Jan 3, 2023
The only reason for it being so short was scum management/production and screwing over the artist. Because of that, a lot of quality was lost, the conclusion isn't a conclusion, and the last thing anyone is left to thing about is how blatantly dull the Academy Arc is. And that's not even over by time the final chapter comes to be. If you're interested in this story, simply find spoilers because this comic sadly isn't worth the investment.
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Everything pre-Academy is a gem and shows incredible promise. Exacting revenge from a first life none but you are privy to is a fun trope and
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there are so many ways for FL to go about this. First, she saves her family, then she pretends to be an ignorant common girl that somehow overcomes true hurdles, ie cousin. That alone oozes potential of how her revenge will operate, to take form. On top of that, the art is wonderful and there's so much worldbuilding it stands-out amongst many in this ever-diluting genre.
But that's over once she enters at the Academy. It's not only dragged-out, but there's not much to display her cunningness save her choice in disguise so she can move about unnoticed. This Arc alone is why a lot of readers dropped the story while it was still updating contrary to its worldbuilding and art. And, then, anyone who persevered this sudden slow Arc was left with nothing to show for it.
Reviewer’s Rating: 5
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