Meh, main character was kind of an asshole with the whole rating women by numbers thing, and then gets saved by a cute girl at the end. Real cliche, real simple, was hoping for more from this premise, even if it's a one-shot.
Props for having a main character with facial hair, realistic. I liked his surprise egg collecting, that's an endearing trait, but not a saving grace for him. If he had been a bit more self-aware as a protagonist, and his necrophilia a bit more explored(it's kinda fucked, and that could contain both pleasure and guilt, great conflict potential), it would have been more
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