Dungeon ni Deai wo Motomeru no wa Machigatteiru Darou ka Gaiden: Sword Oratoria
Is It Wrong to Try to Pick Up Girls in a Dungeon? On the Side: Sword Oratoria

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I'm a huge fan of the original DanMachi series, but for some reason I held off on reading the spin-off books for a while. I wasn't sure how a DanMachi series could work without Bell as the focus - especially given how aloof a character Aiz can be. But I finally took the plunge and ripped through six novels in a short period - so this review is based on the first six novels in the story.

This series felt like a bit of a gimmick at first - we'd just see the same story but through Aiz's eyes instead of Bell's. That's how it was ... marketed, anyway. Turns out there's a ton going on with some newish characters (most notably Lefiya), and Bell just pops up here or there as a minor plot contrivance - mostly just to keep us aware of where we are in the series' timeline.

The major flaw with the series is that - as I worried - Aiz isn't very emotive. She's quiet and doesn't say much and despite her incredible coolness in battle, she's kind of boring. So the author tries to supplement Aiz's quieter nature by giving Lefiya a major role in the series. Except that Lefiya comes off as a bit of a strange character herself - she's obsessed with Aiz, jealous of Bell, and has a lot of her own self-esteem issues. So the character front is really where this series loses a few points. The main protagonists just aren't that interesting (at least through five volumes). What does help is that characters that were very minor in the original DanMachi play bigger roles as supporting characters here - I especially like Finn and Riveria (and series favourites like Hermes and Asfi are around a bit). Bete and Loki were two characters I really didn't like in the original DanMachi, because we're seeing them largely from Bell's and Hestia's perspectives, and there's a rivalry there. But Bete and Loki really grew on me in Sword Oratoria when viewed from the prism of their own familia.

Also, it should be noted that the sixth volume focuses very heavily on Tione and Tiona, and it does a wonderful job with their backstory. I had always viewed them as two write-off comic relief sidekicks prior to Sword Oratoria (the lovestruck Tione and the air headed Tiona). But Volume Six really pulled me into their story.

Sword Oratoria follows a pretty linear story through five volumes, with the Loki Familia tracking down the mysterious viola monsters that are wreaking havoc in the dungeon. It's pretty much one big, long mystery that dominates the story through five volumes (and into the sixth). There are some epic moments through those five volumes, but it gets a little tiresome just fighting the same monsters/villains over and over.

Overall, Sword Oratoria doesn't quite reach the heights of the original DanMachi series. I would have given it a 7/10 through five volumes. But I was really blown away by Volume Six, so I bumped the overall score up to an 8. If the author can keep cranking up the intensity, the way he has with the main series, I can easily see this score growing higher (I think Volume Six of the original DanMachi was the same point where I went from thinking it was a pretty good series to thinking it was a great series).

Omori has crafted a beautiful story and a great world in the main series of Danmachi, so you might ask yourself: "Is this spin-off truly worth reading?" In my humble opinion, yes.

The cast - You already know them from the story. Bete, Aiz, Finn, Tiona, Tione and many others, but the main story is all about Bell. These spin-off volumes belong entirely to these beautiful characters and allow them to shine brightly in their own right, shining light on their past and their present, away from the cameras of the main series and allow us to see them though eyes that are not Bell's, ... showing us an entirely different side of Omori's world, one much less glamorous and darker, but not any less heroic, than the main cast's. The standout character is probably Lefiya, who takes center stage for much of the later volumes.

The world - Orario in the main Danmachi series already stands out as a very well thought out world and in Sword Oratoria we revisit parts Bell's main story never had a chance to touch and we get introduce to a whole new host of background lore, ranging from minutiae only an aficionado would care about to very pertinent topics that explain the behavior of an entire race. Ever wondered why the amazons are so quick to violence? Read volume 6.

The story - The story intertwines and dances around the main plot of the main Danmachi series, and in some cases bringing the beloved main cast into actions that the main series do not cover. The first volumes follow the plot of Danmachi fairly closely, but they soon part ways and Sword Oratoria becomes a stand-alone arc of epic proportions, culminating in Volume 12.

As english is not my native language nor was I ever properly schooled in it I will refrain from commenting on the writing quality in detail, but as an avid reader with several hundred light novels under my belt, I daresay that Omori's works stand a cut above your average light novel.