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May 5, 2017 7:08 AM

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Fair enough points. But i disagree with the first one. Think about it from Big Mom's perspective. Vinsmokes are assassins. How can she trust them? and why bother helping them out when she can simply eliminate them and seize their tech for herself? She doesn't need scientists but an army that is willing to do anything for her.

Of course at the same time she trusted Capone which is just stupid. But we don't know what made her do that. Maybe he earned her trust slowly over the timeskip.
May 5, 2017 7:30 AM

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@MoonStar9
Fair enough points. But i disagree with the first one. Think about it from Big Mom's perspective. Vinsmokes are assassins. How can she trust them? and why bother helping them out when she can simply eliminate them and seize their tech for herself? She doesn't need scientists but an army that is willing to do anything for her.

Of course at the same time she trusted Capone which is just stupid. But we don't know what made her do that. Maybe he earned her trust slowly over the timeskip.


Big Mom has Caesar Clown, the man who was working for Joker and Kaidou, as well as Capone, the man who is known for killing the Head of prestigious families and gangs for the lols, both working for her. Capone is even married into her family and is appointed a high ranking seat within her Crew. Trust is the last thing she should be concerned about. Hell, the Vinsmokes are more trustworthy than Caesar and Capone as they have something she can offer them that they can't get anywhere else. She is of use to them being alive. Her not trusting them doesn't make sense to be honest.
May 5, 2017 8:57 AM

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ambrose7 said:
@MoonStar9
Fair enough points. But i disagree with the first one. Think about it from Big Mom's perspective. Vinsmokes are assassins. How can she trust them? and why bother helping them out when she can simply eliminate them and seize their tech for herself? She doesn't need scientists but an army that is willing to do anything for her.

Of course at the same time she trusted Capone which is just stupid. But we don't know what made her do that. Maybe he earned her trust slowly over the timeskip.


Big Mom has Caesar Clown, the man who was working for Joker and Kaidou, as well as Capone, the man who is known for killing the Head of prestigious families and gangs for the lols, both working for her. Capone is even married into her family and is appointed a high ranking seat within her Crew. Trust is the last thing she should be concerned about. Hell, the Vinsmokes are more trustworthy than Caesar and Capone as they have something she can offer them that they can't get anywhere else. She is of use to them being alive. Her not trusting them doesn't make sense to be honest.

However unlike Capone and Caesar, Vinsmokes actually command an army. Capone has but one crew. As long as the Vinsmokes are alive, the clones would be under their command. Sure technically it would be Big Mom in power, but they could turn at any moment. Not trusting the Vinsmokes and taking control of the army for herself makes more sense to me.
May 5, 2017 9:01 AM
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@MoonStar9. You make alot of good points, but plot induced stupidity is a staple of Shounen writing. Convenience as well. I mean look at Enies Lobby, where the Strawhats ship of all things saved the crew through the power of friendship, Luffy won his fight by receiving a friendship powerup & the Marines destroyed their own base due to retarded behaviour, preventing them from catching the Strawhats.

Yet, it´s hailed as one of the best arcs of One Piece. The reason is simple.
It was different from what we had seen before from the series.
Something that cannot be said about the Totland arc.


1.The Arc, is a rescue mission, for a teammember, that left the crew, supposedly for their own safety, again!
2. The Strawhats got needlesly captured, again!
3.They escaped their imprisonment because their capturer and his henchmen are incompetent idiots, that went on explaining their schemes like awrful Bond villains, again.
4. A crewmember and Luffy have a meaningless scuffle that leads nowhere, AGAIN!


Then there is the whole buildup that doesn´t even remotely live up to expectations that Oda himself initiated.

Big Mom is not Spandam! She´s supposed to be that nigh omnipotent threat with decades of experiences resting on her shoulders and yet througouht her arc she and the majority of her crew behaved, either like toddlers throwing temper tantrums or one dimensional teenage bullies whose countries infrastructure resembles more that of a school yard rather than a functioning dictatorship, or a Yakuza family like many try to point out.
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ambrose7 said:
MoonStar9 said:


Big Mom has Caesar Clown, the man who was working for Joker and Kaidou, as well as Capone, the man who is known for killing the Head of prestigious families and gangs for the lols, both working for her. Capone is even married into her family and is appointed a high ranking seat within her Crew. Trust is the last thing she should be concerned about. Hell, the Vinsmokes are more trustworthy than Caesar and Capone as they have something she can offer them that they can't get anywhere else. She is of use to them being alive. Her not trusting them doesn't make sense to be honest.

