Oct 6, 2018
"For revenge, there has to be a betrayal.
If there is no betrayal, then there is no revenge."
I have not write any review before but for someone to love reading, I thought I should write one for this novel and It won't be a good one. Before you start to read if you are younger than 24 years old than you may choose not to read this review because younger generations mostly have different perspectives and expectations so...
When I read synopsis, I believed this'd be a good found but I was wrong and here is my disappointment step by step...
Author:
Author seemed to be find an originality
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in a popular genre of our time "New World" by summoning/reincarnation and has worked on that but while reading the story, there was something shown itself to reader and it is that there is no plan for progress of the storyline. Story starts with the main idea and taking shape while writing goes on so there is no plans beforehand.
Story:
Main problem in my eyes is the story. From the synopsis I expect mind games, careful planning and laying traps (not physical) to lure disloyal or to be sure about loyal people (because it might change) but I only found pure,meaningless violence so there goes my hopes because of what I said at the beginning of this review.
World Structure (in place of art):
I do not feel like it is important to be original at this area. There are a lot of the same genre so it is an unavoidable situation to find similarities from different sources but as long as you continue to read, you will say "Hey, I know this place","I have been here" or "I saw this" and the cause for this is not just similarities from same genre, It is poor planning or none from the start.
Characters:
Second downfall of the story from my perspective. They stuck and yes it is stuck. Why? Because even with their situation they are just copy, paste characters that do not progress. Their ideas, obsessions and conversations are all repetitive. They do not have personalities that define themselves.
Enjoyment:
Only need one sentence; drops with time like falling from a cliff because of what I expect from the story.
Overall:
Only good part is the idea of revenge but how it is implemented or processed in the story, that is no good.
Reviewer’s Rating: 2
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