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Dec 20, 2021
Preliminary (12/39 chp)
My main gripes with this story stem from the writing and the plot.
The art is very good, easily the best aspect. That being said let's address my problems with the plot and characters...

This series suffers from a lack of down time, a lot happens very quickly without giving me enough time to actual care about its characters. The main character is a generic nerd who most can relate to and understand, but little depth is given to him besides that. Meanwhile the Female MC is not fleshed out at all and is very obviously not as she seems. To the point the the main character ...


It’s time to ditch the text file.
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