However unlike Capone and Caesar, Vinsmokes actually command an army. Capone has but one crew. As long as the Vinsmokes are alive, the clones would be under their command. Sure technically it would be Big Mom in power, but they could turn at any moment. Not trusting the Vinsmokes and taking control of the army for herself makes more sense to me.


Caesar's link to Kaidou, the most powerful thing ever, is far more dangerous than the Vinsmokes whose army isn't even strong enough to win them back the North Blue! And so is Capone who is literally the enemy of entire wealth. The Vinsmoke are of no threat to her whatsoever. The Germa would listen to the Vinsmokes who would listen to Big Mom. It's no different to the Fishmen who she has ties to through the Sun Pirates, or any Pirate crew allied with her technically. The Germa are bioengineered to obey the Vinsmokes so how does killing their masters grant her control of them? It makes no sense to kill them, at least not until she has genetically enhanced super soldiers of her own using their technology, full knowledge of their technological advancements, collaborative scientific projects in the works to benefit her in the future, and an heir through Sanji and Pudding to claim the Vinsmoke empire, and even then it would be daft to get rid of allied forces.


@Isterio

That is exactly the reason. I can accept bumbling idiots being a part of lesser Pirate Crews and even the Marines, but in an arc where the SHs have infiltrated a Yonko home base and they should, for all intents and purposes end up like Kidd after his encounter with Kaidou, one can't help but notice the glaring string of plot contrivances and dumb characters that have prevented that chapter after chapter. Can you imagine this happening with Shanks' crew? Of course not! WCI is a great setting with unique characters and an interesting plot executed horribly.

And please don't remind me of the sentient Merry-Go. Everyone talks about how they cried for a ship, while I couldn't believe the dumbness I was watching. That in fact may just be the dumbest thing in One Piece to date.
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And please don't remind me of the sentient Merry-Go. Everyone talks about how they cried for a ship, while I couldn't believe the dumbness I was watching. That in fact may just be the dumbest thing in One Piece to date.


Sorry, but I have to call that shit out. I was a teenager when this was written, hell I could have been 7 and I would have called it out as the bullshit it was. The sentient ship was such retarded apologetic bullcrap

It was basicly Oda telling the audience. DERRP, you see guys I cannot kill a SH crewmember so i gave the ship a soul and than it dies because friendship or something...

I´m gonna say it now. Woever cried for the ship or even till this day thinks the moment wasn´t retarded is a mentally disabled baby. I understand that Anime in a sense is escapism and suspension of disbelief is judged by the individual but even Fairy Tail doesn´t have anything this dumb in it and the Teletubbies or My little Pony are more fitting shows for that person to watch.

And I´ve heard the bullshit excuse of "but the music makes it sad" , or I am sad for the characters I like.

Well this is the power of music!
May 6, 2017 3:11 AM

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Isterio said:
MoonStar9 said:


And please don't remind me of the sentient Merry-Go. Everyone talks about how they cried for a ship, while I couldn't believe the dumbness I was watching. That in fact may just be the dumbest thing in One Piece to date.


Sorry, but I have to call that shit out. I was a teenager when this was written, hell I could have been 7 and I would have called it out as the bullshit it was. The sentient ship was such retarded apologetic bullcrap

It was basicly Oda telling the audience. DERRP, you see guys I cannot kill a SH crewmember so i gave the ship a soul and than it dies because friendship or something...

I´m gonna say it now. Woever cried for the ship or even till this day thinks the moment wasn´t retarded is a mentally disabled baby. I understand that Anime in a sense is escapism and suspension of disbelief is judged by the individual but even Fairy Tail doesn´t have anything this dumb in it and the Teletubbies or My little Pony are more fitting shows for that person to watch.

And I´ve heard the bullshit excuse of "but the music makes it sad" , or I am sad for the characters I like.

Well this is the power of music!


I also watched it when I was a teen. It was a really dumb way to justify Usopp's obsession with the ship and to get the SHs out of a pickle. It seriously took me out of the moment, especially watching the SHs cry while the ship burnt. I remember just awkwardly staring at my laptop screen stunned by the fact they were crying over a taking ship. Was I really watching One Piece? The two biggest criticisms I've seen in this series are Pell surviving and the fact that characters rarely die, but no-one ever brings up the sentient ship. Maybe they blocked it out... Funnily, Oda never did it ever again, and I'm grateful so I can pretend it never happened.
May 6, 2017 3:32 AM
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I also watched it when I was a teen. It was a really dumb way to justify Usopp's obsession with the ship and to get the SHs out of a pickle. It seriously took me out of the moment, especially watching the SHs cry while the ship burnt. I remember just awkwardly staring at my laptop screen stunned by the fact they were crying over a taking ship. Was I really watching One Piece? The two biggest criticisms I've seen in this series are Pell surviving and the fact that characters rarely die, but no-one ever brings up the sentient ship. Maybe they blocked it out... Funnily, Oda never did it ever again, and I'm grateful so I can pretend it never happened.


