Tanaka no Atelier: Nenrei=Kanojo Inai Reki no Mahoutsukai

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The only flaws from this one is the pacing, see unlike the other guy, I've read the other manga version first before this reboot version, In the old manga, it was more flesh out, the story pacing is all right here there's a lot they skip, I'm assuming because the first manga just ended a year after this reboot version's serialization so to them it makes sense to rush the arcs that the first one already tackled, the problem is that those who didn't read the first version, to them it's confusing but to be honest the story is quite average, they we're minor differences ... in the first arcs but men it was different in the later arcs, although I like the first one better, both art and the pacing of the story but the story especially the last arcs, I like this one better, so I give it a 6, it all comes down the art that's why this one got lower score for me compared to the other one, even though I like the story of this one better than the first one.

Utter garbage.

The plot wanders like a blind rabid dog looking for scraps. Concepts are introduced, and you're just expected to accept them, because they're so stereotypical that there's no point in explaining them. There is no progression in the story whatsoever.

The author has zero sense of framing. The characters will be fighting a dragon for an entire chapter and none of it actually shows them fighting the dragon. Some of them scream and some of them shoot magic bolts that aren't explained or ever used again. Then the next panel shows the dragon, looking like it took no damage, but apparently the main character ... can somehow see its HP decreasing. I feel like I'm losing brain cells reading this.

The art is painfully average. Fanservice hollers at you around every corner like a desperate gas station whore because the only prop played as comedy in the entire manga is "the main character is a perverted old man." One of the only characters who he actually befriends is a lesbian knight, and it's still played for laughs that he wants to fuck her. Then she just disappears entirely from the story, because the author has no idea how to write. At this point, there's no reason not to just go read actual hentai, because at least it has a clear beginning, climax, and ending.

As for character, the main character is a middle aged virgin who is so ugly that even God himself can't fix his looks. He then asks for maxed out healing powers and just wanders around after his reincarnation, meets hot girls, and thinks about fucking them. That's literally it. His behavior is pretty accurate to reflect the shallow delusions of an ugly bastard without actually letting him stick his dick in anyone. There is a girl literally begging to fuck him by the 15th chapter, but he continues to go for the busty virgin maid who dreams of meeting her prince charming and giving him her first time, until he gets sent off to be a medic in a random war. What a shitshow.

This is one of the worst manga that I've ever read, and it's terrifying to realize that someone is actually trying to make a living off of this dumpster fire.