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The jokes are bad, the characters have no reason to love the "protagonist", the world doesn't even try to stand out from the others in the genre, maybe trying to become a parody, but everything is so badly-written, the art is a caricature, so I understand why it is bad. There is so much repetition in the conversations so much about "he is so handsome". The real main character appears so much in the story of the "protagonist" that all the encounters with "the male leads" being in the same place and doing the same things don't make any sense. I didn't read much, but ... it is so boring that I can't keep going, even though I really like the genre. I understand that this is a parody, a commedy, but it is not funny at all. This was the fastest drop in the genre, for everything I've read so far. Truly bad.

The story starts quite nice, but there is no development in the plot till the chapter 80. The characters are nice, and the designs are okay, but the art really isn't good. I'm not saying that the art is ugly, but this is an action manhwa, so you SHOULD be able to distinguish the ATTACKS that the characters are making, but every attack is just a line. You can't follow the fights or understand what is happening with the drawings, you only know the direction it is taking when someone watching comments "he is overpowering her" or "wow, what was that?", and stuff like that. ... You can't see for yourself, the plot repeats itself a million times, problems are solved before they could ecen become a problem. MINOR SPOILER AHEAD: "MC is 'sleeping' for five years and no one knows when he will wake up, and he is secretly training while asleep to become the most powerful person ever. Meanwhile, during five years, his sister was developing a necklace that will make him 'IMMUNE' to poison, as if she knows that he will become the most powerful person ever and poison will be the only way for his enemies to deal with him".

Mehhhhhhhhhhhh. It starts good, very good actually, and it quickly becomes 100% generic. Not bad, just generic. Read something else.

It's a very different story than we are used to reading. The characters are very well written, the story makes sense and I surely like it overall. But the pacing is very, very slow. I agree that it makes every development more satisfying when they actually happen, but they are still very very slowly moving. I thought the pace would fasten when she actually remarried (is it a spoiler when it's in the title?) but it didn't.
It's good, but could be better. I suggest that anyone interested wait till more chapters are released, maybe till the 300th and read it all at once. It's ... worth binge-reading, but I don't know if it's worth to read only a slow development each week.

This review contains spoilers on the first ten chapters. This manhwa makes no sense at all. The dude is a super gamer, he is good enough to play at 6 or 7 games at the same time, and still, he isn't smart, perceptive or anything that would be necessary to do so.
He is a super gamer, specialized on RPGs, and his life becomes a RPG game. He is OP, but his statuses are locked and need to be unlocked by keys, until then, every status is 1. He receives a key to unlock his MAX LEVEL statuses, and what does he decide to unlock? ... 1000 attack? 1000 defense? 1000 agility? 100000 health points? NO, THE FUCKING GENIUS SUPER GAMER DECIDES TO UNLOCK HIS 200 MANA POINTS, HAVING ONLY ONE SKILL, THAT COSTS 120 MP TO CAST. REMEBER, HE IS A GENIUS GAMER. FUCK THIS SHIT, TOTAL TRASH.

I don't feel anything reading this one. It is neither good or bad. The characters are ok, only ok, they make sense, but you don't understand any of them deeply besides the mc. The art is okay, only okay, it is somewhat good, but very confusing at times. The world building is good enough, but is not awesome. I don't like anyone, and I don't hate anyone. The story is interesting enough to keep you going, but not good enough to make you in awe. If you don't have anything else to do, read it. Otherwise, I wouldn't recommend it. I didn't laugh, cry, yell, ... get anxious, sad or excited a single time in almost 100 chapters. Completely mehhh

