| what ever everything is back. |
130nuNov 30, 2014 10:33 AM
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| review... worst piece of sh*t i've ever seen please just remove this the grammar is horrible, the plot is boring. just no |
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| ok now that ive read it i can give an honest review |
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| Took a while, but it's finally here! I wonder if someone gave you a little hand with it yesterday, if that's so maybe you should say thanks to him somewhere XD Welp, I know what's going on already, so I'll just have to wait for more. :P |
 "You keep changing the shape of your eyes. How does that even work?" -AbhLeaderKrelian |
| O.O you turned into a MG????? |
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| :3 |
| a wild Ocu read that and disappeared |
| Aw shit nigga! Did you just trade in your keys for a lock? Anyway pretty good for someone who hasn't written anything before, can't find much fault with the first chapter and won't be able to make a full on judgement until I've really managed to get a taste of your writing style. Keep up the good work. |
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Clarus_Nox said: review... worst piece of sh*t i've ever seen please just remove this the grammar is horrible, the plot is boring. just no Did you just steal my shtick bitch? You fucked up now son! You will face the true wrath of a slav now! *Cough cough* Meemeemeemeemeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee... Come forth slav gods hear my song This son of Czech calls on you all Descend, descend Give me strength To slay those who insult our squats Yes, I can feel the power of my slavic ancestors flowing through me! Behold my true power and beware! *squats and pulls some vodka out of his tracksuit, absolutely nothing else happens* |
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| hm |
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| Are you trying to make me hot for you 130? Seriously though it's interesting seeing someone actually play with the gender switched concept on the island, I'm really interested in seeing how you're gonna play with that... The concept not the pussy... Pussy's good too though. |
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| Geez, just dove right in there after joining the girls club...supposed to have some decorum or something, right? @Mdude - Since you mentioned it, there are...similar things going on over in my neck of the woods. |
| Ahahah! Nu! You little perv! XD |
"You keep changing the shape of your eyes. How does that even work?" -AbhLeaderKrelian |
130nu said: a black blouse and a dark blue skirt. I was unsure if I was happy or upset however to find no underwear. commando in a skirt huh? |
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| *Currently pressing B* |
"You keep changing the shape of your eyes. How does that even work?" -AbhLeaderKrelian |
| I've heard it can be a huge pain in the ass to get one of those transforms reversed =P I'm sure you should probably be fine as long as you don't run into futa monsters or anything. |
| :3 |
| Nigga you better get yourself a bra or them tits are gonna start sagging soon. |
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| Well that happened. So judging by the way that she addresses the issue, Mia isn’t really interested in you anymore “in that way”? |
| Remember YuLu, we're counting on you to be the harshest critic here since none of us are women. |
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| ._. |
| :3 |
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YummyLunches said: ._. You are a bearer of a vagina, the responsibility to tell 130 "that's not what that would feel like" rests entirely upon you! Go forth my wayward daughter! Go forth and spread your wisdom! *Sheds a few tears* They grow up so fast, one day they're that cute little girl sitting on your shoulders but eventually the stubble starts scratching the back of your neck. |
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| Well, I could, but that’s a bit, not nice. If you’re saying what I think you’re saying, then I’ll have you know that there are techniques that do not result in stubble. Now I personally do not like stubble anywhere anytime, so I happen to pull hairs out, even “there”. |
| Like... Individually with tweezers or just some fucking hot wax shit? Good god woman, how could you do that to your genitalia? |
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| Yay derail? Tweezers and an epilator. |
YummyLunches said: Yay derail? What can I say, years on 4chan have made me very good at derailing threads. Also I looked up what an epilator is, that's not a hygienic product, it's a fucking torture device. |
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| *takes notes* |
| *copies Ocu's notes* |
"You keep changing the shape of your eyes. How does that even work?" -AbhLeaderKrelian |
| *hugs a cute Sydo with the passion of a million hitlers* |
| This is also relevant to my...uh...interests. Can I get a copy of those notes? |
| I see what you did there. |
| :D noice |
| Maybe you'll end up with company to make the trip seem a bit shorter =) |
130nu said: I turned to a random page in the book and arrived to a section called Sabbath In A Nutshell. I don't know why but the idea of an ancient witches tome having a section called "Sabbath In A Nutshell" is pretty funny to me. Also I noticed you made reference to seasons in the story. Do we actually have season in the MSG? Does that mean it snows on the island outside of mountains at certain points in the year? |
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mdude009 said: 130nu said: I turned to a random page in the book and arrived to a section called Sabbath In A Nutshell. I don't know why but the idea of an ancient witches tome having a section called "Sabbath In A Nutshell" is pretty funny to me. Also I noticed you made reference to seasons in the story. Do we actually have season in the MSG? Does that mean it snows on the island outside of mountains at certain points in the year? According to Su (this came up a long while back and I don't think we planned to change it), there are normal seasons across the island. The actual implementation of that gets a bit more sketchy, and might need to be something we bring up in the rules discussion... |
| H-he really put the Sydopedia inside this... *facepalm* |
"You keep changing the shape of your eyes. How does that even work?" -AbhLeaderKrelian |
emeraldtryst said: Geez, just dove right in there after joining the girls club...supposed to have some decorum or something, right? I'm gonna have to stick up for him here and say I would have done the same thing. |
| well... great start and waiting for more. |
| I didn't know you liked "fisting" nu. You kinky son of a gun XD Loved the chapter and I see what you mean by what you said at lunch today about this disturbing part :L Keep up the good work. |
130nu said: I had forgotten my shoes at Mia’s house in my rush to leave. By the time I realized I had, however, I was too far away to turn back without wasting time. How would it take you that long to not realize you were wearing shoes? Wouldn't that realization be pretty much instant the second you set foot on the ground? Also, your first time and you can already take an arm? Damn man, that spell didn't make you a woman, it made you a naturally born slut, this is gonna be a good story. |
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| I literally don't know what to say to this except: |
JPAI27 said: I literally don't know what to say to this except: couldn't agree more.... I think I'm going to like this story... |
| Yeah... cool chapter... *shivers* |
"You keep changing the shape of your eyes. How does that even work?" -AbhLeaderKrelian |
| :D your h-scenes are too short :D |
Ocu said: :D your h-scenes are too short :D That can be fixed |
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| He is the opposite of me, more adventure writing where I am more of a the romantic and love writer. I like how your story is going Nu and I can't wait for your next chapter. I would love to read a Nu written H-scene though :L |
Senpai_Helix said: I would love to read a Nu written H-scene though :L Nu! Do it you faggot! *shakes fist in menacing manner* |
"You keep changing the shape of your eyes. How does that even work?" -AbhLeaderKrelian |
Senpai_Helix said: I would love to read a Nu written H-scene though :L Lets go Nu! Stop delegating! Determine the future of your own ******! SydoKiller said: Nu! Do it you faggot! |
130nu said: “So why don’t we have a little fun” she said this as she reached up and pulled me down to her height. I was too far under the influence of the aphrodisiac to resist as she pulled me into a deep kiss. At some point during the kiss my knees buckled and I fell on to her with the small girl deftly turning us over, leaving her atop me. guys i attempted at starting it as this is what i got written before i guess i should say freezing up and panicing then askign nox for help :L be glad im making attempts ok! ... you know what fuck it taking chapter down it will be back eventually and i guess i will give yall a super shitty scene form me happy now -_- |
130nuNov 24, 2014 5:53 PM
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