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Here's how a good idea can be misused.
Having read it when it was already finished I already started with low expectations, but I did not expect such an engaging start with such an interesting good opening. After the first chapter I could imagine a future with many chapters, large and interesting world building and many secrets to discover... But it did not happen.

Story 4/10
The story started well with a medieval fantasy world where cities are fortified as in attack on titan to protect themselves from monsters (which will be seen at most 3 times). Each city has a guardian and a witch to protect ... the walls, but there is a curse on each witch that will make them run away to find the cure.
Scrolling will always be too fast leaving you with very little of the previous chapter, except for the training arc which was fast but slow at the same time.
In addition to being full of time skips, the ending is both disappointing (although one could not expect anything else) and discreet, if only there had been hundreds of understandings before...

Art 5/10
The drawing and paneling are average, the character design of the characters is monotonous and very similar to others except for the witches.
The action, on the other hand, as well as being badly managed, is too simple and therefore unsatisfactory.

Character 3/10
The characters are practically anonymous and boring, including the third "protagonist" who at some point you forget even though superfluous. The inventor was on my cock right from the start, especially his training that lasts for three boring chapters is unnecessarily random.
The rivals are guardian and witch like the protagonist. Interesting the witches, minus the guardians except for the two best characters of the work with also a good story behind.
Ah and there is no antagonist as the protagonist uses friend no jutsu on rivals and the work ends with a huge time skip.

Enjoyment 5/10
The first chapter had me hype for those after, but it dropped immediately from the second. From then on it is a continuous ups and downs that made me read at times with speed or ease.

Overall 4/10
Light reading to read when you have nothing to do but which I would never recommend. At most you can read the first chapter to savor the bitterness of a nice opening used so badly.