| ok feel free to write howeve long ideas you have here :D |
evil-samaMar 29, 2010 9:38 AM
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| so, the story so far (as my memories say) : an organization is doing experiments on teens, something happens and the teens escape, the scientists/whatever try to hunt them down and the teens try to survive. there was an idea with some twins born with contrast. so every characte is uniqe, but not too supernatural |
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| so we are in present? And what about the surroundings? Just because the teens try to survive. They have any weapon or something? It is just hide-and-seek or the opponents have fight? |
| well maybe present and a bit future (such experiments can't happen in the past) they were once normal people but cuz of the experiments ended up with supernatural powers, like high-speed, intelligemce, flexibility, surviving without air (my siggestions :D) dunno about weapons, I think we should keep it more simple I think they should have fights as well. at first not very big ones, with few casualties but there will bea bigger one. actually I suggest the teens fight the scientists because they want to be normal again |
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| So. a mystery left behind by their ancestor around the 1700 century. but story takes place in 2033. antagonist= organizations happens to be bringing out human experiments and happens that the materials are teens? |
| surviving withouut air *.* coooooooool:D i thinking about the reason of the experiments. Trying to make a super army or anything? Is there a war? |
| maybe they are trying to make super humans who will be better than robots (a different organization is making robots) and the scientists make super humans and robots who will fight against each other. but the sp. humans don't agree to that and want to be normal *ok that was a lame idea, lazy to think :D |
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| it is cool but cyan said he/she (DUNNO O.O") don't want any mechaXD |
| well ok. the teens r fighting to get back to normal. actually the teens are the ones who escaped before there mind gets taken over by the scientists and the scientists will fight using the humans they already control *lamer idea |
evil-samaMar 29, 2010 8:20 AM
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| the teens need to take hostage the scientist/scientists because they're want to become normal again. Am I right? So it is a little war between the opponents:) so I think the kids should find a command post to hide etc. And the twins should fight too, you said that they are opposite. |
| :| but wanting to be humans are a bit typical. the ones that wants to have power to fight like being half yoma and half human or vampires and such are always the antagonist :| it't doesn't have to be test experiments all the way you know? |
| maybe one of the twins is one of the teens who want to become normal because he was able to escape with the others but the other twin couldn't escape and the scientist control him/her? (are they male or female ._.) |
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| MALE AND FEMALE?:D and we could make a fan fiction about it:DxD |
| maybe :D so I suggest the boy twin is with the escaped teens and the girl is being controlled. but at some point she breaks free from the control because of her strong love for her twin when she sees him in a fight *ideas getting worse and worse |
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| oh, romanceXD |
| well I meant love as siblings, but if u want it could be romance :D |
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| i don't want to, it's just reminds me the angels sanctuaryXD |
| I'm on cp. 6 of AS :D so *back to topic* at some point she breaks free from the mind control because she sees her twin for the first time in years in a battle (maybe the scientists kept her locked somewhere during that time) and she gets back her memories of him. they have been together since they were born, so their love (as siblings, NOT romance) is really strong *bad writer, crappy ideas, not getting anywhere, my plot until now seems cliche and stupid :D |
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| well i think we r getting there:] just a bit of narrowing down.. btw they could have lost their memories. well im off to bed now, hope that i will dream of something useful:3 |
| ok, see you tomorrow hopefully the new day will give us better ideas. actually it's still day here :D so, waiting for comments on the current ideas and new ones :] |
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| haha, have a nice day:] nice meetin ya |
| same here :} |
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| no, i REALLY don't want romance!XD so... Why don't the scientist doing something with the girl to kill the twin boy? I think the leader of the teens is the boy... The scientist should take experiments in the girl, and let she out to bring the boy or kill him. And there could be a big fight between the twins the boy don't want to fight with his sister, but the girl become crazy because of the experiment and bloodthirsty, i think then the girl can gets back her memories. Sorry for my english^^"' this is crappy isn't it?XD |
| see ya later:D |