This manhwa tries very hard to make you laugh. In 62 chapters, I think I laughed twice. Its comedy really is bad.
I still don't care about the mc to this point, he looks like an worse version of Lloid-sama, he isn't that likable, his motivations aren't that clear, he is really fickle, he changes his mind all the time, he promises the world and a second later, decides to run away. In Greatest Estate Developer, this is not bad at all because the comedy is really strong, and the mc has really stable motivations. Here, the mc goals change all the time, he truly looks ... like a boy playing a videogame and going true the storyline and its quests for the first time, there is not strategy, preparation for the future or anything like that. The story doesn't completely suck, the world is actually a little interesting, but the flaws are actually so big that it's impossible to ignore. If they tried less to make you laugh, at least the story would progress faster, but they interrupt the story all the time to make bad jokes. Oh, and the world is a good integration between generic Solo Leveling world and generic Chinese Martial Arts world, with the "system" and the "qi, pills, qi kingdoms, techniques, etc), it is very well integrated, but it is still very generic.
The story is not bad per se, but not good as well. If I hadn't started already, I wouldn't start reading it, but since I did, I think I will keep reading.
6,3/10

I enjoyed every minute that I spent reading this manhwa. It really is very good. The relationships and the character development are the main focus of this series. The world building is very beliavable, and makes a lot of sense. The characters are very, very likable, and the story is very lighthearted. Some scenes are very cute, others made laugh out loud, others made me really excited, and the emotional payback for some fights are very well build as well.
The problem with this manhwa is its writing. There are many recycled story structures, and they repeat in streak. From now on, there will be ... light spoilers to the review:
At the start, the story recycled is: criminal gets in town, kidnaps mc's friend, mc and other friends fight to save him. This happens two or three times.
Then, there is a streak of academy 'championships'. First it is the Korean Academy, then the world academy. When this ends, the mc goes to the Villain Championship.
There was a cat in the start, and it made a lot of sense: Kayden.
Then, another cat joined the story, Kartein, but it doesn't make much sense. (Even though I really like the character)
And now, a dog suddenly appeared, out of nowhere (and I'm also liking the character).
The story is interesting, I really liked it. I really loved the characters, and it looks like the ending of the series is going to be good (I can't possibly know for sure now, since it looks like there will be maybe 200 more chapters), but the repetition of the story really kills a little bit of the pleasure.
8/10.

This os one of the best "things" I ever seen in my whole life.
I started reading a lot of books, watching movies, series, animes, dramas, etc when I was around 13 years old. I probably watched more than 800 animes until now (many of them I don't have the patience to add to my list, not because of quality, just patience) But I really have to say, if this story ends at the same standard it has been going until now, this will be my favorite "thing" ever.

This story doesn't have superpowers, nobody is able to fly or has super strenght, the ... clichés end on the starting plot, the story is carefully constructed to be EXTREMELY realistic, given its premises, people don't simply love her, everything she has and everyone around her must be conquered, earned, and things are not simply given to her. Deus ex machina resolutions are not around, as well as Mary Sues. Everything just makes sense.

About the story, it is about a woman who dies and gets back to its childhood, to make things different. We all have seen this before, but this one it executed masterfully. Florentia is a seven years old girl that, even without knowing the future events, would still be a complete genius. She is a master schemer, who understands perfectly the limitations of a 7 years old girl, but can't afford to wait for things to unravel while she grows up. She has to intervene, but she is only a little girl. So what does she do? She masterfully directs other people to do the things that need to be done. She makes the right choices, present them to other people, make them do the right thing and, at the same time, pretends to be only a normal girl, who likes flowers and candy and wants to play with her grandfather and father.

The art is gorgeous, the characters are extremely likeable, and even her opponents are very well constructed and believable. The story is very thrilling, there are no extreme simplifications that are against the laws of politics or economics and the romance... Oh, the romance is one of the most cutest things I ever saw in my life.

The only critic I could ACCEPT hearing from someone is "I don't like the themes of the story, politcs is not my thing" or something like that. I'm sorry, but everyone who says this deserves LESS THAN A 10, just simply has bad taste.
IF YOU DON'T LOVE IT, THE PROBLEM IS ON YOU. I SAID IT.