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an anime that will win over the public that is looking for this type of story since it fulfills the objectives of the genre having as a hook romantic scenes with the appropriate tone to reach all audiences that are missing from this type of story of adult life if true we can agree that the plot is not the most ingenious maintaining a secret relationship at work but with the appropriate writing you can develop events, conflicts and character development that are not seen here because in the end this is another super happy story that nothing interesting happens just seeing adults behaving like ... teenagers and that everything they do goes well thus alienating the public that is looking for a story that has more drama, impact and seeing more consequences in the actions of the characters instead of everything being forgiven

it is stated to us that at work there are many gossips at work leading to misunderstandings but it is only said since we do not see any of the characters show these toxic attitudes nor do they know in the work environment that the plot raises is toxic until the relationship does not lead to work problems contradicting the premise of the plot until The secondary couple is more interesting than the main one since they are more in line with the premise of the story.

If I would only recommend this anime to newbies who want to watch romantic anime so they can later watch the best anime of the genre, I know that the author read many novels and mangas of the genre with crazy plot twists like Hayate no Gotoku!! but he forgot to learn the most important thing, develop the plot and present a conflict since we are told a lot but not everything happens that you can do with a plot of two boys who were forced to marry by their grandparents for selfish reasons and what the author chooses to present to the audience are ... only their fantasies of getting a girl easily skipping the steps of looking for her and having to start relating to her organically and having a harem in the process as if those things happened it is true that there are those arranged marriage dates but you still have to relate to her that does not happen easily and more as the personalities of the protagonists are presented to us

The author only puts a few topics in a superficial way we are told that there will be serious consequences with the marriage if they separate and that they will be watched but in the following chapters nothing important is mentioned with that the characters have a lot of freedom they can even have relationships with other people if they want, we are told that Houjou, Saito has an important dream that he wants to fulfill and nothing happens with that anymore, the interest with the cousin and the blonde is only there to make bad jokes and the harem,

Sakuramori, Akane is a flat character, we are told she wants to beat Houjou, Saito because he always puts her in second place but it is not important at all and the love conflict she has is not interesting either since she has been in love with him from minute one which leads us to the fact that the author does not know how to write characters in romantic stories tells us that Houjou, Shisei and Ishikura, Himari are equally or more in love with Houjou, Saito would not be happy playing house and still being friends with Sakuramori, Akane knowing the truth would be suffering and desperately trying everything possible to win the heart of the protagonist

As I said there is an interesting wasted story this could have been a story where they are forced to marry but Sakuramori, Akane is a lesbian loves Ishikura and Himari and Houjou, Saito wants his cousin they are hiding their relationships since they are being watched while Houjou, Saito is still looking for his father to beat his grandfather and free him from the engagement by winning the company or part of the money to fulfill his dream or create a plot where they are forced to marry but this is an opportunity that Sakuramori, Akane will take advantage of to finally beat Houjou, Saito taking the company knowing this Houjou, Saito will try everything possible with his cousin to break the engagement and that the company at least remains in the hands of the cousin to be able to have a relationship with the person he likes Ishikura, Himari and fulfill his dream

What I see is a romantic anime with writing from the period of the stories of the 2000s but grabbing all the bad clichés, the unnecessary love triangles, the bad ecchi comedy, superficial characters that do not help at all and a plot that is only held together by means of misunderstandings to lengthen the story since it would be solved in the third chapter and that should happen since the main characters could be explored more if that happened but no since the author wants to see us suffer with all the tropes that will occur to him before he considers that it is ... time for the climax of the romantic relationship to determine the story

In the main and secondary characters none saves the Kawai plot, Mona has nothing to develop, she has no real objectives, she only wants to please or fall in love with Kuroiwa, Medaka because she is the only one who does not show appreciation towards her since she, because of her beauty and that practically everyone falls at her feet, believes herself to be the queen bee, which seems to be interesting if something were developed with this subject but it is only shown to us at the level superficial and Kuroiwa, Medaka is only there to complete the jokes since the only thing we know about him is that he says he can't approach women because he's part of a temple, something that is only said but is not developed either, it is not known if that rule is real or it's all in his head, this Manga should have had more psychological overtones like that, I think the plot could tell something interesting since there are eight chapters out of twelve and nothing important has been shown

the animation is too basic, I think the studio wanted to save money because the number of sponsors is not, I think the budget is too low or they put a team of rookies in this project, tell me that horrendous attempt to put the Tiktok dance in the OP to see if it goes viral, all the models stop robberies without finishing

Here we have another attempt to turn the isekai genre around to continue exploiting the genre. We have already seen the broken characters, changing the protagonist's appearance into a creature or object and we have already seen the jobs of a restaurant, farm and seller.