I read it first and my best friend who got me into One Piece already had told me in advance what would happen, since I don´t care much about spoilers. My immediate thoughts were "really?" and he was uneasy explaining it to me, knowing full well how cheesy and dumb this was.

And it wasn´t even the good kind of cheese like the enjoyable bad one or the melodramatic sad/fun one. It´s just baffling how idiots proclaim this as a tearworthy moment.
May 6, 2017 3:45 AM

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ambrose7 said:

However unlike Capone and Caesar, Vinsmokes actually command an army. Capone has but one crew. As long as the Vinsmokes are alive, the clones would be under their command. Sure technically it would be Big Mom in power, but they could turn at any moment. Not trusting the Vinsmokes and taking control of the army for herself makes more sense to me.


Caesar's link to Kaidou, the most powerful thing ever, is far more dangerous than the Vinsmokes whose army isn't even strong enough to win them back the North Blue! And so is Capone who is literally the enemy of entire wealth. The Vinsmoke are of no threat to her whatsoever. The Germa would listen to the Vinsmokes who would listen to Big Mom. It's no different to the Fishmen who she has ties to through the Sun Pirates, or any Pirate crew allied with her technically. The Germa are bioengineered to obey the Vinsmokes so how does killing their masters grant her control of them? It makes no sense to kill them, at least not until she has genetically enhanced super soldiers of her own using their technology, full knowledge of their technological advancements, collaborative scientific projects in the works to benefit her in the future, and an heir through Sanji and Pudding to claim the Vinsmoke empire, and even then it would be daft to get rid of allied forces..


The way Kaido and Black Beard are collecting devil fruits, it feels as if they are building an army for something huge. All Big Mom has are her children and homies. And she perhaps wants to add the Germa clones to her arsenal. As for the Vinsmokes being a threat I never meant directly. Think about a scenario where the Vinsmokes are given a task to complete and they stab her in the back and side with the enemy. The entire cloner army will do the same and that would harm Big Mom's plans. The marriage feels like a trap sprung to goad Vinsmokes into moving their army to Whole Cake island along with their tech so that Big Mom can seize them all for herself after eliminating the Vinsmokes. Ofc not exactly a flawless plan but this is a battle shounen manga.
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I´m gonna say it now. Woever cried for the ship or even till this day thinks the moment wasn´t retarded is a mentally disabled baby. I understand that Anime in a sense is escapism and suspension of disbelief is judged by the individual but even Fairy Tail doesn´t have anything this dumb in it and the Teletubbies or My little Pony are more fitting shows for that person to watch.


The only stupid one here is being you pal, first of all, it fits in just fine thematically with a fantastic (2nd definition of) story like One Piece that is inspired by pirate lore. It was also implied in the story Oda had the concept in mind since Skypeia.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Kobold#Water_spirits

People can feel emotions from whatever the reason they felt impacted them and you have no business calling people "mentally disabled" because you personally didn't like it.

You are far more toxic than any so called "One Piece-tard" the way you constantly delude yourself into thinking that only OP has overzealous defenders and everyone from every other fanbase is a rational fan who can listen to criticism.

You probably have had bad experiences with some fans to make you feel that bad, I can imagine.

@MoonStar9 thanks for answering, I agree on some things you mentioned.

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SuperRed said:
Isterio said:

I´m gonna say it now. Woever cried for the ship or even till this day thinks the moment wasn´t retarded is a mentally disabled baby. I understand that Anime in a sense is escapism and suspension of disbelief is judged by the individual but even Fairy Tail doesn´t have anything this dumb in it and the Teletubbies or My little Pony are more fitting shows for that person to watch.


The only stupid one here is being you pal, first of all, it fits in just fine thematically with a fantastic (2nd definition of) story like One Piece that is inspired by pirate lore. It was also implied in the story Oda had the concept in mind since Skypeia.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Kobold#Water_spirits

People can feel emotions from whatever the reason they felt impacted them and you have no business calling people "mentally disabled" because you personally didn't like it.

You are far more toxic than any so called "One Piece-tard" the way you constantly delude yourself into thinking that only OP has overzealous defenders and everyone from every other fanbase is a rational fan who can listen to criticism.

@MoonStar9 thanks for answering, I agree on some things you mentioned.



