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Jun 12, 2016 4:12 AM
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READ THIS FIRST 1. In this thread you will create your character 2. Later on in the game if your character's Charisma Point reach certain Point, you can upgrade the rank of your character by Editing your existing post using the below Format with the updated Rank, Abilities and Biography. See the Mobster Rank HERE 3. Every time you update the Charisma Point and Rank, make sure to notify me by include the new tag: @philtecturophy in your edited post , so that I can follow your character development as well. 4. If you decide to transfer to another Mob, you can also make a Re-Post in this thread by updating the section "Mob to Join" FORMAT FOR CREATING AND CUSTOMIZING CHARACTER Name: Picture: Age: Gender: Personality: Current Mobster Rank: (Your character start with Rank 10: Thug) Current Charisma Points: (Your character start with Charisma Points=0 in every Mob) Abilities: (Your mobster character must be good at something. Your ability must be reasonable. There are no crazy magic allowed. For instance: you can be good with guns, knife, martial arts, hypnotizing, simple magic tricks and so on) Give a "single name" for this as your ability used in mob war and scheme Description of your ability when used in the SCHEME / RP Play Story Line: (Abilities used in SCHEME cannot damage people physically. It can only affect psychologically or mentally) Description of your ability when used in the MOB WAR: (Abilities used in MOB WAR can damage people physically). SEE HERE to understand the system in MOB WAR . Please make the abilities based on the MOB WAR system such as mentioning how much the damage taken in numbers, or how quick or slow in numbers (eg: can double post in one turn when using the ability) Weapon: Mob to join: (You have to first join an existing Mob. Later on when your Rank is higher, you can make your own Mob for other members to join you) Character biography (You have to elaborate your character's life in minimum of 100 words) USE THIS FORMATTED SHEET FOR CREATING YOUR CHARACTER [size=150][b]FORMAT FOR CREATING AND CUSTOMIZING CHARACTER[/b][/size] [b]Name:[/b] [b]Picture:[/b] [b]Age:[/b] [b]Gender: [/b] [b]Personality:[/b] [b]Current Mobster Rank:[/b] (Your character start with Rank 10: Thug) [b]Current Charisma Points:[/b] (Your character start with Charisma Points=0 in every Mob) [b]Abilities:[/b] (Your mobster character must be good at something. Your ability must be reasonable. There are no crazy magic allowed. For instance: you can be good with guns, knife, martial arts, hypnotizing, simple magic tricks and so on) [color=red]Give a "single name" for this as your ability used in mob war and scheme[/color] [b]Description of your ability when used in the SCHEME / RP Play Story Line:[/b] (Abilities used in SCHEME cannot damage people physically. It can only affect psychologically or mentally) [b]Description of your ability when used in the MOB WAR: (Abilities used in MOB WAR can damage people physically). [/b][url=http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=1521402][color=red][size=120][b]SEE HERE [/b][/size][/color][/url] to understand the system in MOB WAR . Please make the abilities based on the MOB WAR system such as mentioning how much the damage taken in numbers, or how quick or slow in numbers (eg: can double post in one turn when using the ability) [b]Weapon:[/b] [b]Mob to join:[/b] (You have to first join an existing Mob. Later on when your Rank is higher, you can make your own Mob for other members to join you) [b]Character biography[/b] (You have to elaborate your character's life in minimum of 100 words) Rules when creating your character General Forum Role Play prohibit Godmodding as described below: Godmodding is godmoding specific to character creation, skills, and certain situations (e.g., combat). Powerplaying is godmoding by controlling another roleplayer’s character without permission. Metagaming is godmoding specific to the use of OOC knowledge in roleplayed actions, behaviors, thoughts. Retconning is godmoding specific to erasure or alteration of past events. Sources: http://forumroleplay.com/roleplay-guides/bad-roleplay/ See Below for more detail |
philtecturophyJun 27, 2016 5:49 AM
Jun 12, 2016 5:06 AM
#2
Name: Glast Luminaire Age: 17 Gender: Male Personality: Shy, but can be charismatic when the time requires him to. Glast is a person that loves peace. He does not have desire to fight or to rule over something. This is in contrast with his father's personality, that has high desire to rule over something in order to mix the harmony of peace and illegal business. His father Heidern Luminaire is a very charismatic person, and although Heidern's business is around semi-illegal to illegal activities such as selling narcotics, guns, opening night clubs and so on, however Heidern has always been kind to his subordinates and people of the DeLiberty City. Heidern always prioritize diplomacy over war. People tend to like him a lot. However after Heidern's death by the High Society mob, Luminaire goes down hill. Glast has very lack of charisma and very shy. However, prior to Heidern's death, Heidern's richness and business was bestowed upon Glast as his only son. The only primary motivation for Glast to continue leading Luminaire is because he knows that his father's enemies are targeting him to take over the DeLiberty City. His heart has always been full of fear and he is always scared of the situation where those enemies would come to have some pay back time. Thus to acquire the protection, he mostly uses this richness and power to defend himself from such situation. Glast is strong when he is around his friends. The more friends around him, the more enthusiastic he is. Without his friend, Glast is fragile and mentally unstable due to his fear. What Glast needs seems are people around him that can make him feel safe. Around his friend, Glast become a cheerful person and more confidence to do big things. Current Mobster Rank: Caporegime Current Charisma Points: Luminaire (120) Abilities: Aura transformation, Andante overture, Hypnotizing, Liebestraume , Pray Description of your ability when used in the SCHEME: Suicide scherzo: Glast will play the melodies of suicide scherzo that mentally hurts himself and others that listen to it. Andante overture: Glast will play a beautiful melodies with his violin in which it oftentimes make people feel sad and closed towards him. Liebestraume: Glast will play a beautiful melodies with his violin in which it oftentimes make people feel cheerful and enthusiastic. Serendepity: Glast can play a cheerful melodies so that a person with lower charisma point than him give some information to him without realizing he has given that to him. Pray: Glast will kneel and pray. During this mode, Glast is just a fragile boy who is defenseless. Description of your ability when used in the MOBSTER FIGHT: Suicide scherzo: Glast will