  thank you @CsillaLoli for this period's submission 屋上のバイバイ oneshot november 20th, 2007 b-Boy Phoenix Kyuugou Okujou no Bye-Bye Due October 4th at 6:00 PM CST |
FeezyWheezySep 13, 2023 8:54 AM
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| Not much to say about this one, tbh. Overall an okay read, but I doubt I'm gonna remember much about it a month from now. |
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| This didn't seem like too much of a BL story. It was sad tho. The feelings of someone connecting a group together and then disappearing Man it hit my heartstrings. Will write more tommorow One shots get 2 reads from me |
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| I didnt remember entirely this oneshot when I nominated I just saw that I gave it a 10. I re-read it and its still a 10. A oneshot cant do too much maybe thats why I can give them a higher score. Despite being a oneshot it is full of feels and regret and hope. I liked it, you could see the characters struggle and altough I dont like love triangles, the girl wasnt annoying. I think it did the best it could. |
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Totally agree with this. Don't really have much else to add but that I enjoy the characters and the relationship dynamics quite a bit. It was surprisingly not suffocating in its heaviness which is a big plus. 7/10 |
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| I liked it very much, I think the author has done a great job of telling such a delicate story in such a short amount of time. Obviously, the characters weren't so great and the pretext of the story was not the most original, but it did a great job with the limited number of pages available. Said this, if it was developed in 6 or 7 chapters it would have been an even more beautiful story. And I loved the art style! Overall, for me, it's a 7.5/10, rounded up because It's rare I can find a one-shot that can move me. |
| Triangle - 5/10 Didn't really like or dislike or it (mixed feelings) |
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| Story was mediocre. Would have benefited from a bit more characterization |
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| I can't imagine confessing to my crush when my best friend just died. But at least there was a happy ending for the couple and I liked the art style. So 6.5/10 |
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*Rages comment: Guys, if you havent read any of their works check out Night Head Genesis, Gakuen Heaven, or Tenshi no Hitsugi. Like they are all classic early 2000 shounen-ai yaoi works.* |
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