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Oct 31, 2008 4:49 PM
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This topic is to share poems or songs that you might have writen about how you feel! you dont have to share them because i know that sometimes they can be your private thing but this is if you want to =]
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Oct 31, 2008 5:09 PM
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I wrote this a long time ago... and I posted it in different times, but...

Essence of nothing
Touches of loneliness
Emotions are harmful...
Rather than less
Never and ever
It takes everything from me
Taking care, careless
Yelling in a dream
絶対大丈夫だよ

Oct 31, 2008 5:53 PM
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thats REALLY deep iwakura!!!
i cant write NEARLY that good!
Oct 31, 2008 5:55 PM
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thanks.... I am not english so I rarely write poetry like this,
good you like it ^^
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Oct 31, 2008 6:20 PM
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wow that was really good
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oh i didnt know that well its really good!
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絶対大丈夫だよ

Nov 30, 2008 4:07 AM
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My will, my hope, my soul…
Everything was covered by a stole
My nightmares, my fears, my pains…
Are drowning into my veins.

My corpse will stay here
Standing still, enclosed by fear
No one will see, no one will care…
Despite all, all love is too rare
絶対大丈夫だよ

Jan 8, 2009 6:19 PM
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I was bored so i wrote this

A empty life with no meaning
A mindless being
living for those around you
Loneliness fills your life
a shadow of doubt about yourself
a second thought hiding in darkness
running from all life you are dead inside
you have no meaning and you die
Your feelings are of pain and sorrow
But yet you try staying strong
No one knows how you feel
no one cares about your life
but don't worry it will all end soon
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Jan 8, 2009 6:30 PM

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Here is mine.. :3

It is in Honor of Gaara- sama... But I kinda wrote it when I was little down.. :D

''The Sandman''

Deep inside the shadows I live,
is there something I can give?
When my life is a lie,
I observe how you'll die.
Am I bad, am I good?
I'm just misunderstood.

If you step on my way,
you will not see another day.
The way which I kill is nice and swift
my Sand is just a gift.
I can feel the Demon inside,
when I open my eyes wide.

I'm the Sandman,
I can bring you a dream,
but it's not what it seem.
Do you want a Dream,
you'll have to decide.
but you know, it's a suicide.

The darkness is my home
I will never leave you alone
So cold this darkness feels
like the air when she sleeps....

That's it.. :D
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Crawling in my bed
While harmful dreams spread
I try to handle with the pain
With I am tied in by a chain

Should I shed tears
Or should I scream
For the sake of those endless fears
That are more than they seem

My feelings lead to madness
My eyes are lifeless
And my words are whispers
Lost in the crowd
So much… so unbearably loud.

I still crawling in bed
Alone, scared…miserable
Trying to not be absorbed
To the insanity
Fighting to be able
To overcome this melancholy
絶対大丈夫だよ

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