Jul 26, 2024
Just another mediocre webtoon to read without any expectation.
Art
The watercolor like coloring is very pleasing and nice.
3D backgrounds are standing out too much despite the watercolor rendering, it does make the frames seems very unnatural.
Characters do have a nice style though some poses feel kinda off.
The chibis and the author traits is pretty overall.
Plot
Classic, not too much to say about it.
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Characters
Classic trope scary at first but innocent puppy with popular good looking with a traumatic past.
The love interest also has a trauma with physical violence by his previous relationship but the subject is treated kinda in a superficial level with no writing effort (seems like the show don't tell here is nonexistent...).
Development
Irregular for no reason (why does it feel so slow and then so rushed at the last chapter-) + the romance can feel like a little forced though some aspects of it are cute.
Writing
The narrative style (if I can call this a "style") is confusing and not very good: the storyboard is poor and boring, the lighting variations and intentions are nowhere to be found and everything does break the reader immersion.
There's a lot of wasted potential like the imagery of the soldier with his noble that is mentionned a few times but it doesn't goes any further than just some chibis panels.
Also one thing that's kinda disturbing is the weird choices to often switch into normal style and chibi style for...no reason and sometimes it just doesn't feel right especially when it's supposed to be a serious scene.
Overall
A pretty mid reading, despite some qualities and potential, I do not recommend this title if you are expecting a well written story.
However, it can be a thing to read it with no expectations and just enjoy the watercolor rendering of the characters.
Reviewer’s Rating: 5
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