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This is Hentai with an actual plot.

That's it, that's all you need to know.

The story is quite predictable, though it has its twist and emotionnal moments. Not everything is made for the sake of convenience, as there are things at stakes. What might turn you off are the reasoning behind the MC's actions sometimes. One moment he might be concerned and sympathic, the next... Welp... breeding time.

The art isn't groundbreaking. Satisfying you coud say, but not much else.

The characters... Cliches will be cliches. Every single character has the same reaction to the MC's "magic touch", which make their traits seem superflous (save the more exotic ... ones). The MC is the main focus most of the time, but he doesn't seem to evolve a lot. He grows determined sure, but it's not like he learns lessons or anything.

Enjoyement. Depends on the type of person you are.

Art : 5/10
Story : 3/10
Character : 3/10
Enjoyment : 2/10
Overall : 3/10

Just from the first pages, anyone with experience with Isekai story will want to throw it away.

NOTHING makes the protagonist stand out, I almost mistook him for about 3 other fantasy stories.
NOTHING that happens to him feels natural and coherent, everything is for the sake of: "Oh look at the cool things that happen! Look how nice he is!".
... NOTHING makes me feel attached to anything this world gives off.

The only thing with a semblance of originality is the disdain given to the protagonist. And even this is becoming something we are getting used to in other stories.

The early encounter, the reveal of his abilities, the reactions of the hero... All of those are brought up in the most cringy, pathetic, predictable way.

Keep away from this uninspired mess.

Edit:
I tried to revisit it years later after trying the novel. Despite an interesting twist down the line, it's still boring, cringe and dull and I care just as little now than I did back then. They really are banking it all on the mild loli fanservice (I've seen way worse and know better now) and the power fantasy aspects. I'm lowering the rating of artstyle to 5 instead of 6. Still ovverrated and I fail to understand how it got popular. Probably the web aspect to it.

The entry into this little wish fulfilling story is, well, uninspired.

Everything is easily accepted and not enough room is given to suspend our disbelief, and our boredom towards the events. It feels like a glimmering ball of presents for young minds searching for arousal. Not very flattering, and thus, annoying.

And some honorable people will feel disgusted by the clear deviancy incited here.

Having a perverted and nasty character is nice to see once in a while, it makes us wish to see him caught and punished.
His reactions to the new system that rules his life are, sadly, badly written and predictable in a bad way.

The twists ... in the story are nice, but if it asks you; "wait! it gets better soon.", then there is still work to be done.

You have to grit your teeth a bit, and then maybe you'll appreciate this new take on the "game system affects real life" wave ths piece of work tries to ride on.

The decent artstyle helps a lot.

Let's hope the story gets more appealing, and that the characters have some actual depth, instead of being stereotypical nutjobs.