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The further it goes the worse it gets unfortunately. The beginning of the Christmas bowl arc is ridiculously convoluted and repetitive. Jumping from field to field, different places and characters constantly -- this is to say it's a difficult read especially if your already starting to be burnt out over the repetitive random op character insert every fucking match.

Monta is unbearable, Sena is borderline unbearable. The powerups just don't seem very realistic? I don't know why but I just can't see Sena getting THAT much better. I think some character design changes over time would have drastically helped my immersion into the story. To second ... that, it really feels like constant non-stop bullshit, which gets unreadable. Once you get to 250+ you're basically skipping every "reaction to something" panel cause it's just mind-numbing at that point. Right before a match? Let's scout out the area and have a character building anime moment! We must do this every time before every opponent! We must have Suzuna and Mamori do nothing! They are confided to reacting and being sad for the male characters after some anime bullshit.

It's like who cares at some points. WOW! Better eye shield 21?? Holy for the 5th time Sena must overcome this and beat the so called eye shield! Like on top of Senas unrealistic power ups It just makes me want to skip chapters. If even the author doesn't care why the fuck should I. 1 LAST THING: I get it, they beat the standard, short players have value and are strong. BUT for this story, it doesn't work, at all. Sena and Monta in particular look, act and feel SO so weak and that's a problem I have with every character other than the core 3 of Deimon. I can't explain why this is honestly. I think its the paneling or design or even art style but its quite a glaring issue.

There's more to complain about but I like so much otherwise that it's not relevant. 8/10 Laid the groundwork for OPM.

Oh my God NO ONE CARES about your feelings dawg. Can these characters not just do their jobs? Can it not just be a manga about some dude writing interesting stories. Can we read some of the work he's written? Can we see drafts of his work? Is it really necessary to act like emotional toddlers with every character? Feelings this, love that, CAN YOU PLEASE GET A JOB OR A HOBBY HOLY. Can these HORNY bastards do anything but think about love. Why must Natsuo act like this. Can you not just say "stop" bro. It simply cannot be that hard. Just say no, ... moron.
2/10 never write again.