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May 31, 2024
Well I want to preface this by saying the MC name is Ruck storage, yes you heard it right, his name is ruck from a rucksack and storage.
I mean with a title like "a brainless person carry a bag", i guess the author knows his audience who enjoys reading this story, a subtle hint right ? And good sign for what’s to come.
The plot, it's not plain lazy unoriginal writing, No, it's just insulting to your intelligence as a reader, I have never been offended by a story before but this take the cake.
From a comical evil party leader with your typical unoriginal revenge plot,
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with all the cliche you can expect of this genre of stories.
To nothing in this world making any sense and every situation that appears serves the purpose of just making the MC look good, even if it's a major plot hole.
Nothing that happens is related and it’s too fast paced, things happens just because at lightning speed, just for us to see how the MC becomes a god, that still has the same personality flaws as when he started I bet.
There is no character development whatsoever, and the side characters and I bet we will get plenty of those based on the first one, will be just eye candy with 0 personalities or any development.
When the author is that lazy and doesn't give an F to name the MC of the story what do you expect.
The art is middling at best or more like nothing to write home about and the only reason it gets a 2 rather than a 1. (Someone had to draw this catastrophe and they put effort into it).
So in end what is there to like about this story, I even tried to turn my brain off and read and I couldn’t with how bad it is, so I would never recommend reading it and for everyone to stay clear of it.
I bet it’s gonna be axed soon anyway right Japan ? Right ?? Who am I kidding we all know only the good interesting stories are the ones that get canceled.
Reviewer’s Rating: 2
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Apr 29, 2024
Suprize, surprize here we go again, it had high potential for a unique story but god was it ruined with the execuation and the fast pace.
The plot is shallow and full of holes, things happens because they just need to happen, randomness is the key of this story, they dont have to make sense and they dont need to, they just have to look cool, so many unjustified actions and so many random events.
The author really said lets just put every edgy thing together and make a story about it, surely that would make it cool right ?
Like for example you are a teacher and
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you have to put an exam, ok cool, well then lets add a math question and add a chemestry question and a couple of english questions, but wait that makes no sense why are you putting those things together ? what kind of exam is this ? idk it's an exam and exams need questions right ? but they should be seperate subjects or at least tell me why put them together ? NO.
This is how it feels like reading this story, why does anything happen, no justification is ever given, does any action in this manga make sense, no it doesnt.
Also the main plot is that she is an assassin after reincarnating now that kills just because, you ask me why she is one ? well idk because she was an assassin, does she need to ? no, then why ? because assassins are cool, shallow reasons with no motivation whatsoever, much like the most unfeeling character itself and if you think anything change or the character develops think again.
And lastly the dip into your generic unoriginal plot devices as if the unjustified randomness wasnt enough.
The art is average at best and when you combine the mediocre plot it becomes really hard to ever recommend this manga, it's one of those at best read if you literally have nothing else to read, to me personally it's just a brain rot and it's the author inderct way of insulting out intelligence.
Reviewer’s Rating: 3
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Apr 28, 2024
Well it's your typical, getting kicked out because you have a useless ability kind of story, i wont say it's ground breaking premise, but at least the plot and the story is acceptable, it made me want to read more and never insulted my inteligence, nothing happens just because it needs to happen, it felt like a story that had a begning and an end and it had a vision, a generic one but nonetheless it was unique in it's own right.
You got your usual tropes of a harem too and some people might hate that with an MC that is not the bravest of
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the bunch and he doesnt have broken abilities at least when fighting so also some people might hate that too but to me personally thats what makes a story at least intresting, no creature no matter what can be perfect and so should any MC in a story or it would pointless, and also makes the supporting characters like just extras that dont matter, at least this doesnt happen here and every character get their own story and has their goal to fulfill.
Generic comedy as far as it goes with the romcom harem element.
The art is pretty decent honeslty and shows a level of effort, which makes the main characters pop, but not the best when it comes to enemies, side characters or fighting scenes.
Now to address the elephant in the room, not many if any of these kind of mangas ever get a proper ending and we know how generally it tend to end, by being axed, especially when they are just 18 chps.
