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The whole manga plays out as if it were a sweaty weeb's dream. One that he tries to make into a story while writing the plot solely on his bus ride to his retail job. I've never seen such a poor attempt at creating coherent plot. The manga randomly throws in characters who, aside from being attractive, are supposed to have very influential families and hidden agendas and goals of their own that they plan to use the MC to achieve. However none of these families are ever properly explained. All of the girls motives are given 3 lines of dialog to explain their entire ... backstory and we're immediately supposed to sympathize with them.

The MC is also extremely dull. He's supposed to use his intellect (he's good at chess... that's the only intelligent thing he has going for him) to outwit all these potential mistresses. He relates their actions to those of a chess game but the plot is so horrible, scattered, and unexplained its as if he had never played a board game in his life.

In short, there is no plot because it's incoherent and poorly explained. The characters are all incredibly 2D. The art is nice though.