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Aug 26, 2021
Preliminary (18/? chp)
If I was to describe this novel in a single word, it would be 'amateur'. The premise is interesting but the execution leaves much to be desired. I'll outline my problems with it using minor spoilers for a better reading experience.

Let's go through the problems starting with my biggest one. The author constantly breaks the 4th wall for absolutely no reason. A scene will be unfolding with characters engaging in a conversation and the author will suddenly interrupt it saying "Let me explain some background for what is being talked about" like he is talking to a child, then the author talks for the next ...


It’s time to ditch the text file.
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