Mate, don´t try to be smart with me I grew up within the culture that created this bullshit fantasy mythos. In german they are called "Klabautermann" and this little guy here is their older than your parents figurehead,
a cultural staple, of the country, much like Pokemon or One Piece for Japan

Guess what? The show, he is the protagonist of, is aimed at toddlers.
Do you have the standards of a toddler? This is the definition of a retarded person. No offense to anyone, but those people are called retarded because they never develop mentally past the toddler stage. If you like dumb, entertainment aimed at toddlers more power to you, but you can´t defend it as intellectual content. It doesn´t matter, when Oda foreshadowed t´s existance within the story, through implication. The plot device is dumb and convenient to the point of resembling actual Fairy Tales in structure.

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May 6, 2017 1:12 PM

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Lol, I've seen criticisms of Klabautermann but this is rather excessively passionate.
I agree to the extent that we already knew the ship had a soul and it didn't *need* to *literally* talk. Merry talking was extremely cheesy even for One Piece standards. Just showing Klabuttermann would have been enough.

I liked the ship's funeral, though. It's just silly enough for One Piece standards. Maybe it talking was a little *too* silly. But eh, it was only once. And like most things in One Piece, it didn't come completely out of left field. The ship having a soul was built up throughout Water 7 and Enies Lobby.

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@Big Mom is not Spandam! She´s supposed to be that nigh omnipotent threat with decades of experiences resting on her shoulders and yet througouht her arc she and the majority of her crew behaved, either like toddlers throwing temper tantrums or one dimensional teenage bullies whose countries infrastructure resembles more that of a school yard rather than a functioning dictatorship, or a Yakuza family like many try to point out.

Eh, I think people are making a bit too big of a deal about this. One Piece characters in high positions who should be expertise at what they do are instead really really ridiculous and silly, it happens ALL the time (The Straw-Hat Pirates are obviously the symbol of this, but hell, the Red Hair Pirates from the beginning of the series qualify).

I'd admit though, if Oda wants to allow her to keep her credibility, Big Mom needs to not go down this arc. It's absolutely imperative to the whole of the Emperor system and therefore the upcoming Wano arc that Big Mom is NOT defeated now.
ashfrliebertMay 6, 2017 1:21 PM
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Lol, I've seen criticisms of Klabautermann but this is rather excessively passionate.
I agree to the extent that we already knew the ship had a soul and it didn't *need* to *literally* talk. Merry talking was extremely cheesy even for One Piece standards. Just showing Klabuttermann would have been enough.

I liked the ship's funeral, though. It's just silly enough for One Piece standards. Maybe it talking was a little *too* silly. But eh, it was only once. And like most things in One Piece, it didn't come completely out of left field. The ship having a soul was built up throughout Water 7 and Enies Lobby.


Let´s dissect this piece by piece.
Oda introduced the concept, of a ship, an inanimate object, having a soul. Fine, it´s a fantasy world, he´s it´s omnipotent god and free to introduce that rule into that universe. Now, the immediate question,that comes to mind is. What to do with that concept?
Oda´s answer was, to introduce it as a MacGuffin for the sole sake of creating artifical conflct within the Strawhat crew and abuse it´s deus ex machina powers whenever he needed them.

