Sep 1, 2024
Very good and mysterious story that takes a little while to build into. It gets extremely good once it gets going and that part of the story got me absolutely hooked, to the point where I couldn't stop reading. Then as if out of nowhere, the writing starts getting extremely sloppy using many MacGuffins and plot points start becoming extremely rushed and or repetitive. It almost feels like they stopped writing a story and started just making new chapters just to keep the story going this of course led to story contradictions that seemed to pop up constantly in the later chapters. The story got
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