damage himself by half the amount of attack points he uses in that turn, and damage the enemy by double the attack points he used in that turn (eg: attack 5x: THEN Glast hp reduced by 3, enemy damaged by 10x) Andante overture: Glast will increase the effect of actions of all the Mobsters of his subordinates in their next turn by 50% including himself, decimal rounded up (eg: attack 5x becomes 8x, cure 5x becomes 8x) Liebestraume: For the next 5 turns, whenever Glast cure himself, three mobsters of his choosen subordinates will gain the same effect of that curing Serendepity: Glast can give Revert back the damage he received used by another caster back to the caster in the next turn, his energy is restored by the amount of that damage. Pray: Glast can use all his action points for curing only himself for the next 5 turns Weapon:Violin instrument Moments with Cressida During childhood, when Glast is just 4 years old, Glast's father Heidern bought Glast a silver violin. The violin was named Cressida, named after Glast's mother who died when Glast was just 1 year old. Glast never remembered how her mother looked like, and he never remembered the love of a mother. But through Cressida, he felt as if her mother was closed to him. At the year of 5, Glast have already had perfect pitch, able to name the key of a given piece of tonal music and able to identify by name individual pitches played on various instruments. The size of Cressida's body is too large for him to handle at that time, so he played her by putting the instrument on the floor, and with his small finger and hands, he pull the strings and playing around with the bow touching the instrument. Glast always take care of Cressida. She is her only friend, and a mother to him. At the age of 10, Glast has already became a virtuoso in playing violin. He can play various difficult music such as those composed by Maurice Ravel. Sometimes he played duet with his father for fun, and playing duet violin with his father has became the main interaction method between Glast and his father, Heidern. When they play together, it is as if the whole family reunites again, with Glast, his father Heidern, and his mother Cressida all in one room in exquisite harmony. In every of those moment, Glast felt like there were no burden pressuring on him, as if the were no gravity, flying and exploring the universe within his mind. After Glast's father died, Glast left alone with Cressida. Depression and fear covers the entire of his heart. Glast even often times never touch his violin again. Sometimes he just sat alone at Sardonyx Sky Garden at night, and often times in his heart, he cried. Glast always missed the times he spent with his father and Cressida together, in one room, as one heart and mind, playing the duet. Mob to join: Glast is one of the two characters in the game that already has the Mob and begin with the Rank Caporegime. His Mob name is: Luminaire Character biography: Glast is the only child in his family. His family for generation was from the Europian aristocratic rich casta. His father, Heidern, was a Big Boss of Mob House Luminaire, but was murdered during the MOB WAR. His father was a virtuoso in playing violin, and used it as his primary weapon even during MOB WAR. It was told once that his father individually hypnotize the entire Mob armies with his dramatic violin overtures that the enemies hallucinate through the entire day. Heidern never loved Glast very much. Glast spent his childhood as a lonely person with his violin as his only friend. In the school years, Glast was never a very friendly person. Often he was bullied by his class mates because of his girly looks. He never really told anyone about this. But he was a very popular person among girls. His very nice looking appearance and very skillful aptitude in playing Violin attracts many girls and females towards him. Though he never really know how to behave properly towards those girls. After his father died, Luminaire became leaderless. Naturally Glast, as Heidern's only son, become the only person that is qualified to become the next boss. Glast was than granted the Rank of Caporegime and allowed to build up his own Mob. Though Glast feels that this Mob things is meaningless and not of his interest. However it seems that becoming a Mobster is the only way that he can survive and gain protection from his subordinates against his father enemies. At his young age, Glast will need as much help from other people to guide him in the right way. |
philtecturophyJul 16, 2016 8:57 AM
Jun 12, 2016 5:58 AM
#3
Name:Yakihiro Kuroha Picture: Age:17 Gender:Male Personality:He is a sadic and cruel person Current Mobster Rank: Caporegime Current Charisma Points: 120 Abilities: Madness, Intimidation, Snake, Red Pistol, Description of your ability when used in the SCHEME / RP Play Story Line: Madness: Yakihiro becomes mad with rage, while he is like that, he can't be affected by psychological abilities. Intimidation: Yakihiro intimidates a person with lower charisma points, making the person tell him the information he wants. Snake: Yakihiro uses his charismatic pet to do whatever he wish's Red Pistol: Yakihiro shoot's with his gun. Drugs: Use some drugs to make him calm. Description of your ability when used in the MOBSTER FIGHT: Madness: Doubles the power of his next action. Intimidation: Weakens a foe defense so the next damage he takens get 2x times stronger (example: attack 5x turns into attack 10x) Red Pistol: Shoot a person 5x damage Snake: Bind's an enemy making him unable to use half of his actions in his turn. Drugs: Cure a person 5x Weapon:Red Pistol and Snake Mob to join: Tartarus Character biography: Yakihiro Is the second son of Barok Kuroha, He took leardership of the Kuroha group after his father died of illness, and changed the name of the group to Tartarus. Since a young age Yakihiro was a disturbed child, he would cut his pets to see how they were inside, and always liked things other people wouldn't, when his brother and Uncle died in the MOB War his condition got only worse, he just won't care about people he doesn't like, and don't see the reason in helping weak people who has nothing to offer. He has a snake that he won in his 14 years birthday, he already had other snakes before but this was the only one he didn't cut and tortured, somehow it's always with him, even when you think he is alone the snake is always somewhere nearby. Yakihirio want's more power, and won't stop untill the whole city is in his command. |
fyruskingJun 15, 2016 11:57 AM
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Jun 12, 2016 2:11 PM
