Jan 6, 2025
I feel like this story started off really strong (there was a sense of mystery, the characters were all interesting and had interesting individual stories, etc.) but somewhere along the line it just got too convoluted and confusing. As I said I really liked that there were different storylines happening at once but it was a bit weird how the story would spend a significant amount of time on one plot (completely abandoning the rest) and then just suddenly just to another one for an extended period of time; it just didn't feel like a cohesive plot. And by the end of the story since
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only so much time could be spent with each plot I ended up feeling dissatisfied with the way most of them were left.
I still really enjoyed the story which is why I rated it a 7/10 but just wished that the characters and plots that I had become invested in had a chance to be explored thoroughly.
Reviewer’s Rating: 7
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