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May 30, 2021
Uff, thats a tough one.
So starting off, art is really good imho ( 9/10 ) and this piece of art has some story inside. But the book itself is sometimes hazy, unclear.
First, should you read it or leave it?
My opinion is read it.
Its overall a great piece of work containing emotions, pleasant for eye art, and some characteristics. Since the mainstory is only 7 chapters long there is not much to talk about it. Going through different girls, MC forcing himself to have sex with different people to achieve his main goal, the joy of reunition, and an ending, which to some extent up to
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readers imagination.
Introducton:
Our main character has been transported back in time to the past. The past before the accident where his mother was killed and his sister sustained spinal cord injury (possibly Th12 up) which made her legs and deep pelvis area paralyzed. He is closed in a time loop during which he has to ejaculate inside vagina and chacge the time flow in order to not repeat the same day and get sent to the next "scene". If he hadnt do it, at the end of the day a crime/ unpleasant event would happen and he will be returned to the beginning.
SPOILER Ending!
End:
During those loops and sexual relations, he finds out that everything is connected to his mother and sister accident and the cause of this loop is his sister who by her willpower prevents time from flowing.
So after looping many times he confesses his love with his younger sister and gets back to the moment before his mother remarried with his [future] sisters father. And at that moment he stops mother from making that decision in order to prevent future from happening.
Few years later, after the [might-have been (?)] crash day he went to check his sisters house to ensure they are safe and good. At this very moment when they've seen each other they remembered through their strong relationship what have happened (even though, they met for the first time in this world). And at this point story ends. Is he going to marry one of them? Or maybe both? Its remaigning unknown :)
Have a nice day!
Reviewer’s Rating: 8
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May 11, 2021
This review will contain important for the story SPOILER. You read at your own risk.
Okey so here is the story.
1st of all art was good as expected of Mahiro Ootori.
2nd thing is the disparity with reality.
So lets just jump to one hell of a SPOILER!
No matter who, now matter how, if someone sets up a gangbang at you YOURE NOT FINE. So in reality it would go like that: she gots raped -> he calls the police -> evidence clear -> school temporaly closed -> students either are getting jailed (by Polish law 2 - 12 years prolonged for especially brutal act executed
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by group of people) or they will end in reformatory while the jail sentence/ arrest will be set on their parents. After that girl gets traumatized and goes for therapy. Some time later she is fine and all happy dandy.
Something along the lines like that.
BUT HOLD ON
"I dont feel any grudges against anyone" Thats so inhuman to say.
Sorry but this one thing made my jaw hit the ground.
I know, Its just a story written, its not real life, it didnt happen etc etc. But counting it in (that the world is not based on ours/ real one) it still lovered my enjoyment.
Story - 4
Art - 8
Characters - 3
Enjoyment - 2
Overall - 3 (cuz the enjoyment is most important factor am I right? )
So that's my review. Have a nice day and to Mahiro Ootori, I wish you many great works! Cheers!
Reviewer’s Rating: 3
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Apr 13, 2021
So first thing first.
This review will contain SPOILERS so this is just a warning.
Another harem and cuck of MC who gets NTRd.
Well in my short life, Ive read so many stories like that. Im not sure what gives anyone the idea of girl being submissive to rape and blackmailing. Its just like the story from library "fantasy" section.
Real life situation. Either she was fine with sleeping with this guy and thats okey, but what she says during the NTR scene and after to MC just doesnt hold. Same with MC, he is trying to look pure and excuse himself from cheating "well
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she cheated on me once" , "i was drunk" etc.
But real deal happens after in "Nerawa reta kyonyū Yui" when she gots raped in her bf room and blackmailed. Like cmon. In todays age there are very few cases when blackmailing of this sort works. Most of the times it looks like this: rape - trying to blackmail - she goes to police - jailed for 10-25 years. From psychiatric point of view. The only person who is enough submissive is the one who was born in such household and/or got a lot of trauma which result in shattering his/her self esteem.
So imho, complete fantasy, not worth to read, nor to think about it.
Have a nice day people and remember, you are beautifull human beings!
Reviewer’s Rating: 3
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Jul 25, 2020
What Can I say besides WHY ARE YOU CENSORING THE LINGERINE?!
So starting off I'm after episode 3 and main things I would like to point out are:
Pros:
- Art really fits ecchi style of the anime
- The idea of the story is interesting (but made poorly)
Cons:
- Style of censorship (many examples on how not to use censorship in anime)
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- Censoring panties and bra if they are being worn on someone? Really?
- Dreadfull characters
- Enemies are statues. During the fight they are standing in place and not moving at all even while being under attack. (its not a time to do a stand, you dont have your spiritual guard to fight for you)
- Many irrational decisions. If they are heroes then the world is ruined
I heard someone comparing it (before airing time) to Ishuzoku Reviewers. Like bro, If IR is the sun that shines the Ecchi genre then this is the rock which is 3 meters under the sea ground. No comparison.
Overall 3 or 4 out of 10 and would not fap to.
Cheers, and have a nice day
Reviewer’s Rating: 3
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May 16, 2020
So, all in all, I did like it, BUT up to one point, and yes, its the ending of Abstinence club.
I know some people are into NTR but ... why? It was so unnecessary and it did ruin the story for me and many other people around. Starting off there could be 2 ways:
1) Slut for everyone - she might have a boyfriend, fiancee or whatever and she would let everyone fuck her.
2) Teacher's slave - she wouldnt go into any relationship besides being teachers plaything, or a fuckbuddy with him (let's name it a lower grade of being under someones controll).
So yeah ...
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The ending was a pure fantasy for me, nobody expected, nobody asked, nobody needs.
3/10 cuz it has a great art and 2nd part was a lot more enjoyable.
Reviewer’s Rating: 3
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