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Name: Minerva 'Braniac' Wynn Chase Picture: Age: 16 Gender: Female Personality: She's a sane person who enjoys killing for a living. Minerva is probably the smartest of Tartarus Current Mobster Rank: 10 - Thug Current Charisma Points: 0 Abilities: Parkour Description of your ability when used in the SCHEME / RP Play Story Line: Parkour: This makes her able to wall run, jump over crates/barrels easily, slide down poles and jump father then the average person. Description of your ability when used in the MOBSTER FIGHT: Parkour: The next amount of damage that she takes is halved Weapon:Throwing knives Mob to join: Tartarus Character biography : She grew up with her parents who where in the mafia, but they were in seperate mafia groups so they had to be very careful all the time. Her mother was in Tartarus and her father was in Luminaire. They hated being away from each other but loved each other so much they had Minerva the smartest little girl you would've ever known. In fact she even came up with a plan to help her parents. The plan lasted 10 years. Minerva doesn't tell anyone the plan she said she swore not to and still won't share it. For years she didn't participate in anything mafia related for her and her parents sake. One day her father was found dead in a river. Minerva's mother went into a deep depression and blamed Minerva because she came up with the plan. Soon the police came and killed her mother. She decided to go to Tartarus and become a mother that wouldn't threaten her child. |
MysticalPhoenixJun 16, 2016 8:08 AM
Jun 12, 2016 3:20 PM
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Name: Kira but calls himself Sora Age: 17 Personality: seems like a playful child at first, what you dont know is that inside hes a plotting killer, capable of staying sane and being merciful on the weak at the same time though Current mobster rank: i didnt choose the thug life, its the rp that chose it for me Current charisma points: 0 Ability: knife skills DESCRIPTION IN SCHEME: knife skills: goes up to a person like his friend and puts his arm around him and takes out his knife at his neck making him spill the truth. This will be effective only when using it to person with lower charisma than Sora. DESCRIPTION IN MOB WAR: knife skills: he will use his knife to cut the person in a vein giving 5 damage and 1 damage every post until the next 4 turns or heal it weapon: knife and silenced pistol Mob: luminaire bio: he always wanted to see people suffer, his parents were killed when he was young and he has wanted revenge since, he will get it on other people since he wants the world to know pain. he believes that people only will care for each other if they feel the same pain so he started killing and murdering for fun, he kept his 2 names so that no one will find him out, at a murder scene he will write his killer name kira with his victims blood if he has time and he will continue this. he also has killed 15 people and each death was done by torture. |
philtecturophyJun 29, 2016 11:36 AM
Jun 12, 2016 6:00 PM
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Name: Isaac Webber Picture: Age: 17 Gender:Male Personality: Kind and loving guy who wouldn't kill for fun, but he kills for justice if it means helping his nation survive. Isaac was a recruit in the Marines when his team was sunk in the ocean. He was the best-trained marine ever, so don't mess with his family or else... Current Mobster Rank:Thug (Your character start with Rank 10: Thug) Current Charisma Points:0 *Will progress in time* (Your character start with Charisma Points=0 in every Mob) Abilities:He has enhanced vision, and can almost see clearly in the dark because of intense eyesite training. He can throw knives up to 150 feet and is good with any blunt weapons he can grab, such as pipes and steel bars. (Your mobster character must be good at something. Your ability must be reasonable. There are no crazy magic allowed. For instance: you can be good with guns, knife, martial arts, hypnotizing, simple magic tricks and so on) Description of your ability when used in the SCHEME / RP Play Story Line: Grapple: Gets hooked rope out of satchel and can either grapple walls or grab enemies and objects from a distance. Does 4 attack and has a *bleed effect* of 2 Description of your ability when used in the MOBSTER FIGHT: Scorpion's Rope spear: Same as Grapple, but with a spearhead at the tip of the rope, used to bring enemies closer while they're knocked out. Can also be used as a fatality. Does attack of 6 damage with a bleed effect of 3 . Bleed effect is the damage done after the attack. Lasts until the player dies from bloodloss from the attack or if it is healed. Weapon: Multi-use Rope spearhead with springloaded grapple claws. Mob to join: House of Luminaire (You have to first join an existing Mob. Later on when your Rank is higher, you can make your own Mob for other members to join you) Character biography When he was young, he was picked on for having a big armband on his head. That armband kept him from getting ill, like a lucky charm, and it was pink. When he said that it was lucky, the bullies took it and flushed it down the toilet. They then began to beat the crap out of him, telling him he was a wuss. After a few years, he had trained himself to deal with them... He tranquillized the two bullies with two coated blowdarts, from a distance. Since then, he was abandoned by his family, and accepted by a Marine Corps Admiral. After a few more years, the ship sank with the Admiral aboard, on the coast of DeLiberty City, That is where his new story began (You have to elaborate your character's life in minimum of 100 words) |
Frisky_KnucklesJun 12, 2016 6:47 PM
If I wasn't so deranged, could I ever face the pain? If I ever want to change, would this all remain the same? Jekyll n hyde, 5FDP [url=http://myanimelist.net/animelist/Frisky_Knuckles&sclick=1] |
Jun 13, 2016 6:42 AM
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FORMAT FOR CREATING AND CUSTOMIZING CHARACTER Name: Hana Zeruka Picture: Age: 24 Gender: Female Personality: Hana is very serious when it comes to her job but can let loose and have fun with her friends. She likes drinking a lot and gets very active when she has drank a lot. Further rest she is a nice woman Current Mobster Rank: 10: Thug Current Charisma Points: 0 Abilities: Hana is very good at handling guns. Be it a handgun, full automatic or even an RPG, she can use all of them. S Description of your ability when used in the SCHEME / RP Play Story Line: Hana has a few special bullets she can use in her guns. 1. Explosive round: what it does is self explanatory but it explodes in a radius of 2 by 2 meters 2. Smoke round: what it does is self explanatory and the smoke screen it creates is around 4 by 4 meters 3. Corrosive round: this makes it so that when it hits someone it will release a liquid that will bite into their skin or body causing some serious damage to someone 4. Tracking round: this bullet will send out a signal to Hana's phone keeping track of whatever was hit by the bullet. Be it a human, or a car Description of your ability when used in the MOB WAR: 1. Explosive round: this deals a damage of 4 to people who are right onto it but a damage of 1 for people around the center. This will also cause a short bleed effect to someone for 2 turns 2. Smoke round: this just blocks of vision for people so they can't see whatever is behind it. The smoke screen will last for 4 turns 3. Biting round: the liquid that releases will cause a sort of poison effect which deals 1 damage every turn for 3 turns. 