Jan 13, 2021
Never did I expect this to be so bad. From how well scored it is , it shows that as long as your work is "pretty" and every page has a forced "feel good" moment then you can get away with absolutely everything. This is low effort chinese mahua tier bad where things just "happen".
The plot is all over the place. It starts off good but then its just literally random events happening with no explanations. Characters repeatedly coincidentally meeting each other even though its a big world. It's bad. How bad? The main villain just walking by the protagonist on the side of the
...
road even though he's nobility and them just meeting each other and starting to fight.
The protagonist has no character apart from being a pervert. For real. In all of his character development apart from him turning from OP to even more OP the protagonist hasn't changed a bit. Even the side characters are better.
The protagonist despite being good at magic , never really learns more than 1-2 spells and there's no reason for him to not learn more. He just... doesn't so we're repeatedly shown the same spells.
I'm trying to think about something positive about this manga but there really isn't. The world being a fantasy world was nice at first and so was the starting few chapters of the manga where things were progressing smoothly until the story just decided to jump off a cliff and from there on kept going downhill.
Everything is FORCED. Feel good moments are shoved into every chapter's end and as every conversation's punchline which gives this feeling of "oh wholesome" until you realize its being done this way to hide the glaring flaws of the manga having a terrible plot , terrible male version of mary sue protagonist and events that just "happen" with 0 build up. The girls also just throw themselves on the protagonist whose only personality is being a pervert. The years also just fly by like they are months and the bonding between the characters that have supposedly spent years together is no more than have spending a few days or months together.
The writing is terrible. It is alarmingly the clear that the writer DOES NOT have a story planned. He is writing this on the fly and is introducing things as he sees fit with many plot elements seemingly "borrowed" from popular mainstream mangas. This is peak isekai trash. Do not read this. The fact that this rating of this manga and its LN is so high disgusts me.
Also , the protagonist when talking to himself in his mind is also drawn as an "ugly bastard" right out of a hentai. :Vomit:
Reviewer’s Rating: 2
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