The storytelling in the first 3 chapters sucks ass. There's zero subtlety and the dialogue is embarrassing. It's insulting to the reader's intellect. That wouldn't be an issue if this was a romance comedy- oh, it is. Ok, that's surprising. Nothing remotely funny happened so far.
Anyhow, the main issue probably comes from the fact that this manga tries to be deep. "Show, don't tell" is clearly a foreign concept for the author. The scenarios and (moral) messages are predictable. The premise had (some) potential but it was done blandly. The art style is nice, nothing special.
I'll still finish this, who knows maybe it gets
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