Alkimia said:mkzxwing said:Art's good, but the plot/writing... Dear lord, might as well write "I got op and got everything with no effort" and be done with it
Fr lol wouldn't it have been more interesting to maybe show Yuuya work towards getting in shape in that new world over the break, instead of him transforming quite literally over night? Like idk that's the main problem for me atm, because that's basically why he's getting all this attention now. Suddenly everyone wants to get closer to him, and I can't help but feel like things would've gone very differently if he didn't have this new perfect body. It's just so... Ugh lol I can't. Suddenly everything is perfect for this MC with no effort
Overall, I guess this episode was alright? I liked the OP, though the main highlight of the episode for me at least was probably Yuuya making friends, but that's probably it really. The whole plot seems just kinda shallow to me.
Not sure if I'm looking forward to the next episode either. Our MC just saved a girl in the forest who was on the brink of death, and now she'll probably follow him for the rest of her life. I think I will stick around for the next episode at least before I decide to drop this but not sure if I like where this is heading
I will say though, someone gave me a funny idea, though I doubt it'll actually happen. I think it'd be funny if Yuuya's brother and sister become like the Team Rocket of this show lol
DarknessReality said:This is a good first 2 episodes. I really like the fact that he doesnt have a 180 in confidence right away just cause he's handsome now. It took the realistic approach of him still being shy and reserved.
Oh yeah definitely. While I don't like the instant transformation he got, and I think it would've been maybe more interesting or satisfying if it was a bit slower and not over night, I do like how he's basically still, well Yuuya. His body changed, but his confidence and self-esteem (at least I think that's what it is? lol) are still the same. It's not an instant fix which I do like, but idk I'm not too interested in this so far, and depending how I feel after the next episode, I may end up dropping, but who knows. We'll see, but I'm not too excited for the next one, especially after that last scene. Pretty much the exact same thing that happened in the modern world is going to happen in this new world isn't it? That girl (who I'm assuming is a princess or something because ofc), is going to look for him, and probably get him to join the royal guard or something. Calling it now lol
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