Saenai Heroine no Sodatekata: Egoistic-Lily

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Hmm I guess no one reviewed this since it isn't really popular. This is kind of an extra from the manga Saenai Heroine Sodatekata (Saekano in short). I'm warning you ahead this review might have some inaccurate facts since I did not read the original manga, Only because I know how it's likely gonna end and let's just say It's not in my favourite girl's favour. Yeah I sometimes act childish with these kind of things. This manga is only focusing on 1 of the 3 main girls of Saekano which is Eriri Spencer as you can oviously see from the title "Egoistic Lily" . ... It focuses on her relationship with the MC, mostly on their long so called "friendship". Since I'm one of the rare guys that liked Eriri the most I can recommend it to you guys, it was pretty fun to read. For just 15 chapters it was pretty fun to read and learn more about Tomoya and Eriri. The art was overall good except a few parts that looked like they were drawn more poorly. But Who cares I enjoyed it. And no, I'm still not going to watch the anime or read the original manga cause I just know how It'll turn out

First of all, i'm doing this review after i finished this manga and currently reading the original Saenai Heroine no Sodatekata
(How to Raise a Boring Girlfriend) manga. And i've been seeing clips of the anime adaptation of the original on youtube so i got curious and started reading this series. (Also there will also be some spoilers in this review)

Story: pretty normal/average plot progression and aki (the protag) got me pretty annoyed when he got eriri really mad at him for helping another artist (izumi) with her booth at comiket and he didn't even choose eriri's work when eriri asked him which one he ... prefers more.

Art: It's really good (this was pretty much one of the reasons why i started reading this series) kinda reminds me of the artstyle of "kyoukai no konata (beyond the boundary)" and i also love how eriri's facial expressions have been drawn.

I recommend that you read this manga if you're into the rom-com (romance comedy) genre, and if you're into doujinshi works since there a parts in the story where the character eriri works on some doujinshi.

If you've already read/seen the original 'Saenai Heroine no Sodatekata', then you'll find yourself re-reading a large chunk of that here. The only chapter that's properly different from the original storyline is Chapter 15, which is the closest it really gets to feeling like an 'Eriri Route'.


If you're reading this for a story which is ever so slightly more focused on Eriri and would like to see a few extra scenes of her interacting with Tomoya, then you might enjoy this short read. However, if you're reading in hopes of seeing a fleshed-out alternate route in which the MC ends up with a different ... heroine (like 'Saenai Heroine no Sodatekata: Koisuru Metronome', which is a completely new and different Utaha-focused storyline), then this isn't for you.

tl;dr: An alternate telling of a good story that isn’t really different enough to give it much value.

For those that aren’t familiar with the main series, Saekano is a light novel series that has also received an anime adaptation as well as a manga adaptation and various manga spin offs. It is the story of Tomoyo forming a circle to create a doujin VN for comiket. In the main series, three members of that circle (Katou, Utaha, and Eriri) are focused on about equally. This spin-off, Egoistic Lily, is a version of Saekano that heavily focuses on only one of these three heroines, Eriri. Eriri ... is Tomoya’s tsundere childhood friend with whom she had a falling out, and this manga is about them slowly reconciling. It’s a pretty solid relationship arc that certainly does lean heavily on tropes, but has enough beyond that to give it a good amount of depth and some pretty good emotional beats.

While this manga is especially focused on Eriri, I certainly would not consider this the ‘Eriri route’ version of the story. This is because the focus is more due to subtraction than addition, by which I mean the focus on Eriri in this manga is more so due to skipping or glossing over the parts centered around Katou and Utaha than through anything new regarding Eriri. The story of this manga is ultimately the exact same as in the main series and nothing major happens in this that doesn’t happen in the main series. To be honest, one of the biggest ways it cements itself as an Eriri manga is by ending where it does, right at the end of a major Eriri arc and before getting into any of the other heroine’s arcs that would follow. This manga does expand certain parts related to Eriri. For example, there are things that are just briefly talked about as having happened in the main series, but this manga will show them happening as they occur. But ultimately, it doesn’t really feel like these further fleshed out her character.

The main Saekano manga did a pretty bad job with both Eriri and Utaha, so I suppose this is better in regards to how it handled Eriri. However, the anime did just as good a job with Eriri and also managed to handle Utaha and Katou just as well. Another spin off manga, Girl’s Side, requires already being familiar with the main story of Saekano to understand properly, but it actually fleshes out Eriri better than the main manga does in certain regards by actually adding new substantial content. Egoistic Lily on the other hand just feels like a slightly different adaptation from the main manga. And ultimately the story is great and this adaptation is pretty solid too with solid art, so that’s enough to make this manga good. However, considering the anime and main manga have considerably more story content, including more Eriri content, at the same or better level of quality, this manga doesn’t really seem to have much of a point.