Aug 23, 2023
>> Read to 21, the newest 2 to 3 Chapters and some in between
First I was spoiled the ML since then I dropped 'cause I hated the decision with my whole heart.
> The art is just so pretty.
> The characters have different variety of character depth. And the FL is just a nice person who wants to throw her money at everything/-one to help people. Also the idea that the FL create a motherly / sisterly bond with one of the characters was so good on paper. Almost everything she does has some kind of reason why she does these certain things a certain
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way. The support staff is sometimes so stupidly funny and heartwarming.
> And tbh. this story is so funny to read. BUT...
>> Spoilers + My Opinion
WHY EVERY FUCKING TIME the Shota (mostly Loli) trope. Javi is Centuries old, in a body of a child (Obviously) and later the FL love interest, who is (Obviously AGAIN) like a mother/sister to him. At least the author had the decency to age the stupid character up in the newest Chapters. He had so much potential with such a good/sad backstory.
I hope the author changes this.
Reviewer’s Rating: 4
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