Todo no Tsumari no Uchouten

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Now this is something that I'd never recommend reading the story could have been completed in 6 chapters but it's just a drag, to be honest the story in itself is not that bad but the way it's crafted and plotted in manga it feels so drag, there are so many unnecessary plot in the mid chapters it feels like the author tried way too hard to make the reader laugh and failed miserably, the way where the author shifts development between one couple to another is so irritating, the plotting of this manga is what that really annoys me after all it could have ... been a nice story if plotted properly.

Now overall it's not recommended in any possible way the ending is not bad but it's not at all satisfactory it could have shown so much good stuff but it didn't, i honestly can't see how the author messed up the story to this degree, even as a noob in drawing i can say i could have written better.
That's all