The first instance, where the ship´s "soul" was introduced, was when Oda used it´s deus ex machina nature, to save Chopper and Gan Fall, from drowning. This situation they were in would have meant certain death, otherwise. Literally on the introduction of the ship´s sentience, he used this new concept to get one of his characters out of danger. Then we are given a further hint towards it´s formerly only implied existance, when it repairs itself and only Ussop witnesses the event, to foreshadow the future conflict. The foreshadowing in itself was fine, the saving of Chopper on the other hand was bullshit.
The existance of the Going Merry developing a consciousness had no foreshadowing before this point in time. While it´s appereances were limited, towards whenever it was required to bail out the Strawhats. This is bad writing, regardless of medium or genre. Even as a dumb teenager I reckognized that.
The cheesieness isn´t much of a problem here. I adore cheese if it´s the right kind. The problem I have with Merry, is convenience. If you are a dedicated writer, you don´t wrap up your conflicts with, "and then his magical unicorn with wings came flying in and saved them all". This is conceptually the same scenario and people cheered for this bullshit, because it´s One Piece. The ship repairing itself was a mundane task. It didn´t have crucial plot significance and was suffient enough to work solely as proper foreshadowing for the events to come . Saving Chopper on the other hand, eliminated an otherwise unsolveable threat. This is the distinction, between just cheesy writing and a deus ex machina. None of the Strawhats, were in range to, save their teammate. Yes, techincally you could consider anyone coming out of the blue and saving the two guys from drowning a deus ex machina. Nonetheless, it´s a pre-established possibility, for a human to do it and nonsensical to introduce magical powers into your story, to enable their safety.
Afterwards nothing happens with Merry , untill Skypea is over. I do understand, that the story was preoccupied, with other plotlines, that it needed to solve. Yet Oda bothered to show us what was happening physically with the ship occasionally, wjhile ignoring it´s already introduced sentience,just to introduce during Water 7, that it´s done for and repeat that notion throughout the whole arc. Igniting the nonsensical fight between Luffy and Ussop, I never felt anything for. Ussop was always my most disliked Strawhat and I considered him a liability to the crew for the majority of the journey up to this point. When he was bawling his eyes out crying about how worthless he was , I stood right there with him agreeing. That´s personal preference though, but you can´t critique anything without adding some of it. Even disregarding the fact that Ussop wasn´t my favorite character, the resulting conflict was nonsensical. It never made sense for him to challenge Luffy and everyone in- and outside the universe knew that. Pointing out the futility of his proposition. Furthermore his dumb as shit excuse of "he knows his tactics" to highten the tension, holds no value, because Ussop barely ever witnessed Luffy fight. If memory serves me right, he only witnessed him beating Arlong, every other fight Luffy was in, Ussop was occupied with doing something else, which makes their fght even more bullshit. Then he predictably loses, still behaves like a nagging bitch and leaves the crew in a melodramadic manner that is shattered immediately afterwards, because all of the artifically manufactured conflict that was build up gets overshadowed by Robin´s story arc and her rescue. All that needles circlejerk, kickstarted by the ship! Who had two appereances at this point! Of which one, was the enablement, of a character´s death copout.
Later, we are shown retroactively, how the ship was severly important, to all of them off screen and why Ussop is so attached to it, although they never showed any of that affection, before Oda said so. That´s bad writing. It´s the same problem I have with Naruto´s and Sasuke´s friendship. There is a specific moment I love about it and that is when Sasuke inteds to sacrifice himself to prevent Gaara from killing Naruto and Sakura because he started slowly to view them as family. Great character moment, on the same quality as the only other great moment that depicts their friendship. The situation where Sasuke takes the hit for Naruto against Haku. From there on out their friendship is pretty much horseshit. Kishimoto, had to repediately, retroactively, insert flashbacks into his story too depict why the friendship was so important to Naruto and retcon their pasts to make their bond significant enough for the audience to care.
Same thing here. We are retroactively told that Merry was always "suuuuper important" to the SH crew. This is the material bad comedy shows use as a frequent skit. Like Mr. Poopy Butthole from Rick & Morty, although his usage specifically is ingenious. TL: DR. Do not flesh out your characters relationships retroactively, period. If you have to do that you poorly planned out your future storyarcs, which given the medium is understandable. But I digress.
Merry´s story isn´t over yet and we are told through exposition what exactly the phenomenon that Ussop witnessed was, which is dumb. Because it operates on the power of friendship, or love.Pick your poison. We learn that in the world of One Piece Inanimate objects, or rather specifically only ships, magically develop souls, when they are treated well by their owners. The only other known exeption to this rul,e are swords, who achieve their souls through unspecified means, apparently. So which is it? If the rules aren´t explained, there are no rules, there is no limit to them, it´s make-believe.
The equivalent of a children´s game where one asshole friend keeps making up the rules to suit himself as the game continues untill he wins. Either you knew such a kid growing up or you were that asshole kid and no one wanted to play with you. after a while. So now, thanks to Franky, we know that sometimes ships can have souls. But surprise, surprise, we only know of Merry having one and it only operates when Oda needs it´s magical powers to write his characters out of the corners he put them in.
Merry drifts out to sea and magically appears to save the Strawhats after their epic showdown on Ennies Lobby, where all the monumental events where going down. Again, more convenient bullshit from Oda. Merry avoiding the Aqua Laguna through magic shields, navigating itself through the storm, not getting attacked by seakings and making a miles long journey, although being torn apart by basicly everyone. It works because deus ex machina. When a million better solutions where available. The Strawhats could just have stolen a Marine ship to escape, or a confiscated pirate ship the Franky family rips apart, since Merry was done for anyway and the Sunny would replace her. but no, bullshit it was. Afterwards they had to have a tearful funeral for a character that had no screentime, was only introduced to die and worst of all "WASN T A LIVING BEING TO BEGIN WITH!"
This was the final nail in the coffin. That was the last pile of bullshit regarding Merry that broke the camel's back. I was told that they would have that tearful goodbye and I´ll admit seeing the characters you like crying can get you teary eyed, till you realize why they do it and call them out on their retardation.
At this point I didn´t even recognize the ship talking. My brain was actively trying to blend the events out and forgett as fast a possible about it. Thankfully I had more volumes at the time and could move on, trying to forgett one of the worst, dumbest parts within the entire story.
I´m with Zorro on that.

