Jul 4, 2024
It has a good compelling story, has multiple elements within the story tie back together with the characters. The world building gets fleshed out a little bit like with the fact Elves use wind spirits for their great mobility. Both of the characters play off of each other quite well with their personalities. The pacing does drag from time to time but nothing bad. The conflict and drama was great; the twist and turns in the story had me not being able to predict where it was going.
No heavy exposition dumps, no, "oh hey I'm going to sit here and explain this" and some things
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are left unanswered in a good way with the fact not every little thing needs to be explained. The two sides of the race conflict make sense for mutual hatred. The writing could've been better at having the character's express their emotions but nothing that's going to ruin the story.
Both characters being the same side of the coin, the theme with love which I don't want to dig too much into that for spoiler reasons. The NSFW elements of the story I do love even if some events are repeated a little just a different place. It takes some time before you run across the NSFW stuff. Ass play, oral, fingering, etc.
On the part of the humans and the elves the conflicting emotional drama part of the story does have you sympathizing and understanding both sides but still not agreeing with their mindset nor their methods. The relationships between the characters (more fleshed out with the elves) is more understood with their complex mess of emotions while the humans don't get much time to focus on their mindset, reasoning and hatred versus the elves.
The action and drama were great with relatable reasons for the characters to want to chase after their motives. Even with the epilogue the two together chasing a new goal.
The art is great within the story, the times you actually get to see it is great and is quite fitting.
Reviewer’s Rating: 7
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