This time we are being presented with a soft comedy playing with the protagonist's profession, resulting in a plot where we see a business administrator who was exploited at work until one day his luck came as he was summoned by the Demon King to manage his army and carry out negotiations with the other tribes. A fun first, with nice ... characters, the relationship he has with the demon is not boring, the animation is standard but is compensated with the character designs and there are no visual distortions, the soundtrack is good. This anime is sure to please the public who likes this type of stories.

The only bad thing I see is that the most important part of the plot, which would be the different negotiations and work that the protagonist will have, looks boring since they do not feel like they generate real political changes or in the war that the world presents to us. It's also true that the protagonist uses his work experience to complete the negotiations, but there is no difficulty or suspense. Everything he does goes well and there are no serious consequences when he makes a mistake, and you won't feel interested if it happens, since he fixes everything easily. Instead of seeing a development in the plot that entertains you and makes you worry about the characters, the viewer wants to stop watching the anime.

This latest work shows that the Geek Toys studio has a lot of potential that they are wasting. So many mangas have already finished and they don't have anime, they don't have bad ones, otherwise it's because the studios don't want to take the risk. Geek Toys should take advantage of those stories to be able to stand out and grow in the industry.
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Here we have an anime that those who started watching it can agree that it has a cliché but interesting premise with a beginning that catches you, but every time we get into this plot, we can lose interest since all conflict, action, suspense and development of the protagonist that can generate the plot is lost since we return to the same tropes: the protagonist gains all the divine powers, everything goes well for him and even a harem is formed that if the objectives of the characters were worked on more, it would be justified or improving the role of the only girl that ... works. Yuri

This plot can be saved with a few small changes: this is a fantasy world where there is the central tree that distributes and purifies mana better, a war is created to control the tree, there the one who had the advantage was the demon king since the central sister of the tree Echidna had joined his group because she had fallen in love with him, but before he won, a group of scholars was formed who were not part of any kingdom and defeated the demon king taking away part of his power but at a great price the tree was divided into different seeds that the scholars planted in several dungeons to protect them after several centuries the trees grew forming new magic cores, now in the present our protagonist appears who is an adventurer researcher who was on a mission in a dungeon but dies in an accident but his body falls into the tree of Yuri saves him with the help of Ursula when he wakes up he discovers that he now has part of the core helping him to live they become friends and help him train certain new powers that he grabbed because now he is forced to take the mission to recover the cores of the great tree that were lost when they separated to restore the balance of mana stopping the plans of Echidna who wants to make together with the demon king a new tree of evil energy and those of a kingdom that is creating stronger adventurers by getting one of the cores to get all the control of the continent thus also saving his own life the protagonist since the core that he has is withering if he does not restore the core he will die and will not recover his own heart

Here we have an isekai that mixes several concepts told in these types of stories such as the summoned heroes, the potion and magic item builder, the harem team, conflicts that must be resolved by the goddess and the typical guild missions giving a result to a decent story. What I like the most is that comic style that the author uses but we continue as always the same tropes that are boring the audience. The protagonist grabs statistics and power from anything he does, he obtains the materials easily, he does all the business without problems, the team is a harem, it is seen ... that no main character will die, the only useful team of adventurers is the protagonist's making the moments of action and suspense in the battles, the serious moments of the plot get lost in the plot and if any villain appears it would not matter because they would be easily defeated.

Here we have another anime where another boy meets an Elf and they enjoy the everyday moments of life but with an interesting twist. It's an isekai where you go to another world when you sleep. It's a breath of fresh air since we see the life of the couples between the two worlds. The elf is useful, she's not weak and doesn't have an annoying personality. The same with the protagonist, she doesn't bother, she has her abilities but she's not invincible. The moments on Earth don't bore and all the scenes are useful since the elf is learning about the human world at ... all times and the relationship between the protagonists is proactive, not slow.

Things that should be improved since these problems would bore the viewer, such as:

1-There should be more consequences and restrictions when the protagonist dies, since when he wakes up he is saved from death and doesn't receive any damage and that the human world has consequences with the magical world, since when they return to Earth it feels like the plot of the magical world is forgotten and it is only mentioned when the plot requires it.

2- It is true that the relationship is proactive but it is frustrating that the protagonist has not yet proposed to the elf to be a couple since the third chapter. They should already be dating. There is no point in delaying the situation. The guy is an adult, not a teenager who has not yet met girls. This thing about having adults acting like children damages the plot.

