Apr 26, 2010
All these stories are very sweet. A little bit awkward and the art might not be top notch, but it's all very fitting and it gives your heart a happy feeling.
The first story, "10 Days" is kind of funky. This love story doesn't really focus on their potential relationship and it all feels rather short, but it's an "awe" kind of thing. I didn't really get how she came to the conclusion that she did, since I'm not sure how she got over her ex in that moment. But anyways, I thought the ending was very cute.
The second story, "There is No Logic to Love!"
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feels awfully quick and I wished there was more development. She can't get over her ex and is meet by a surprise love. I did think that this particular chapter had very cute characters, especially her ex-boyfriend.
The third story, "Happy Happy Letter" was my favorite out of the collection. The character's faces were oddly round (Chief was very darling). Overall, the plot was cute and it fit the course of a one-shot. It didn't feel like anything was left out. There was a clear beginning, middle and end. But that doesn't mean I wanted it to be over! It seemed like a very condensed version of Ouran High Host Club.
The fourth story, "The Prince's Maid" was okay in parts but the art bothered me. The faces were rather scrunched up. There was a part that was cute but the rest just seemed rather dull to me. Everything was predictable, to say the least.
The fifth story, "An Adult's Love/Child's Affair" was odd. The art was alright and so was the enjoyment value. I do question all of the characters' as they were not very realistic in their judgment and reasons for loving at all. It seems like something would regret later down the road and the guy was pretty much a pedophile. Maybe if there was a bit more character and plot development I could root them on, but as is, it didn't seem very reasonable.
The last story, "My Sweet Honey" was fair, nothing horrible but nothing great. I felt like the story was missing many details that were essential. It was a typical popular-boy-hides-behind-girl,girl-always-loved-him, boy-falls-for-girl story. There was nothing that embellished the story to make it it's own... Except for the waffles.
Reviewer’s Rating: 7
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