Jul 22, 2021
The way the story progresses doesn't feel like a natural flow at all. It feels very disjointed and confused. The art style has its moments but more often than not it ends up looking awkward and silly or creepy. Take the second page of Vol. 1 for instance, after killing a fly with a magnifying glass the expression she makes is so ridiculously exaggerated. There is no flow of time to the story at all either. Often times I find myself confused as to how much time has passed because one of the characters has a different outfit in every scene and even a
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