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The first chapter is a a real twist then after that it becomes fairly predictable what the MC will do, the main problem with the story so far is that we have no vested interest in the MC aside from the fact of her mysterious orders to kill the talented the MC is portrayed as completely unlikable and with no redeeming traits side from being clever were given no motivation for there actions side from looming have for this talented people called enemies of humanity it like minority report without the psychic people to tell them there going to commit a crime though there might ... be some hidden in the organization she works for don't know yet.