| btw we have to add DOLLARS somewhere, right? RIGHT?! :D or is it just a random story. maybe the teens end up joining DOLLARS for their own safety and because they are little in numbers or sth. so maybe the twin boy was the most succesful in the experiments ad that's why the scientists want to get him and the only way is using the girl. they control her so she doesn't have any feelings & memories so she becomes crazy and thrirsty for blood. but in a battle with her twin she gets back her memories. so during the battle (between teens and scientists) the twins end up talking and they decide the girl can pretend she is still under the scientists control and give inf. to the teens ans maybe plan to attack them. but the girl doesn't want to get her twin in danger so attacks them herself but the scientists end up killing her. somehow the twin brother learns that and dedicates all of his power on vengeance for his twin sister's death |
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| woah i wanted to write the sameXD |
| realy :D we have similar thinking. or maybe we are one of the teens who have supernatural mind powers cuz of the experiments XD |
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| oh yeeeeeah:D wanna be my sister?XD |
| really?:D oh, that's great:D Thanks:D |
| so, back to the plot: an organization is doing experiments on teens, something happens and the teens escape, the scientists/whatever try to hunt them down and the teens try to survive. they were once normal people but cuz of the experiments ended up with supernatural powers, like high-speed, intelligemce, flexibility, surviving without air (my siggestions :D) the scientists control the minds of the teens they experiment on, but a group themw who escaped aren't controlled yet. among the teens there are two twins-a boy & girl. the boy is with the escapted teens, the girl- is being controlled. at some point she breaks free from the mind control because she sees her twin for the first time in years in a battle (maybe the scientists kept her locked somewhere during that time) and she gets back her memories of him. they have been together since they were born, so their love (as siblings, NOT romance) is really strong maybe the teens end up joining DOLLARS for their own safety and because they are little in numbers or sth. (not sure if this will be added) the twin boy was the most succesful in the experiments ad that's why the scientists want to get him and the only way is using the girl. they control her so she doesn't have any feelings & memories so she becomes crazy and thrirsty for blood. but in a battle with her twin she gets back her memories. so during the battle (between teens and scientists) the twins end up talking and they decide the girl can pretend she is still under the scientists control and give inf. to the teens ans maybe plan to attack them. but the girl doesn't want to get her twin in danger so attacks them herself but the scientists end up killing her. somehow the twin brother learns that and dedicates all of his power on vengeance for his twin sister's death |
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| i think it's good for 'start' the story:) |
| well I'm bad at writing so we should find someone else to give ideas D: anyway I'll start with the twins drawing :D well it's enough if we have a sketch of the charas thought nothings decided yet. it's just us both who agree till now :D we should wait for more opinions |
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| yes. I'm usually writing short novels and other things but in hungarianXD i'm glad because I can say a word in englishXD So, i hope we'll find somebody who can write it.:) |
| yes. well we stil need more opinions on the plot itself, the actual writing comes last :D we will go in more details and then write it |
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| i know.:) just i can't wait, i like this storyXD |
| m2. I'l have more fre time in 2 days cuz it's gonna be spring break here |
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| OK, i'll thinking about the continuation. I must write my homework, so, bye:) I hope tomorrow i can write something useful here. |
| ok, jya~ |
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| yes those are the very first OC we thought of. others will give ideas for other charas as well. btw, we have to add DOLLARS soon, right? :D I suggest we do sth around DOLLARS and Drrr! and Ikebukuro but we add our own characters too. the name IS DOLLARS fan novel after all XD |
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| maybe but there will be too much views for the different universe T^T so for now we have some kind of plot and 2 characters other suggestions on the plot? I doubt everyone just agrees as it is :D |
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| what if... i think we should write Celty's past. But that's just an idea... ^^" |
| how about the story begins when every drrr memebrs are dead or are really old...but only celty is alive:] young and beautiful? then we could continue something? |
| hm... think the beginning sounds good with the dollars. But i think the teens could be members too, they could join in the middle of the story. In this way they can protect themselves. Like Mikado in episode 11:P |
| hey guys sorry for being not active in the last week T__T i hope you´ll get a great idea for the plot. i´ll buy a wacom tablet soon and i´ll hope to draw some of the pictures you might need for the novel =) |
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