Apr 22, 2024
In three chapters I could already see that it is a bad one.
The pacing is poorly done, in the second chapter the main character already jumped ahead of the first obstacle in his objective to become strong without any storytelling at all. It was just skipped, it feels like the author didn't want to write something more profound and only wanted to write simple plots.
The battles don't have any excitment whatsoever, they feel bland. There are too little fighting panels for each fight and even the fight isn't exciting at all, because the main character don't appear to have any difficulty to defend and win
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when he was supposed to still be a weakling.
The character growth is badly written, because the pace is too rushed. In the beginning the main character can't do exercises for 10 minutes and some time later(unknown amout) he won several battles on a city level tournament.
The relationships feels forced, because the characters didn't react to situations and events in a realistic way.
Anyone who had read a lot of stories won't like this manwha.
You can try to read it if you have little to none reading experience.
Reviewer’s Rating: 3
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