4. Tracking round: this will just send out a signal to Hana's phone so she can see wherever the tracked object is Weapon: She has a luger handgun, a thompson, a sniper rifle and a bayonet for close quarters combat. Mob to join: Tartarus Character biography Hana was born into a family in Italy. This family was a big mob there and was feared by the inhabitants of Italy and other mobs. Hana was proud of her father being such a good leader to his mob and decided she wanted to become a mobster herself. He trained her in using guns and she started developing special bullets. However one day her father was killed by another mob leader who got him assassinated. She hunted the man down and she killed him. But at the cost of the mob of her father dying out. She fled Italy because the government was of course looking for her. She ended up on a ship to DeLiberty City, a place her father had told her about before. She joined the mob Tartarus here and now wants to become one of the most feared mobsters in this place together with her allies |
MadTsunTsunJun 15, 2016 9:18 AM
I'm merely a deredere, tsundere, devidere, yandere, kudere and all dem other dere's :3 |
Jun 13, 2016 7:06 AM
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PLACEHOLDER, IF THAT'S ALRIGHT. FORMAT FOR CREATING AND CUSTOMIZING CHARACTER Name: Picture: Age: 28 Gender: Female Personality: Current Mobster Rank: (Your character start with Rank 10: Thug) Current Charisma Points: (Your character start with Charisma Points=0 in every Mob) Abilities: (Your mobster character must be good at something. Your ability must be reasonable. There are no crazy magic allowed. For instance: you can be good with guns, knife, martial arts, hypnotizing, simple magic tricks and so on) Description of your ability when used in the SCHEME / RP Play Story Line: Description of your ability when used in the MOB WAR: SEE HERE to understand the system in MOB WAR . Please make the abilities based on the MOB WAR system such as mentioning how much the damage taken in numbers, or how quick or slow in numbers (eg: can double post in one turn when using the ability) Weapon: Mob to join: (You have to first join an existing Mob. Later on when your Rank is higher, you can make your own Mob for other members to join you) Character biography (You have to elaborate your character's life in minimum of 100 words) |
Jun 13, 2016 7:34 AM
#9
Name: The Wretched Picture: Age: 19 Gender: Male Personality: The Wretched is a sadistic and insane individual, craving for blood and slaughter. He has lots of energy usually used to destroy something. He is addicted to drugs and has a bad reputation of killing people on the stop for just a very small amount of it. He only respects someone even stronger and possibly more insane than him, and spits on everyone else. He pretty much never eats food at all, and drinking is not much of either. He prefers to stay in the shadows and watch. If not respected he will get extremely irritated and possibly violent. Getting on his good side is quite the challenge, indeed. Current Mobster Rank: Thug Current Charisma Points: 0 Abilities: Deathly Strike Description of your ability when used in the SCHEME / RP Play Story Line: The Wretched will for a short moment transform his hand into a demonic claw. The claw can be used to easily shred up a hole in a wall to walk through or just destroy anything easier in general. Description of your ability when used in the MOB WAR: Will deal 5 damage and make the enemy unable to cure/heal next turn. +3 more damage if they are by themself. Weapon: An iron pipe. He uses an iron pipe with spikes normally, but can use pretty much any melee weapon. He is very fond of sharp knives that can kill easily. His hands are also used in combat, but more through his abilities. Mob to join: Tartarus. Character biography The Wretched was once a normal person, but not anymore. On the streets he's known as The Wretched, referring to his personality and dark nature. When he was about 10 years old, his father which was conducting expirements and rituals had an idea for The Wretched. His father had always been quite a lunatic, and his mother had left them several years back. The Wretched was corrupt by his father's nature. But as said, his father got an idea, he needed someone to perform his rituals on. The Wretched was paralyzed in the night and brought into his fathers workplace, The disgusting rituals performed on The Wrechted made a particular demon notice him. The demon could see the boy's evilness and psychopathic tendensies, and decided posses him, not fully, but halfly, living inside his mind as a sort of guider, corrupting him even further and turning him to insanity. The Wretched murdered his dad as a following and turned to a life on the streets, committing horrible crimes to sustain himself, now joining mobs. |
DestroyTheSauceJun 14, 2016 9:37 PM
Jun 14, 2016 12:53 AM
#10
Name: Nero Van Vladimir (Nicknamed 'Diablo' during his teenage years) Picture: Age:21 Gender:Male Personality:. Silent. But in the midst of battle, he wears a slight grin and would enjoy the slugfest and slaughters Current Mobster Rank: Thug (NINJA'D BY KAMINA, DAMMIT) Current Charisma Points:0 Abilities: Decimating Swing. Description of your ability when used in the SCHEME / RP Play Story Line: Decimating Swing: Attacks all nearby units infront of him. Description of your ability when used in the MOB WAR: Decimating Swing: Attacks all nearby units infront of him, dealing 3 damage to all enemies hit. Weapon: Warhammer - It's called Sion (pronounced as Sai-On) He only uses Sion in MOB fights. Mob to join: Tartarus Character biography Thrust into a world of manipulation and power since birth, Nero was exposed to the cruelty and ugliness of the world at a young age. He was born in a family that had debts over their heads. He lived most of his childhood running jobs and being an errand boy for several shady figures in the shadows. At the ripe age of 13, the debts accumulated by his family could no longer allow Nero to be kept by his family, and he was shoved into the shadows that once gave him his daily bread. The life of a slave was unforgiving, the cruel tortures and demands of his masters hardening his already closed heart. As he grew up, he was taught to take the lives of innocents and was given opportunities to live as a shadow's hand. It was until his family was killed in a power struggle between two opposing forces that dominated part of the city he lived, that he started craving for power. When he heard of Tartarus, he decided to put at an end to the shadows. With the trusty hammer he forged during his younger years, he mashed their heads cleaned. The commanding feeling he felt at that moment could not be described as anything else but happiness. He wants power,not for his body, not for his mind, but for his peace. For a long time, he had been led by power, taken by power, and given power, which paled the blood of his kin. Perhaps if he was the most powerful person to exist in all mankind, perhaps he could find the peace he had been taken from. It seemed lonely to be at the top, but at least no one would die around you. "I desire power, not for killing, not for revenge, but for the only thing that could help me feel human again." |
