Nov 9, 2024
A good premise that doesn't quite deliver.
Story: The manga starts out strong and manages to pull you along for about the first half. Around that point, The manga starts doing time compressions, except it doesn't really feel like much time has passed. There are these montages, that visually are quite fun, but ultimately they don't do a great job of showing the passage of time. That is to say, from a plot perspective, I don't think the plot is rushed, but the manga feels rushed towards the latter half. There's a feeling of the mangaka knowing the larger plot points and where everything needs
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to go, but not quite nailing the execution when it comes to going from plot point to plot point.
The relationships are often cute and have some good dynamics, but they needed a bit more room to breathe.
Art: One of the higher points of this manga. Individual panels are often fantastic with expressive characters, distinct designs, plenty of detail, and decent environments. However, I found the paneling a bit disjointed. Large jumps occur every once in awhile that make it a little bit hard to follow what's going on in some scenes.
Overall, it was a nice read that didn't overstay its welcome, but I kind of wish it had? It felt like it should have been three or four chapters longer.
Reviewer’s Rating: 6
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