The Hopeless Desire of a Witch

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This was a rollercoaster of emotions !
It has a good character developement and the art is good too. The art is not the best but its not bad.
The story was really nice written even tho it could have been better in my opinion.
This is a story about a girl who is immortal and falls in love with a mortal human.
It starts light-hearted (kinnda) but later it becomes darker.
The pov starts with the ml and ends with the fl.
If you want to read a manga wich is not so light-hearted then go for it. It wont dissapoint at this section.
(For me it got ... a little boring since it took a while for the manga being fully translated and illustrated so maybe im kinnda putting its 'value down a little bit )'
As for the ending , at first i hated it but after giving a second thought I kinnda loved that ending since it shows both sides of a coin .

As a pretty experienced reader it's unfortunate to have to recommend against this story. The beginning is both lackluster and confusing as poorly communicated exposition as well as an absolute failure to grab the attention results in a frustration few other stories have managed to accomplish.

The art was relatively average but had a consistent quality to it is really the best pro to be said in favor of this story. If you're considering starting this one personal opinions recommend trying it and if it fails to capture your attention as well it's best just to move on.

In retrospect the story could've accomplished far greater ideas ... if it didn't try to establish far too much of a mysterious backstory that 9 chapters in you'll still be trying to figure out what this plot point is supposed to mean or how it could've affected the main character. Instead you're treated to consistent call backs of the same mystery with no additional information being provided to the reader and instead of becoming more intrigued you face an increasingly problematic mindset wondering "why have I been told this exact same thing 7 times in two chapters?"

An imperfect but enjoyable and concrete story.

It does feel like the story the author is telling, is a solid story but, due the way it's told, it misplaces some important details early on.

The emotion coming from the story only hit a while after it ending. it ended up being a complete work with a ending that ended up a perfect fit to heroine's story. Even if many will not like it.

From the entire work I would really say the epilogue was my favourite part but I still enjoyed the romance, the action and the story all the same.