Well i am glad that at least it ended but it felt more like an axe and hopefully i am right, because it really felt like leaving so much to wonder about, like the ending didnt feel satisfying at all if it was a proper one, and i would have rated it a 5.5 honestly if i could.
I mean there was so much more left untold and it had hidden potential honestly compared to the trash that fills the isekai/fantasy genre, but i guess thats one of the best worst options that we get for a story like this.
All and all i would have recommened to read it but now due to how the end was unsatisfying, i only recommend to read it if you have nothing else to read, it's good enough that it isnt offensive with a decent story and has some level of entertainment to it.
Reviewer’s Rating: 6
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Apr 27, 2024
Well where do i start
let me preface this and say that at least the premise is intresting and somewhat fresh for an isekai nowadays that is and as such i gave it a 5, but the pace is too fast, fron the start something doesnt fit right and the plot feels off, things keep happening one after the other
The only thing i can think off is maybe the author was like "how do i make an Edgy MC and what is the most shocking thing ?" and just went ham without trying to connect or build the world.
The first chp should have happened in like
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5-10 chps, he should have built the world, built the hate, showed her being crazy or more like non caring, then start the her story.
Which brings me to another point, her being bored is not a the premise, it's just a fucking excuse to put any random scenario in, so we have same problem as usual with every low effort isekai, things happens just because they need to happen.
You know you can try to compare it to it's closest competitor Tanya but at least that story had world building, it had a decent plot, amazing fights, it was paced correctly, and Tanyas decisions as a character were logical, this story on the other hand is all over the place.
3 chps in and i dont recommend it, the only good thing is the art that is pretty decent and the only merit to this manga, nothing else is as good.
Reviewer’s Rating: 5
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Apr 4, 2024
Let me preface this by saying that personally i hate Moe, i really do hate it as a genre, because to me it adds nothing like blowing hot air or wasting time and it feels pointless and somewhat artificial to the point of being sickening and that is just my personal opinion.
BUT this one is different it was done right, it's wholesome and sweet, pure unadulterated emotions, that makes a grown man cry, there is a story and there is a purpose for everything and nothing feels out of place, it's easy to understand and feels realistic.
The art is great honestly it's cute when it
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needs to be and deep with some references too, like the use of allegory to express hidden feelings is an amazing addition.
There is also some wholesome educational elements sometimes simplified for like kids about sweets that shows some amount of research that have been put in.
All and all i would recommend reading it if you want to experience feelings from sadness to happiness to awe and feel alive.
Reviewer’s Rating: 9
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Apr 2, 2024
Well let me start by telling you this: it's your typical generic OP MC which can solve any problem with the power of deus ex machina plot armor, if you except something new well there isn't much unless you consider the somewhat reincarnation aspect novel.
This can carry you so much and as usual after 10 chp it runs out of steam quickly and things start happening just because, either to make the characters look cooler or because hey lets just do it.
The plot is average may i even say bland and it had potential at the start hence my interest and why i read up
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to chp 14 but no more, of course it haas some holes one of them is there is some time travel elements introduced later on but if you expect it to be realistic then think again. (you know about the butterfly effect which seems that this concept doesn't apply here or completely ignored).
That's only one of the problems i found and there is more but i cant remember all of them and that's exactly why my other point stands: it's boring, nothing is unique and nothing is new, if you've seen it once, you've seen it a thousand times, so why keep reading.
I started reading it because i had no other stuff to read and to a lesser degree the potential it had, this is in my opinion the only reason you would ever need to start reading this manga.
Lastly the art is average to slightly above average at best, i seen lots of mangas with way better art but i cant say they didn't put effort into this one
I wouldn't recommend reading this one if you are looking for something good to enjoy but if you want some fastfood read then enjoy this average to below average read, personally i dropped it and lost all interest in continuing to read this manga.
(personally i hate OP MC unless they are done the right way, no creature is perfect and we all have flaws and struggles and any character that is basically god with no struggle whatsoever in life is a boring existence that has no room for growth so why even bother following them).
Reviewer’s Rating: 5
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Mar 29, 2024
This Manga is a real hidden gem and honestly fun to read.
The plot is pretty decent, (at least it makes sense compared to other trash isekai/fantasy ones we keep getting nowadays) yeah it's nothing ground breaking but still interesting enough not to be boring without plot holes or excessive amount of plot armor, it's also sometimes enjoyable leaving you asking for more.
