The one-shot “.traeH” is a messy cliche. There is no conclusive ending for this particular one-shot, and instead the reader is expected to drag up the sequel one-shot called “Past Heaven” to hopefully have some resolution. Is digging up the one-shot even worth picking up with how messy the first ended up such a mess? Even the art work really doesn't make up for the poorly constructed plot and two dimensional characterization which ends up grating on ones nerves.
Ayumu's behavior is honestly creepy. I'm not talking about how she's interested in girls, but how she comes across as a creepy stalker. On the positive side
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Alternative TitlesJapanese: .traeH InformationType: One-shot
Volumes: Unknown
Chapters: 1
Status: Finished
Published: Oct 17, 2008
Theme:
School
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Comic Yuri Hime Authors:
Hanatsu, Yaya (Story & Art) Statistics Ranked: #197002 2 based on the top manga page. Please note that 'R18+' titles are excluded. Popularity: #10314
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Your Feelings Categories May 18, 2015
First of all, this review may contain spoilers (as this is a One Shot it's quite difficult not to spoil anything), so please read at your own risk. That is all.
This is a really touching story of a girl with a rough past. This girl's name is Yukishiro or for short, Yuu. As both her parents abandoned her when she was young, she put a lock on her heart, so that she would never love someone again. Now, her grandfather is taking care of her. Beside his son and his son's wife, he truly loves Yuu from the bottom of his heart and wishes for ... Oct 30, 2020
What a mess, here we go:
Story: 2/10 I will keep this short because most of the story's problems lie with their characters: What a cliche and underdeveloped story. Poor girl got abused in her childhood and is now shy, oh, here is a random popular girl that likes her for no reason. People are much deeper than that. Art: 5/10 You know its gonna be good when the manga's only redeeming quality is mediocre art Character: 1/10 I have never seen such shallow characters in my life, a girl that is shy for no reason and a girl that loves the shy girl for NO REASON. Not because she's ... |