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*This review is based on the current work which is not finished*.
Generally stories don't have to be deep to be incredible, even the less pretensions it has the better, in the case of this work that seems to be the case when analyzing its development, however it has its strong points for those who enjoy fantasy stories.

Story:6.5/10

We must keep in mind that this is not going to be a retelling of life and therefore the main problem I find this work is not the fact that there are tropes in each panel, the flaw is the story that has been building throughout the chapters which ... changes tone throughout the chapters of a moment becomes very serious and deep and little des as we return to a comedy that is not so consistent with what was seen before. At one point the development of the MC can advance in his personal growth correctly but two chapters later his personality regresses, likewise the development with the other characters does not end up getting to something, the moments that serve as context for the story of the MC, much of the time do not end up fulfilling to understand the reason behind the traumas of this if not to continue giving more "mystery" to what surrounds him. Abusing this I think is one of the biggest sins of this work, it almost seems to want to be pretentious which conflicts with the simple humor of the work and generates a very unfavorable contrast.



As for the development of the plot, it is confusing that it seems that they do not agree on whether they want to develop a light style of plot or want to be serious. It is not necessarily necessary to choose between the two, but in this case the contrasts between the two styles feel too out of place and sometimes it is even annoying and you do not get to enjoy the work.

In order not to highlight only the bad, it is also good to highlight the fact that it is a fantasy with a not very "unique" development helps it to be tolerable and even to be enjoyed waiting anxiously for the day when the plot starts to connect all the personal relationships that the main character has been developing and that only that development will tell if it was worth or not to give this work a chance. So simple and predictable is even better for this work.

In spite of everything I think it is quite enjoyable and I would read it again without any problem because of the fantasia scenario and the characters that the story tells not all the work is confusing and the truth is a great job trying to explain how the MC tries to understand his existence in the world and his reason to live so I think it is worth to continue waiting for the development of the story.


Art:8.5 /10

The art design helps the work a lot, each character design is adorable and I think it goes very well with how it develops the places and characters. It could be a more polished work with some scenarios or moments however it is not something to complain about, in reference to the construction of the panels, there were some (very few) occasions that could be developed better and it seemed that some panels were skipped because of how they are made.

Conclusion: 6.5~7/10
The story is interesting but has many inconsistencies in its development that do not end up pleasing or fit with the style they try to present. It still remains to know the end of the work so to say that it is bad would be prejudiced and has much room for improvement with the outcome that may have, I certainly do not think it is a waste to give it a chance but I recommend not to go with high expectations with this work.

As there is still no review of this work, I would like to contribute something to whoever is interested in reading it. There are 80 episodes in which the story of Istina and her love for her favorite character is told.

Story 7.5~8/10
The character development is good and the story has a very interesting plot that I haven't seen in similar stories.

As for the characters, they are well defined, however there are things that for personal taste were very unfinished, and the negative point of this manhwa is that at one point it feels that its end was rushed and perfectly could have reached ... 100 chapters and would have been a more complete story. The denouement of the whole story occurs very abruptly considering how detailed it was at the beginning, on the other hand several issues that were touched at the beginning were not resolved and many others were simply eliminated in favor of the plot.

Considering the above, the work deserves recognition for making something interesting, different entertaining and above all for someone who likes romance without a lot of drama as you would expect from a Korean work it is very enjoyable and satisfying to read.

Art 8/10
I am not an artist and as long as the story is interesting, the art is an added factor for me, This work has beautiful art, well done characters and scenery, it can always be done better, but as far as I am concerned it was amazing.

Conclusion:
This story is good for the heart, maybe it could have given a better development than the story offered and give a more incredible experience, however that is so that the story would be better not to lower its rating. If you like romance and fantasy, it is a highly recommended story, if you are looking for excess drama, toxic relationships to the core and that trashy style, this is not for you.

I never write reviews, I prefer to keep my opinions to myself, however this work led me to want to give something of importance that was useful before starting with this story.

Like other reviews, I start by praising the author's original and well done story, especially the unique development of the story and the wonderful construction of characters that made me feel happy, angry and sad, making characters charismatic and so real is not something that anyone can achieve. I admire works that are so incredible that they make us feel emotions and be part of the story.

But as you can see this review is ... not a recommendation, after having lived each chapter with complete intrigue and a lot of emotion, I could not stand how the main weapon of the work was completely distorted. From the initial approach with which the work begins, it would be a 10/10 or 20/10. This makes it hard to say after 100 chapters, but it destroys a fundamental part of the character building that drew me to read the story. To say it in a way, I respect that the author has taken this course, however, there are 1000 works that I have avoided reading because the development is not to my liking or interest, and it is precisely this point that makes me reflect and pause or stop reading this series.


The author ends his work as he wants, I have no problem with that, what I did not expect is that the very course of the series itself would be another development in the middle of the story. To be more sincere, it's kind of a bad thing to criticize a work without knowing its ending, however, maybe I was disappointed for having expected more from a work that was on its way to being a masterpiece and my favorite.

To conclude, beyond the drama of the work, its development leads to context toxic relationships that were not evident at the beginning, as I mentioned, there are texts and stories for all audiences and tastes, I detest harems, love polygons and toxic relationships. Some of these themes entered this work halfway as important and relevant to the development of the story and managed to disappoint me and not want to read again. Also, the development of the characters is far from the initial proposal that were given in the introductions of the work and as it progresses the things that were done at the beginning.

I am grateful to have read this story but it is not something I want to finish.