—and in those 10 volumes, almost NOTHING really happened. I'm only counting scenes involving Elijah; obviously, the story still develops with Propatria, Maya and the colloid, but at a really slow pace because we really need to show how a 15 year old kid and ... a 25 year old prostitute fuck, and we need to see how Elijah cums in his own face as a joke, and we really need to see that, we do.

A lot of explicit sex is shown (especially underage), when it's not needed. I find it a bit disturbing because it feels like it's just for fan service. There's even a fourth-wall break with a fan service joke about some female character stripping. The glorification of prostitution is also something I didn't like, but that's a lot more personal.

25% of the story was somewhat interesting, but the other 75% is just Elijah. I got really tired of him. The ending is fine, I guess, but the first chapter set my expectations so high that I don't think this manga delivered on them