Nov 23, 2024
Really bad.
The martial arts were not very well researched, the tone was all over the place, the pacing was off, and the characters just change on a dime for no reason.
The main character randomly stops being the main character at points and the motivation of his missing sister just gets forgotten about for long stretches of time until the writer needs to remind you what the main character's motivations or if there needs to be a contrived reason for him to get angry and power up mid fight or whatever. there's never a good explanation of how the fuck Maria could possibly help
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find his sister anyway, the main character never even presses her about it or asks for any evidence
The story isn't grounded at all. It goes from real fighting techniques to insane made up bullshit on the fly.
The story also totally loses focus and goes off on a million b plots that I had zero reason to care about so they felt like a total slog to get through. The same can be said of the tone. It cant seem to decide on what it wants to be, sometimes it feels like it wants to be kengan, or Shamo and other times it feels like it wants to be my hero academia.
It just ended up being an exhausting, annoying mess that I pushed myself to read through.
Dont waste your time on this one.
Reviewer’s Rating: 2
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