Ps: I encourage everone to argue against my opinion, It probably won´t change, but disagreeing is what´s interesting about discussion, instead of sucking each other off.
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The first instance, where the ship´s "soul" was introduced, was when Oda used it´s deus ex machina nature, to save Chopper and Gan Fall, from drowning. This situation they were in would have meant certain death, otherwise. Literally on the introduction of the ship´s sentience, he used this new concept to get one of his characters out of danger. Then we are given a further hint towards it´s formerly only implied existance, when it repairs itself and only Ussop witnesses the event, to foreshadow the future conflict. The foreshadowing in itself was fine, the saving of Chopper on the other hand was bullshit.
The existance of the Going Merry developing a consciousness had no foreshadowing before this point in time. While it´s appereances were limited, towards whenever it was required to bail out the Strawhats. This is bad writing, regardless of medium or genre. Even as a dumb teenager I reckognized that.

[...]
The problem I have with Merry, is convenience. If you are a dedicated writer, you don´t wrap up your conflicts with, "and then his magical unicorn with wings came flying in and saved them all". This is conceptually the same scenario and people cheered for this bullshit, because it´s One Piece. The ship repairing itself was a mundane task. It didn´t have crucial plot significance and was suffient enough to work solely as proper foreshadowing for the events to come . Saving Chopper on the other hand, eliminated an otherwise unsolveable threat. This is the distinction, between just cheesy writing and a deus ex machina. None of the Strawhats, were in range to, save their teammate. Yes, techincally you could consider anyone coming out of the blue and saving the two guys from drowning a deus ex machina. Nonetheless, it´s a pre-established possibility, for a human to do it and nonsensical to introduce magical powers into your story, to enable their safety.

But this was the beginning moment, Going Merry didn't appear to save Gan Fall and Chopper, Chopper and Gan Fall fell so that Merry could save them. Literary speaking. It wasn't to write Gan Fall and Chopper out of a problem, Gan Fall and Chopper were put into a problem to write Going Merry in.
The cheesieness isn´t much of a problem here. I adore cheese if it´s the right kind.

I think there's a bit of a limit here.

Afterwards nothing happens with Merry , untill Skypea is over. I do understand, that the story was preoccupied, with other plotlines, that it needed to solve.

Robin-chaaaan

Even disregarding the fact that Ussop wasn´t my favorite character, the resulting conflict was nonsensical. It never made sense for him to challenge Luffy and everyone in- and outside the universe knew that. Pointing out the futility of his proposition.

It was supposed to be though. He challenged him because of his own inferiority complex. He felt he himself was useless. Had nothing to do with the ship, in the end. It was just an excuse.

Then he predictably loses, still behaves like a nagging bitch and leaves the crew in a melodramadic manner


And still, I don't see the problem with that.

that is shattered immediately afterwards, because all of the artifically manufactured conflict that was build up gets overshadowed by Robin´s story arc and her rescue.

It's just standard typical intercrew, interdemon conflict that's eventually overcome later. So that the once pathetic, sad and in the dumps character can do something triumphant. Happens all the time with One Piece. Like with Sanji now.

All that needles circlejerk, kickstarted by the ship! Who had two appereances at this point! Of which one, was the enablement, of a character´s death copout.

Usopp was attached to the shp, but what he felt was his incompetence was the important part. Not the ship itself. It was kinda just that silly little plotline that's there so that Franky could make a new one.


Later, we are shown retroactively, how the ship was severly important, to all of them off screen and why Ussop is so attached to it, although they never showed any of that affection, before Oda said so. That´s bad writing.



Same thing here. We are retroactively told that Merry was always "suuuuper important" to the SH crew. This is the material bad comedy shows use as a frequent skit.



The ship was never important, it's just gag worthy and meant to be slightly sentimental because we were getting a new one with our new shipwright, Iceburg Kaku Franky. The ship was faux-important. I don't think it was ever *meant* to be that sentimental. Usopp's inferiority complex, Franky past and Robin's past were the important parts of the arc. Merry was sorta just a sentiment gag. It was never really important. It was just there to tie all the plot threads together. At least, that's what I got out of it.


