Kasshoku Henshuu-san to Shota Mangaka

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for this kind of manga to end after just 21 chapter was just poetic justice given that the author, Gokugetsu, Momo doesn't have any talent to make such series where even the ecchi sucks, so.....

story- It simply lacks momentum, it goes from the MC's getting comfy with his editor to a sister with brocon to something that you can no longer say where it is heading.

Art- There were only just a handful of good fanservices around and quite frankly the original creator should've just gamble with having his works to have a lot of fanservices.

Character- I'll make this short, none of them make it both ... the male and female MC.

Overall: Original creator ,Gokugetsu, Momo, should've just made this either a smut, pornographic or hentai.

So, very much not recommended.

Ahh, how refreshing is the smell of garbage. This manga is the perfect example of mid trash. The art is of the most basic template, the story serves only "fans" (not that this would have any) and the characters are basically nonexistent a.k.a. are non-characters.
There's a panel somewhere in the upper middle that encapsulates the whole work. It's just the MC sandwiched between four naked girls in an onsen. That's all this manga is. Perfect shota/onee-san trash.

The story doesn't matter one bit. The author needed something to start the manga but it doesn't go an inch further. It may as well be a collection of ... "teasing the embarrassed kid" screenshots. 4/10

The characters also don't matter. None of them have any growth or change, it's always the MC pushing away the gorgeous girls who can't help but strip in front of him. Then someone walks in on them or they fall on one another etc. etc.
0/10 the characters feel like something ChatGPT would cook up.

The art is the only "strong" point here. It hits the "surprisingly well-drawn but lazy" mark perfectly. The girls are pretty, that's the main concern but nothing else matters. When the only scene you can remember is a boob grab you know what you've fallen into.
5-6/10 at least it was pretty

I don't recommend this manga unless you're trash-depraved and need something simple. "dollar-store hentai" is what I would describe it as. In the end just go to nhentai or something, those at least give you more than crappy boob grabs and have a better story..

It was honestly a while since I stumbled into a forgettable manga like this.
The designs are mid with the best one being the editor, the story is just one cliche after the other without really using the story as an avenue to show how manga is done (which could have made the series even slightly more interesting), the art is not bad but the fanservice falls a bit flat, the characters are just their gimmick and that's it and the only reason I finished it was because it was only 21 chapters.
I don't recommend reading it unless you, like me, have time to kill and ... want something that you can read without retaining anything of it.