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TL;DR: It starts off well but gets annoying and pointless after the second half.

The first part of the work is good, seeing the two childhoods and origins of the main characters until the point where they meet becomes very interesting, seeing how Kouga's perfect sense of justice clashes with the difficult reality that Jin lived, seeing the disagreement of both until a friendship and partnership begins. Up to this point the work remains good and interesting, but it starts to go downhill from there.

After this, the story just gets messy, mainly because of the character named Seiji. The manipulation he does at first is mysterious ... and interesting, but it goes on until it becomes irritating and gets worse and worse. This character makes no sense and you won't understand it even at the end. Who he is, what side he's on, why he acts the way he does, no one knows and there's no way to know because it doesn't even make sense.

Another bad point in the story is the uninterrupted sequence of plot twists. Almost every character has their dark secret that makes them switch sides, act against expected or he was manipulating everyone all the time. Most of them don't make any sense and the reader doesn't get any clue about their actions, for me it's just a cheap and poorly done way to impress the reader, but when you stop and think, you realize that it's just bad writing.

The worst part of all is the ending. I can respect an author's choice not to deliver a happy ending or one that most of the audience expected by the author's own choice, as long as it is well written and makes sense, which is not the case here.

The actions that one of the characters takes at the end were very drastic and unforgivable. I could understand it due to the fact that he was being manipulated, but even after the control is lost, the character changes so much that he is not even the same person. There is no feeling of remorse or guilt. It seems that the whole story that happened between them never existed. Their actions from that point on completely change the course of the story to a terrible and bad written ending.

What I can praise about the work is the art, it is really well done, it really conveys the emotion of the events of the work, which I would have appreciated a lot if I wasn't frustrated with the story.

To conclude, I do not recommend this work, and even though it says that there could be a sequel on the last page, I wouldn't read it because there is no way to fix the poorly written story.

Obs: I don't speak english very well, so mostly is Google Translated