BobTheKekMasterJun 21, 2016 5:51 AM
Jun 14, 2016 2:02 AM
#11
Name: Setsu Bluestar Picture: Age: 18 Gender: Female Personality: she acts really cool, and she's a cold person. She is pretty sexy, but if she become close to someone she wold worry about this person, deep down she is kind girl. Current Mobster Rank: Rank 10: Thug Current Charisma Points: Charisma Points=0 Abilities:Karmic Chain Description of your ability when used in the SCHEME / RP Play Story Line: Karmic Chain: Threaten opponents by bluffing that Setsu has set traps around the perimeter surrounding the opponent, makes the opponent unable to walk around freely for 3 to 4 turns, and thus cannot leave the location during this state. However if you too excessively, opponents may realize that its only a bluffing. So Setsu has to use it wisely with good wordings to make a believable bluffing. Description of your ability when used in the MOB WAR: Karmic Chain: Stun enemy completely for 1 turn in his next turn, and damage him by 3 HP Weapon:Infinite Uses: Cross Tail it can be used both offensively and defensively. It takes the form of gloves and metallic fingertips with wire threads running through them, and it can be used in various ways to attack, defend against, or immobilize opponents. Mob to join: Luminaire Character biographyWhen Setsu was a little girl, she was saved by a stranger, it was war after all, this stranger was a little strange man, he was all the time seriouse. but he was really strong. because Setsu had no family and had no place tho go this man take her with him. this man was Cross Tail's user.. so he teach her. they where training all the time, and because of his help and his training she become stronger. but as they was having fun, on one fight this man was cut by an poision knife, and even thought they win this fight this man was in bad situation, so soon in few days he died, as he left to Setsu his weapons, and asked her to be strong and fined some other fighters and win this war together with friends.. soon or later setsu heard about this place, and than joined in Luminaire. |
philtecturophyJun 28, 2016 10:23 AM
Jun 14, 2016 2:05 PM
#12
@MysticalPhoenix Heya mystic!! Your character is really good, we liked it a lot. The only thing is your ability in the mobster fight, How exactly does it work? And what does it affect in the battle system? We thought about this ability giving you + 1 action per turn, so in rank thug that you usually would have 8 actions when you use your ability you would have 9 actions, What do you think? was this what you had in mind? Please explain this and you will be ready to go! :D @ThatKindDude Hey dude! Your character is pretty good too :D It's basically approved! There is just one thing that we didn't understand, that + knockback that you have in your ability, for what does it work? and how does it work? Well, maybe you would want to remove it, since i see little point in having it, or maybe it does have a use? please explain it for us ^^ If you choose remove it, then you are ready to start! Just a reminder: During Scheme you can't damage people, so your illusionary slash would just be a ilusion to scare or threaten. I guess you know this already, that's why you have put this name right? See ya in the RP! :D @kamina-uchiha Heya Kamina! Dude your character is very good^^ We really liked your ability in the MOB War, but it gives a huge problem in the Scheme, you can't kill people at the scheme so you must change it in order for your character to be approved ok? Remember, you can scare or threaten in the scheme, but you can't damage anyone. (the scheme is like a story part) @Frisky_Knuckles Hello Isaiah! There are some problem with your character abilitys :P First you can't damage people in the scheme, just in Mob Wars so this makes your ability invalid during the scheme please change it ^^ Also your ability is too much powerfull, If you want it to be like that, then it needs to be like Kamina Uchiha Characters ability (it's above yours), both do the same thing, the diference is that yours is way stronger, so for it to be fair, please change it to be like his ability. When you change it we will look at it again and approve it ^^ Your character biography is really cool :D @MadTsunTsun Hello Madtsun! Your Character is awesome, but there is a crucial problem in it, all mobs start with thug rank, and thug rank can only have one ability as you can see in this thread with further details: http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=1521407 As you get a new rank you can have more abilitys, so please choose one ability so we can see your character again and approve it ^^ |
fyruskingJun 14, 2016 2:14 PM
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Jun 14, 2016 2:11 PM
#13
one min |
Jun 14, 2016 2:37 PM
#14
@Tamoball Sure! we are looking foward for your character! Just tell us when it's finished :D @DestroyTheSauce Hello DestroyTheSauce! Your character is really good! we really liked his bio, philtecturophy in special was really fascinated by it xD Your character is all good ^^ Just a warning that you need to change in it, during scheme you can't damage players, so you must remove that part of yours that says it may severe injure a character. And well, it will be rare the times when NPC's appear in the story, only if you are the one to create it or something like this, so maybe you would want to change it so you could use it to scare or threaten a player during scheme ^^ So please change it and we will approve it :D @BobMcBobbeth Heya Bob! Your character story is good ^^ But there are several problems with your abilitys, the first would be You are thug Rank so you can only have one ability for now as you can see in this thread: http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=1521407 As you get a better rank you will be able to have more abilitys. The second one is that you can't damage anyone during the scheme, the scheme is the story, you aren't allowed to attack or fight anyone during the scheme, only in MOB wars, what makes one of your abilitys invalid. So please, create just one ability for now and try to not make it too much overpowered. Don't worry dude, that's normal, no need to call yourself dumb, you aren't dumb :D If you still don't understand anything, just call me or @philtecturophy and we will help you ^^ We are waiting for you to change it then we will give it another look and see if it's good to go ok? :D @Pretty-Setsu Hello Zetsu! Your characters is really good and well