Merry´s story isn´t over yet and we are told through exposition what exactly the phenomenon that Ussop witnessed was, which is dumb. Because it operates on the power of friendship, or love.Pick your poison. We learn that in the world of One Piece Inanimate objects, or rather specifically only ships, magically develop souls, when they are treated well by their owners. The only other known exeption to this rul,e are swords, who achieve their souls through unspecified means, apparently. So which is it? If the rules aren´t explained, there are no rules, there is no limit to them, it´s make-believe.

I agree to the extent that seeing the ship repair itself and then getting descript lore of it was really really pushing it. Even it talking was pushing it. It's enough to just bask in the absurdity of a bunch of crewmates crying over a burning ship. We spent hundreds of episodes and tens of volumes with, that's just enough for something so incredibly dumb to be slightly sentimental. A burning, talking ship with a soul is going a little too far.
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ゴロゴロゴロ ゴロゴロゴロ ゴロゴロゴロ ゴロゴロゴロ ゴゴゴゴゴゴ ゴゴゴゴゴゴ ゴゴゴゴゴゴ
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@ ashfrliebert So, without repeating every argument again. Your general theme is that Merry wasn´t ever important to begin with, so there´s no point in getting angry at it.

See, I´m aware of the fact that Oda didn´t put much thought into the conception of that plotline, even calling it out in some of his SBS, if memory serves me right.
I think he mentioned how he received letters from people saying how they cried over Merry, which was surprising to him.
I´m all for the support of content creators as fans and if he happens to ever travel to europe for a convetion I´ll try to see him and thank him personally for his work. But I am not rewarding him for lazyness. Authors in general should be encouraged to improve their writing regardless of the quality their illustrations have. I wanted to walk out of One Piece Film Gold when they introduced the corny believe in yourself plotline with the giant fan. Albeit the Movie looking gorgeous, most of the time.

The Merry was a macguffin, therefore it could be excused, for it´s nonsensical writing. If it was left alone. The problem with this specific Macguffin though, is it´s presentation. Not only did it open up a plethora of plotholes and if we don´t view them as such, they amount too horrible inconsistent, crucial to the story, writing, but it also attempted to make the audience care about said Macguffin´s death, by making the main characters, we are supposed to identify with, care deeply about it. In a character driven narrative like that of One Piece. this is the metaphorical equivalent, of Oda shitting on a plate and saying to us, the audience, "you´ll eat it anyway!". Dragon Ball got away with alot of bullshit like this consistently, but Dragon ball started off as a gag Manga! Where even the concept of death was meaningless. Technically nothing in Dragon Ball ever hold any weight and it can be viewed for the ridiculous premise alone. as dumb fun. One Piece tries to convey ideals and morals and handles the weight of loss adequately, when it actually occurs. It´s counterintuitive to it´s cause, if horrible writing decisions like Merry becoming alive, just to die are introduced to it´s premise.

TL:DR. If you never cared about a character and only introduced him to initiate a conflict. DO NOT MAKE YOUR MAIN CAST CRY LIKE BITCHES TO MOURN HIS DEATH! Either you are a big fat liar, or a hypocrite.
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My favorite part is how the siblings did not care that they were going to even die, and how Judge started crying. This is how you raised them, you can't expect them to care if they or even if you die.
I never thought that I would like Bege as much as I do, can't wait to see him fight with Katakuri, if that is going to happen in the next chapter.
lol the part with Brook was hilarious.
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I never knew the "Going Merry" funeral scene triggered some people the was it did, that's kind of hilarious to me lol.
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I never knew the "Going Merry" funeral scene triggered some people the was it did, that's kind of hilarious to me lol.


It´s not about being triggering in itself. It´s just a bad writing moment. I can´t even say, that it bothered me in an anger inducing manner, as a series that you usually like can be forgiven for it. I was just rolling my eyes throughout the whole premise. Nonetheless the plotline was horrendous and it felt cringy.
What´s actively infuriating, is people giving other series shit, massively bitching about their flaws and praising such horseshit. Calling out plotarmor and asspulls, but when Pell does it, they excuse it with awakened Zoan and other or FTL speed.

I´m just sick of hypocrisi in general, I haven´t encountered it in any other mainstream Anime/Manga fanbase, personally. Ofc all of them have them have those people, I vaguely remember Narutards bashing on Bleachfans a decade ago, but I wasn´t into the fandoms at the time. I just enjoyed the series for myself and spoke only with reallife friends about the developments and our shared predictions. Neither am I´m losing sleep over any of this, but writing "enraged" paragraphs that are way more angrily written than I actually am, because I enioy cursing and offensive language on the internet is a fun thing to do.

