Jul 18, 2022
Soushi Souai can be categorazied as a typical fluff romance between a prim delicate school girl and a delinquent. The majority of the chapters released from the start up till the 40+ were somehow enjoyable, but the story could've been written better. The reason being there are too many gaps between events that viewers will have a hard time comprehending what's happening, causing them to go back and reread some chapters, only to find that they didn't really miss anything.
in regards to the character writing, which greatly contributes to the story, the characters didn't really have a solid foundation/ establishment. For example, there is
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little to know about Wakamatsu's(mc delinquent) past as a delinquent. Though it seems that the author seeks to write about them properly some few chapters into the future, it feels as if they're only dragging it on.
on a side note: The author really has a habit of creating annoying situations without any conclusions such as Megumi(main heroine) having a kouhai (that doesn't really show respect to wakamatsu) try to court her. In this situation, she even calls the kouhai cute.
^^^^^^^^ this part may seem subjective and personal already but I really found those chapters leaving a bad afterstaste as well as some frustration, because it seemed as if Megumi had no respect towards her boyfriend regarding the boundaries that their relationship should have with outsiders.
Reviewer’s Rating: 5
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