It's way too rushed. The characters and plot had a lot of potential to expand and develop wonderfully, but was unfortunately not given the time.
It's only 3 volumes and races to get through the plot. Everything starts and finishes WAY too quickly and suddenly. There were several plot points that I was very interested in, but only lasted 2 pages. The characters weren't given the time properly develop and have story arcs. The reader is given no time to get to know and connect with the characters.The characters go through all motions of a character arc, but it's all within few pages and thus feels
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