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The story starts off very well, although the theme is not new. Plot emerges around heroes and villains, valor and pledge to protect ones who dear to us. Although the author includes some mildly suggestive scenes between female characters, I expected that the plot will evolve into something more deep by the end of the manga. Unfortunately, it went to complete shit show after chapter 15, and all the girls start dating each other and have sex for no apparent reason. The pinnacle of it is one of the latest panels of the manga where Miyuki and Hikari make out and the author proclaims "every ... day is full of happiness <...> and for the first time we know what peace is like". This is what world peace is all about, right? Don't misunderstand me, I don't mind romantic developments or lesbians at all, but this look so out of place when they show bare tits right after serious part of the plot with suffering and death and so on. To me, it seems that the author didn't have enough time/chapters/money or whatever and was forced to crop the story considerably.

The art is very nice and clean, and the characters are likable, but the story looks like some major parts were removed which is very disappointing.