For example to put it into perspective. I´m completely fine with Rogerbase and his One Piece fanboying because he´s a one sided and inoffensive. I see that he´s nice cheery guy that wants to share with the world how great One Piece is. That´s just boring to me, who would rather have a more analytical approach towards a discussion about One Piec. On the other hand i think guys like Forneverworld or King of Lightning are piece of shit reviewers. One for having the audacity to call himself a reviewer, the other for being a hypocritical waste of space and fat. I´m aware of the truth that no one is obligated to anything, but the purpose of discussion is to do it. Joining a forum for "discussion" to just rate a chapter call it awesome because it´s One Piece leave without reasoning isn´t discussion that´s creating statistics and fanboying.

If it was good give reasons. If you think Merry was well written go ahead, explain why. I explained why I think it´s horsehit. My best friends favorite death scene in fiction, is that of the character of Dom in Gears of War 3, because it plays Madworld during his heroic sacrifice and he played with the character by his side for 3 games. I didn´t agree, but I could understand where he was coming from when he explained his opinion to me. I wanted to do the same in detail with Merry and explain my annoyance at people who praise that scene as a tearjerker.
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Isterio said:
sman3579 said:
I never knew the "Going Merry" funeral scene triggered some people the was it did, that's kind of hilarious to me lol.


It´s not about being triggering in itself. It´s just a bad writing moment. I can´t even say that it bothered me in an anger inducing manner as a series that you usually like can be forgiven for it. Nonetheless the plotline was horrendous and it felt cringy.
What´s actively infuriating is people giving other series shit massively bitching about their flaws and praising this horseshit.


I mean I personally didn't really find anything wrong with the scene. It didn't make me cry or that particularly sad or anything, but I wouldn't say it was terrible either. I felt like it was fitting enough, they did kind of set up the whole, "ships that filled love have souls" thing, so at least they sort of mentally prepared us and gave us at least some sort of explanation to it. IDK, that's just me though.
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I mean I personally didn't really find anything wrong with the scene. It didn't make me cry or that particularly sad or anything, but I wouldn't say it was terrible either. I felt like it was fitting enough, they did kind of set up the whole, "ships that filled love have souls" thing, so at least they sort of mentally prepared us and gave us at least some sort of explanation to it. IDK, that's just me though.


We all can accept different levels of dumb, your suspension of disbelief doesn´t have to be the same as mine. For me it was just too much. I kept internally headbutting the table, thinking this is dumb and manipalitve. Oda, you cannot make me feel sorry, for a motherfucking ship, whose soul you introduced last arc. I cringed constantly, but I cannot force you to agree with me. If you enjoy the power of friendshi,p more power to you. I for myself I´m stingy with my explanations and expect a series that´s supposed to be well written to at least be able to make sense in universe. Which is why I could never get into Harry Potter, although I was gifted the first book at the appropriate age.
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Finally was able to log into this site, again! Was never able to see the button to let me connect to Google for many weeks straight.

So far, I've honestly have been disappointed with how this arc has went recently. Sanji himself forgiving Pudding for all that she had tried to do and went full-fledged on rescuing her (actually, it suddenly looked like that he never even hated what she tried to do in the first place!), Pudding suddenly changing her mind in killing Sanji from that moment in the wedding despite her mind fully being set on all that she has been doing and is currently being rescued (I can't see how she won't be turned to being good now, which is disappointing), how the Germa 66 have been hyped up and portrayed here, how Big Mom has been rather disappointing recently, how disappointing her children and subordinates have been despite often hyped as being oh-so powerful or useful, how the SH have behaved often despite that this is supposed to be dealing with a Yonko (a hyped up GIANT league of powerful people) such as how Luffy almost messed up their plans due to purposely oversleeping, and yet despite all of this they are still completely fine with little to no issues, etc.

As usual, I'm just enjoying how this whole ride has been going along all this time regardless, but there have been many gripes I've been finding with this arc so far that I just couldn't ignore, along with the Dressrosa arc, and the one before that, aaaand the one before that. It's just a shame.
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What a lot of people are calling plot induced stupidity i think are actually character flaws. One thing that isn't either is why Capone is trying to assassinate Big Mom at the Tea Party. It was VERY CLEARLY established that the conditions to assassinate her ONLY appear there, as there would be no other chance to break the photo and render her vulnerable.
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Judge deserves it, his cries are pathetic.
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Compared To The Last Couple Episodes This One Was AMAZING. I Finally Felt That The Story Was Picking Up And It Left Me Excited For The Next Week!


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Well, that future sight certainly worked against him.




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Judge crying like a bitch.
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Brook broke the photo!!!
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