thinked, we really liked it! We saw you didn't put anything in the abilities description right? Why? We know it's your first time in this kind of RP so don't worry :D Well, you need to fill the abilities space, so your abilitie and weapon is basically a wire that is very sharp (sometimes) and that you are able to monitor it right? Well you can fill it in the Mob war scheme by using it for war purposes, like a trap that cuts and takes damage from an opponent if he goes through the trap or something like that (for example if enemy fell in the trap it would take 5 dmg). @philtecturophy said that a interesting possibility would be for you to bound an enemy making him unable to attack for 2 turns, if he attacks he will receive the same amount of damage he deals (if he attacks and does 5 dmg he receivs 5 dmg). Well it's a suggestion, you choose your ability ^^ But please remember as a thug rank character you can only have one ability, this means that you can only choose one of those effects for now, or it is a trap to find the enemy or it bounds an enemy, or it gives damage, when you get a better rank you can add more abilitys ^^ As for the scheme, remember you can't damage people at scheme so use it for simple things like, finding a person, or cutting a bit of it's cloths you choose :D We are waiting for you to change it so we can approve and roleplay togheter ^^ |
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Jun 14, 2016 9:39 PM
#15
@fyrusking Changed it, can only be used to destroy things now ^^ |
Jun 15, 2016 8:30 AM
#16
@Fyrusking Thnx :3 It gives her more escape routes and makes her able to dodge easier. Oh okay, so you mean I should add 9 things that she can do within Parkour? |
Jun 15, 2016 9:18 AM
#17
@Fyrusking THanks ^^ But the multiple bullet ability is part of her being good with guns. Sorry if it was a bit unclear :p |
I'm merely a deredere, tsundere, devidere, yandere, kudere and all dem other dere's :3 |
Jun 15, 2016 2:08 PM
#18
Just one thing when creating my char, the website that @Kiiii- used looks pretty convinient, there is no problem if I use this too, right? Because I kinda struggle at creating the personalities. |
Jun 15, 2016 2:12 PM
#19
hlanden said: Just one thing when creating my char, the website that @Kiiii- used looks pretty convinient, there is no problem if I use this too, right? Because I kinda struggle at creating the personalities. Oh, no problem. Use it too if you wish. I'm just using it as a placeholder though. :) |
Jun 15, 2016 3:16 PM
#20
You can still get a clear idea of what your character will be like when using that thing though. Would be very useful for me since I usually have the ideas in my head but don't have the right words to express them. |
Jun 15, 2016 6:05 PM
#21
@MysticalPhoenix Huum no i didn't want you to show me 9 things you can do with parkour xD Sorry if it was unclear, i was talking about the number of actions you can take in a turn, but that's ok. What do you think about changing the ability to be something like this: when you use it, the next damage you receive will be reduced by half Since there isn't a dodge system neither a "way" to be faster maybe you could do this. What do you think? @kamina-uchiha Hey Kamina! Well, about you scheme hability, the name must be the same in both, scheme and mob war, and well, there's no way to do this knife game you said (since i can't imagine a game with knifes xD) So what about your ability being like my intimidation or phil hipnotizing? Like that, you can get information of someone who has less charisma points than you. What do you thiink? if you accept, just change it to be like this and we will approve it :D @MadTsunTsun I see, so you are basically saying that this is all one ability of your character because she is good with fire arms? Well we see this as 4 abilitys and not one, please for now choose only one of these effects for your character ability you are currently rank thug, and thugs can't have more than 1 ability. When you get a better rank you can have more abilitys with other effects. Please read this thread: http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=1521407 @hlanden Yes you can use that site as a base please write something about him in the sheet, so people can get a picture of him easily without looking at a site with so much extensive reaging. No need to be anything deep, just the basic ok? Just like kiiii said, it's just a place holder for her right now, she will later change it. |
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Jun 15, 2016 7:33 PM
#22
done |
Jun 16, 2016 2:16 AM
#23
Sure, @fyrusking. I mean, won't be a problem if I answer the questions as my character would, and then write out a summary of the personality they got, right? |
Jun 16, 2016 8:07 AM
#24
@fyrusking That sound good! I'll add it to my character. And sorry about that. |
Jun 16, 2016 12:52 PM
#25
@MysticalPhoenix Great! your character is all right now Mystical! You are approved and ready to go! :D @kamina-uchiha No Kamina, i told you to make like my intimidation ability, not to change it's name to intimidation... The name of the ability must be the same in scheme and in Mob war Also you didn't took the part of the ability i said, you should add something like this: Uses the knife to threaten a person with lower charisma points, making the person tell him the information Please change it. (and don't use the word friend, cause it would restrict the ability just to friends). @hlanden Sure ^^ |
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Jun 16, 2016 1:31 PM
#26
@fyrusking Is mine approved now by the way? You told me you'd approve when I'd changed it, and that is done :) |
Jun 16, 2016 11:17 PM
#27
Here are the current status for the character creation: Approved: @MysticalPhoenix @ThatKindDude @DestroyTheSauce Waiting Approval: @BobMcBobbeth Need to modify: @kamina-uchiha @MadTsunTsun @Kiiii- @Frisky_Knuckles @Tamoball @Pretty-Setsu |
philtecturophyJun 17, 2016 10:43 AM
Jun 17, 2016 5:14 AM
#28
Give me some time please. Have a lot of schoolwork atm |
I'm merely a deredere, tsundere, devidere, yandere, kudere and all dem other dere's :3 |
Jun 17, 2016 10:25 AM
#29