The Comedy is on point with enough excitement and it got a couple of chuckles out of me and that itself is a praise, since i seen a lot of comedy mangas/anime and they tend to be expected.
The Fanservice is decent not too much
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and not too little with just the perfect balanced amount.
Now the most praise worthy thing in it is the art which is amazing not the best thing that ever existed but it's pretty good and got a couple of wows from me and so are the fight scenes in it with the anatomically correct viscera yes surprise surprise in some scenes, which shows the effort taken in the drawings.
I would say it's the strongest point of this manga is the art followed by the comedy.
All and all for now (chp24) that is a highly recommended read from me and for anyone that likes isekai/fantasy settings, there is a lot of potential for this manga to be something ground breaking and amazing and i wouldn't be surprised if it would get adapted into an anime and i cant wait for it, to see those fight scenes one day.
I would give it an 8 or 8.5 (if i could)
Reviewer’s Rating: 8
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Mar 27, 2024
Absolute Trash horni fanservice plot with a generic unoriginal premises, you've seen it once you will see it again here.
Nothing make sense when you think about it and that's what you will have to do if you want to read this and try to not kill yourself, you will have to shut your brain off because things happen just because and you will have to accept that.
Also did i mention there is no plot, well there is plot alright and a lot of it in your face, you cant go a chp without having sex, or any sexual act.
Even the art is the generic kind
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you would expect from mangas that have no plot.
I would not recommend it if you are the kind that want something with an enjoyable plot, but at the very least you can read it and get furious/laugh at the absurdity of the author and how ridiculous everything is, but personally that pisses me off when things make no sense.
**SPOLIER**
if you even care or even call it a spoiler and i will say it in a funny way to sumerize my issue with only the start of this brainrot adventure.
A:"Surely you will love someone if you fuck them"
R:"well most of the time but not always"
R: "Why are we enslaving just the women ?"
A:" because no one wants to see a man get f... i mean women can be sex slaves and men cant, we cant be having gay soldiers"
R:"but does it always have to be sex tho ?"
A:"wdym NTR is the worse punishment one can have and so is rape, oh wow how gruesome this can be"
R:"um, no one explained why only otherworlders get to be experimented on and have abilities ? even tho you said everyone have a status screen, i mean if humans can summon other humans with zero ability and give them powers and skill, whats the point of all this then ?"
A:"you cant make an isekai without summoning ... i mean they need other people because they cant bad to their own people"
R:"why a katana? or a samurai ?"
A:" because a katana is the mightiest of all weapons with it's Japanese steel folded more than a 1000 times and a samurai is every young man dream and the definition of coolness"
R:"one last question, why so much sex ? like half the time they are fucking ? also one week to develop feelings only ?"
A:" you ask too many questions, sex sells ... i mean we need fan service or people will ... i am done answering your questions".
Reviewer’s Rating: 3
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Mar 21, 2024
Bold of you to assume there is a plot, i mean there is a plot if you know what i mean but that's about it.
- OP MC out of the get go that makes no mistakes: Check
- Horny and sex just because: Check
- cringy names of moves and characters that a 6 years old think it's cool: Check
- Zero explanation of what's going on and why things are happening: Check
- Your usual fantasy premise with magic and sword: Check
- Slaves and women with big boobs and different races: Check
Well i bet there is more unoriginal generic stereotypes added in this manga but honestly i couldn't
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get beyond the first chp and i generally follow the 3 chp rule, when my intelligence is insulted to this level i refuse to give it the benefit of the doubt.
I like to say it's mid, but honestly it's an insult to say even that with the amount of cringe in it and i have read a lot of isekai/fantasy mangas don't get me wrong, the cherry on top is the unlikable MC that seems to be cringy and degenerate just because, even redo healer had a reason for what he did and that was shitty (granted i only read 1 chp but i see no justifiable reason for his actions no matter what).
This is how you should never make an MC or plot kinda deal manga, but if you literally have nothing else to read and you want to consume trash you can read this.
The only saving grace that didn't make me give it a 1 was the art which is passable (nothing to write home about) and someone had to sit down and draw this.
Reviewer’s Rating: 2
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