First of all, what I have to say is that because it has been repeated a lot, this is not House MD, this is just another mystery series, Sherlock Holmes disguised as doctors, it seems that the cases are solved with detective deductions, skipping the medical examinations necessary to discover the diseases, leaving the other doctors incapable in the eye of the viewer, since it seems that with the hospital they do not have the resources and intelligence to solve the cases. There is even a companion who plays Watson, but he is useless since he does not say anything useful to solve the case, ... he is only there to act as a shield because he knows martial arts.

The second case of the twins and the video would have been easily solved if all the medical and psychiatric examinations that psychiatric specialists do today with technology had been done, the specialist would ask to see the video, but if that happens, there is no case to solve. The only thing that the author seems to resort to is omitting information and making the other doctors look incapable, so that highlight the protagonist

another thing that doesn't make sense is that she leaves the hospital because that job with all the cases that come in every day wouldn't allow her to go out and be a detective even on her days off, she doesn't work for the police, the police don't even have a deal with the hospital, she does everything illegally and the excuse that the director of the hospital is her uncle doesn't help since he's against that, the logic of the plot would say that he would take away her license or fire her, that she should go to another hospital and that if he still let her work she should do her work hours, work in other areas like pediatrics or emergency until a case comes to her, that's why in the Manga Black JACK he's an underground doctor, that's how they justify that he can travel in the different cases, otherwise he would be in a hospital all the time

In the animation it was a serious mistake by the studio to release two chapters at the same time, the deficiencies of the animation for carrying out this decision can be seen from the first chapter, movements regudos, repeat scenes, move the camera to cover the characters and static backgrounds and despite the fact that in the other chapters the animation seems to improve, it is difficult for them to release the chapters

I see that the only public that will attract is those who really like mystery programs and those who are curious to see an anime about doctors since there are not many

The only thing we can see of Botsuraku Yotei no Kizoku dakedo, Hima Datta kara Mahou wo Kiwametemita all the horrors of modern writing of the isekai genres and fantasy world here there is nothing to tell because there is practically no plot we are only seeing the author's fantasies of being perfect in everything, that everyone respects him and having a harem, the Studio Deen studios, Marvy Jack earned their place in the top 5 losers of the season

This story could be saved with certain changes such as:

1- I would remove the recarnation and the story would only be a fantasy world where magic ... exists but it is difficult to use the magical energy it could take away your humanity only humans can use magic with grimoires to make pacts with magical creatures and magical artifacts and the cast of having a familiar would put more restrictions like A- if the master dies murdered they They will lose all the power that the master gave them and the memories with the master, this will also happen if the familiar dies, B- the familiar will only increase their attributes so that they can create their own abilities, they will only have three powers from the master and C- they will not be able to unseal the master and the master can only have four familiars.

2- the protagonist would be a boy from a noble family that is in decline since the only merit they have is that they sealed a dragon by winning their guild and his older brother joined an enemy kingdom to conquer the lands since there are new discoveries of guilds and pacts with creatures and the kingdoms with greater ambition want to conquer the kingdoms causing a new era of wars now our protagonist is so young he must learn magic to enlist in the army formed by adventurers defending his small kingdom so as not to be swept away by the enemies and it will not be an easy task since on the way he may lose his humanity

Another failure that positions the Asahi Production studio as one of the losers of the season bringing another Isekai with so many problems that they should fire those who gave the green light to this project and also fire those from the publisher who approved this light novel the only interesting thing is the ability of the protagonist but how the plot and characters develop does not work making the viewer hate the anime more

How would I fix this story:

1-characters:

Underwood, Light: his motivation would be to be the number one adventurer but it will not be easy since he obtains the ability to be a ... master of the fruit but discovers that he can eat more than one fruit of ability but he can only obtain that power for one day and only eat four fruits per day

Floria, Lena: it would remain the same

Lawrence, Ayla: I would change it for a boy and his detection ability can only see the abilities of the fruits if it is a person you will only see a color that will only indicate if it is an attack or defense if you want to know the name must be stronger or the bearer is weak

Bolst, Monica: I would change her for a boy, he would become the blacksmith of the group and he must make him a weapon that can withstand the power of Light and joins the group to clear his mother's name for making a weapon for someone who is considered an enemy of the kingdom

Belbury, Dratena: she would join the group when they defeat her to meet her on that dangerous mission they did for being considered traitors after Lena is removed from the group that formed the Holy Sister

The plot would be that after the protagonist obtains his ability and forms his group, they discover that there is a conspiracy to monopolize the fruits with strong abilities and on the way they find out that there are more fruit masters and one called himself the mission of eliminating the existence of all the fruits