fyrusking said: @Pretty-Setsu Hello Zetsu! Your characters is really good and well thinked, we really liked it! We saw you didn't put anything in the abilities description right? Why? We know it's your first time in this kind of RP so don't worry :D Well, you need to fill the abilities space, so your abilitie and weapon is basically a wire that is very sharp (sometimes) and that you are able to monitor it right? Well you can fill it in the Mob war scheme by using it for war purposes, like a trap that cuts and takes damage from an opponent if he goes through the trap or something like that (for example if enemy fell in the trap it would take 5 dmg). @philtecturophy said that a interesting possibility would be for you to bound an enemy making him unable to attack for 2 turns, if he attacks he will receive the same amount of damage he deals (if he attacks and does 5 dmg he receivs 5 dmg). Well it's a suggestion, you choose your ability ^^ But please remember as a thug rank character you can only have one ability, this means that you can only choose one of those effects for now, or it is a trap to find the enemy or it bounds an enemy, or it gives damage, when you get a better rank you can add more abilitys ^^ As for the scheme, remember you can't damage people at scheme so use it for simple things like, finding a person, or cutting a bit of it's cloths you choose :D We are waiting for you to change it so we can approve and roleplay togheter ^^ @fyrusking hello :P and i am not "Z"etsu.. i am "S"etsu :D :D :D well yea.. i did not put anything in the abilities description because i do not know what can i say there, i toled what powers she has so i think she would fight with the powers what i write in Abilities . i really do not think she will have different powers in "SCHEME / RP Play Story Line" or "MOB WAR" i thought we have all the same powers... or should i get more in detals? well @philtecturophy was right :D but i do not get how can i do that :D (for me to bound an enemy making him unable to attack for 2 turns) so i will be thankfull if you would tell me more about fighting skills and i know i can have only one power.. my character use only one power.. just she has good imagination so she can make this spear to make intoher power.. this weapon helps her to atack and protect herself too, an she cant to both at the same time and at last.. what should i change? i should add my abilities description right? well.. i have no idea what should i write.. so will you help me? |
Jun 19, 2016 3:30 PM
#30
@ThatKindDude Hey dude! You are all ready to go! Some of people already started, so you should too :D @kamina-uchiha Hey Kamina! Huum dude, when i told you to do an ability just like my intimidation ability, i wanted to say that yours should have the same effect as mine (intimidate a person with lower charisma points to obtain information). Also the name of your ability in the mob war and in scheme must be the same. Please change it. @Tamoball @Nice We are waiting for you guys characters! Hope they are cool :D @BobMcBobbeth @Philtecturophy will soon give the reply about your character ok Bob? Wait just a little more! @Pretty-Setsu So sorry Setsu! I will say your name correctly from now on xD Well, i think you are confused because you are thinking the Scheme and the Mob War are the same thing, but there is a crucial difference Setsu, The scheme is more like a story, and the you can't damage other people While in the mob war you can damage other (you need to in order to win the war). So you need a use for your ability in the scheme and in mob war, think of something that would be usefull to harm your opponent in the mob war and something that will help you in the scheme Like i said before those sharp strings of your weapon can be used to damage in the war, and to cut some things in the scheme or something like that xD @Philtecturophy, will explain it in details for you, so you can understand it a little better ok? Also he has thought of some abilities that you could use ^^ |
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Jun 19, 2016 3:33 PM
#31
[quote=fyrusking message=46553806]@ThatKindDude Hey dude! You are all ready to go! Some of people already started, so you should too :D Ohhh lol, I didnt know we started...my bad hehehe |
Jun 19, 2016 3:49 PM
#32
fyrusking said: @Pretty-Setsu So sorry Setsu! I will say your name correctly from now on xD Well, i think you are confused because you are thinking the Scheme and the Mob War are the same thing, but there is a crucial difference Setsu, The scheme is more like a story, and the you can't damage other people While in the mob war you can damage other (you need to in order to win the war). So you need a use for your ability in the scheme and in mob war, think of something that would be usefull to harm your opponent in the mob war and something that will help you in the scheme Like i said before those sharp strings of your weapon can be used to damage in the war, and to cut some things in the scheme or something like that xD @Philtecturophy, will explain it in details for you, so you can understand it a little better ok? Also he has thought of some abilities that you could use ^^ @fyrusking Oh.. It's OK.. But thanks for calling me Setsu :D So they are not same staff?? Oh I see So in war I should write powers that will be attacks.. So I could hurt other By in other.. What will help me.. But is not it same? Well I am really bad at powers and if @Philtecturophyhas any ideas pleas let me know pm me or write here I will be super happy and thankful Thanks |
Jun 19, 2016 10:30 PM
#33
@BobMcBobbeth: Hey bob, how is it going friend? :) So about your character creation, after discussing with fyrusking, we agree the ability decimating swing instead of adrenaline junkie. So for the decimating swing, the damage is 3 instead of 2.5, just to round the numbers up is more convenient to be used in Mob War. Also there is no head attack lol XD And the damage is increased by 1 every rank up is okay. So, don't forget to also accordingly modify your scheme ability okay. The scheme ability needs to have the same name as in Mob War ability, but the ability should only can cause mental or psychological damage. @Pretty-Setsu Hello Setsu, how are you doin today? ^^ So the summarize what fyrus said, the SCHEME is where you actually do the normal RP-ing, like making convo and storyline. In SCHEME you can only damage your opponent mentally or physically, like strangling, threatening, anything but not physical damage. In MOB WAR, you can do actual physical damage. That is why we need to use actual numbers that cause someone's HP (Health Power) to reduce or increase. In MOB WAR, there will be actual blood :) So here I am trying to make an ability for you, lemme know if you think this represent your character well okay ^^ Scheme Ability: Karmic Chain Threaten opponents by bluffing that Setsu has set traps around the perimeter surrounding the opponent, makes the opponent unable to walk around freely for 3 to 4 turns, and thus cannot leave the location during this state. However if you too excessively, opponents may realize that its only a bluffing. So Setsu has to use it wisely with good wordings to make a believable bluffing. Mob War Ability: Karmic Chain Stab a person with a sharp thin wires. The chain is then automatically disassembled if an enemy moves within his next 2 turns. During the 2 turns period, if enemy moves, he will be damaged by [3 times Setsu's current maximum action]. If moves after this 2 turns period, he will be damaged only by 3 HP. What do you think Setsu? Let me or fyrusking know if any questions okay ^^ |
Jun 20, 2016 4:38 AM
#34
