Jan 12, 2023
peach sorbet is alright, the art is really beautiful, I love it, but the story is honestly kind of meh. Had big hopes for this one since it looked great, have read a lot of straight, yaoi and yuri smut but this one is kind of like that weird one about the red haired girl maximilian and the knight who constantly had sex, it is boring and offputting, real people dont have that much sex, or is it that guy yura has extremely high sex drive? Her indicisivness is also offputting, I understand that she is insecure but the guy literally speaks to a woman
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and she is jealous, she isn't even dating him. And what is being addicted to sex supposed to mean, just don't have sex, no one is forcing you to open your legs, no one is beating you or pressing a gun to your head to have sex, there are so many ways to have intimacy and connection besides sex. While sex/porn addiction is very real, it is more easily curable than drugs and alcohol which sometimes lead to violence. I mean lilith's cord had a lot of sex but it was more interesting as a plot
I am a college student and I kind of get her struggles but this whole - hot atheltic guy (sometimes bully) going for the nice cute girl is nothing but pure fantasy, kind of like bald boring guy getting a 10/10 hot girl. If I know something about football/atheletic/muscular guys is that they hang out and date like really pretty girls, some are mean, some are nice but they usually go for looks rather than brain, and not that Moa is ugly, but she is more cute than sexy and he seems weirdly obsessed with her boobs, I know some guys like boobs and how soft they are but he just gropes them a lot, and even though he apologized after the elevator, for an athelete where sports create discipline, he seems to lack any sense of manners and discipline. I am not saying he should be some sort of prude but he has sex with her every 8 minutes like a horndog and even if they do it a few times he never seems satisfied.
I apologize if this sounds overly weird and rude, usually the other smuts i've read have progressing plot and action and romance and balance each other out but this one, like the one about the knight/princess maximilian (forgot the title) just has way too much sex, for no reason? Liliths's cord is about succubuses and all but at least the sex there makes sense, and there is action and romance and other elements to balance it out, I am not saying he should hold him self, restrain like the teacher but he shouldn't really jump on her either. Wouldn't reccoment it to anyone but at least it is better than the red haired princess maximilian and her knight husband, he looks a lot like yura but the whole story is that he fights, and when he doesnt fight he has sex with his wife who is shy uwu girl, and thats it, fight, sex,fight,sex - at least here we have other characters and a love triangle but not much else going on.
Reviewer’s Rating: 4
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