philtecturophy said: @Pretty-Setsu Hello Setsu, how are you doin today? ^^ So the summarize what fyrus said, the SCHEME is where you actually do the normal RP-ing, like making convo and storyline. In SCHEME you can only damage your opponent mentally or physically, like strangling, threatening, anything but not physical damage. In MOB WAR, you can do actual physical damage. That is why we need to use actual numbers that cause someone's HP (Health Power) to reduce or increase. In MOB WAR, there will be actual blood :) So here I am trying to make an ability for you, lemme know if you think this represent your character well okay ^^ Scheme Ability: Karmic Chain Threaten opponents by bluffing that Setsu has set traps around the perimeter surrounding the opponent, makes the opponent unable to walk around freely for 3 to 4 turns, and thus cannot leave the location during this state. However if you too excessively, opponents may realize that its only a bluffing. So Setsu has to use it wisely with good wordings to make a believable bluffing. Mob War Ability: Karmic Chain Stab a person with a sharp thin wires. The chain is then automatically disassembled if an enemy moves within his next 2 turns. During the 2 turns period, if enemy moves, he will be damaged by [3 times Setsu's current maximum action]. If moves after this 2 turns period, he will be damaged only by 3 HP. What do you think Setsu? Let me or fyrusking know if any questions okay ^^ @philtecturophy well i get it now.. well i like his powers.. and can i add something more? or i should have only one ability? |
Jun 20, 2016 4:58 AM
#35
@Pretty-Setsu: Hey Setsu, glad that you liked it ^^ Hmm, since you are currently a mobster rank:Thug, thus you can only have 1 ability. Later on when you have higher rank, you can get more abilities :) Whenever you are ready, you can modify your ability, then we can start RP-ing in Luminaire XD |
Jun 20, 2016 5:07 AM
#36
@philtecturophy ok i added them.. thanks for your help :) |
Jun 20, 2016 5:20 AM
#37
@Pretty-Setsu: Looks great. I have edited your post a bit to suit the proper format :) Hey Setsu, we can start the RP now :3 |
Jun 20, 2016 5:37 AM
#38
@philtecturophy really?? cool. let's rp :P |
Jun 20, 2016 5:41 AM
#39
@Pretty-Setsu: Alrightt ^^ go here: http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=1521423 |
Jun 20, 2016 12:03 PM
#40
Name: Gale Picture: Age: 18 Gender: Male Personality: Arrogant, condescending, bratish, sensitive, cold, selfish Current Mobster Rank: 10 Current Charisma Points: 0 Abilities: Precision martial arts Description of your ability when used in the SCHEME / RP Play Story Line: Precision martial arts: Gale smashes various objects in the room with his badass ninja skillz in an attempt to scare the subject into giving information to him. This only affects characters with lower charisma points than Gale. Description of your ability when used in the MOB WAR: Precision martial arts: Gale strikes the opponent in such a way as to cause internal bleeding resulting in two health points lost per turn over the course of 5 turns Weapon: Mob to join: High Society Character biography Gale is the second born son of a notorious godfather, ever since birth Gale has been above just about everybody excluding his father leading him to become somewhat of an elitist. Although he is proficient in martial arts and possesses a good brain and gray morality his father believed him to be far too immature and arrogant to possibly take over his criminal empire, but it wasn't until he killed an important member of another gang when he was supposed to be negotiating land rights with them, merely because he wasn't fond of his tone that his father decided he was an insult to the family's name. So Gale was disowned, cast out, and told to come back once he was a real man. All he had was his clothes, gun, and a package from his father which contained enough money to last him for a few months and a note with "Go to the High Soceity and seek enlightenment, I'm sure you'll love it there ;)" written on it. And so, after searching for a month he has finally found his way to High Society |
ErazmusJul 14, 2016 2:28 PM
Jun 20, 2016 2:22 PM
#41
Are you kidding me? That was brilliant as far as I'm concerned. |
Jun 20, 2016 2:27 PM
#42
Jun 20, 2016 10:37 PM
#43
@BobMcBobbeth: Thanks bob for the adjustment. Also fyrusking and I discussed that this line "(Damage is increased by 0.5 per rank above thug)" should be discarded. Because when mobster rank gets higher, you can wield more abilities and use them simultaneously in mob war. So no need to make an ability to get stronger. Thanks bob :) |
Jun 21, 2016 5:15 AM
#44
philtecturophy said: @BobMcBobbeth: Thanks bob for the adjustment. Also fyrusking and I discussed that this line "(Damage is increased by 0.5 per rank above thug)" should be discarded. Because when mobster rank gets higher, you can wield more abilities and use them simultaneously in mob war. So no need to make an ability to get stronger. Thanks bob :) Done ^^ |
Jun 21, 2016 5:49 AM
#45
@BobMcBobbeth: Hey bob, that looks great. Just another small thing. The ability in the scheme should only be able to mentally or psychologically damage people. So no physical attack is allowed in scheme ability. Another small thing is that in the Abilities, the adrenaline junkie should be replaced by decimating swing, without description in it. Other than that, everything looks perfect :) |
Jun 21, 2016 5:52 AM
#46
philtecturophy said: @BobMcBobbeth: Hey bob, that looks great. Just another small thing. The ability in the scheme should only be able to mentally or psychologically damage people. So no physical attack is allowed in scheme ability. Another small thing is that in the Abilities, the adrenaline junkie should be replaced by decimating swing, without description in it. Other than that, everything looks perfect :) Done again ^^ |
Jun 21, 2016 6:11 AM
#47
@BobMcBobbeth: Looks perfect Bob, now you can join the RP XD |
Jun 21, 2016 6:22 AM
#48
philtecturophy said: @BobMcBobbeth: Looks perfect Bob, now you can join the RP XD Sooo Phil could you take a look at my character now, I want to join asap :3 |
Jun 21, 2016 6:37 AM
#49
@Erazmus: Hey Erazmus, for the approval, each character has to be evaluated through discussion between fyrus and me, which will be conducted soon, perhaps tonight or tomorrow at latest. But for the brief inspection, Scheme ability can only damage people mentally or psychologically such as threatening, but not physical damage. Your "Precision martial arts" should be both in the Scheme and Mob War ability, but when use it there it in scheme, should results in or represent such mental effect. Lemme know if any questions ^^ |
Jun 21, 2016 6:42 AM
#50
philtecturophy said: Scheme ability can only damage people mentally or psychologically such as threatening, but not physical damage. Mhm, "Precision martial arts" does not physically damage them, it only makes them experience physical pain as a result of attacking a nerve. For example if you press on a certain spot below the thumb your hand will hurt like hell, but it won't actually be damaged, it'll just feel awful. |
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